Hi People! Just curious do reviews going
'hello
miss cherry
your
story was not very good I didn't enjoy it at all I wish u would
rite about me I'm a drugged lunatic who hates psychology
' really bug you cause they don't with me. To whom ever wrote
this I have one thing to say, if you did not like my story then why
did you read it? Even if it was the first two chapters of the curse
of having brothers and sister. I think I know what put you off and it
might've been the kissing part, but others liked it so, blah. You
are a coward if you wrote anonymously because no I would not hunt you
down and reply to you via email, I would have commented you via
story. You have a problem with my stories don't read them, it was
your own stupidity for choosing it in the first place, if you are
Turtle I swear to good I'll hunt you down at school. But you
probably aren't I'd be careful unknown reviewer because a lot of
people that read my stories might hunt you down, I like criticism a
lot mind you, but expect an explosion after a hard day or week. I do
not write stories about drugged lunatics unless they are rapist in my
stories, I hate psychology as well even though I don't take the
subject but I find it extremely boring and that is why I'm going to
be a Pharmacist or Marine Biologist when I am older. Luv you!
Now that I have got that out of my system, I'll tell you about my day, I have another project for Biology an essay to write during class which will be marked out of everyone in my year level, a test for Alternative Sport and a test for Personal Health and Fitness, I think I have more tests but I don't know when. I've got family problems I have to deal with but other than that my life is pretty normal and average. My friends are stupid as usual and I just had two bottles of Pepsi.
Disclaimer: I do not own Crystal, Cristina, Sayuki or Maria. Crystal belongs to Chrono4747, Sayuki belongs to Phoenix of Blackfire and Maria belongs to MyStIc BlAcK PhOeNix. I can't remember who Cristina belongs to because my reviewer has not reviewed.
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Chapter three: He's back
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Mirage starred at the letter in disbelief, they were going to use her ideas for advertising beyblades, her first real assignment. Usually she just had to create the story boards for the commercial and make the slogan, but this time they were going to use her ideas, "congratulations, this is sort of like a promotion right?" Cristina asked taking a sip of her drink. Cristina had brown wavy shoulder length hair than had blue streaks in it, she was slender and always wore baggy clothes, she was very much a skater.
"I don't know," Mirage replied shoving the letter in her pocket, "so you guys have taken me out of the comfort of my own home at eleven in the morning where I was still asleep and now drowsy, why?" she asked her four best friends. Cristina, Sayuki, Crystal and Tyrone who happened to be Crystals long and I mean long time boyfriend, everyone was wondering when the blonde haired man was going to pop the question. Tyrone was a tall handsome blonde man with blue eyes; he was a photographer and owned a photo shop. Crystal and Tyrone had been dating since they were sixteen.
"You needed fun time so we're bringing you to the mall to buy some stuff and after that we can go to the amusement park," Crystal replied happily holding onto Tyrone's hand.
"But we hate shopping?" Mirage replied frowning, "we tend to try and stay out of the mall as often as we can," she looked at the tall building and slumped, "you said fun time," she moaned.
"Hey the mall ain't built for just shopping, there's food and candy in there," Tyrone nodded his head pointing to the building, "we can just walk around and annoy your brothers and sisters who will show up with their friends," he added.
"This is one of her lazy days," Sayuki said blankly, "she can't be bothered doing anything," she yawned and glared at Crystal, "why'd you drag me along?" she asked.
"You know why," Cristina hissed in her ear, "now lets go because times a wastin'" she dragged Sayuki into the mall while Tyrone and Crystal tired to drag Mirage.
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"You aren't going to pass me this time," Ashley said laughing as she drove her car around the corner in the game 'Need for Speed Underground' beside her was Shawn who was some what winning.
"I just did," Shawn said smiling, he leaned over to the ten year old and gave her a noogie, "you play well," he kissed her on the temple and got up, "but Mirage said we had to do our homework, I allowed you guys to play on the play station now we have some stuff to do," he watched the twins walk out of the room and smiled.
Shawn was the monkey in the family but he wouldn't change a thing, Nina was the arrogant, Keith the cool one, Mirage was the one full of wisdom, Dan was the smart one, Jack and Butch were trouble markers, Bonnie and Clyde were gossipers, Johanna the singer or the rising star, Mary- Kate and Ashley the optimists and Jo and Joe were adorable. He may have a lot of siblings but it just made things more fun.
"Did you get them to do their homework?" Jack asked walking into the lounge with a basket ball in his hand, Shawn nodded, "great well I've got practice, Butch is coming home round about now from hockey practice, Bonnie and Clyde are making dinner and Mirage will be home soon," Jack ruffled up his little brothers hair and that girl from your class is coming over about now to try not to make out in front of the others," Jack smirked while he shoved on his runners.
Shawn blushed and punched the brown haired boy on the arm, "she's not coming for another half hour," he mumbled, "I'm going for a climb," he walked up to his room which happened to be Keith's old room, Keith moved out but did come and visit when he wasn't doing something with soccer. His room was pretty average and was filled with stacks of poster most of them from when Keith inhabited the area. A single bed was in the corner and a desk next to it, it was pretty much empty unless you want to include all the stuff on the floor and handing off the chair. Behind his door were a few bungee cords and harnesses that he used for abseiling and mountain climbing, the brown haired boys all time favorite sport. "Hi," a feminine voice said behind him, Shawn jumped and dropped the equipment, "sorry I didn't mean to scare you," the purple haired girl walked into the room and helped him pick up he stuff.
"Kim you're early," Shawn said looking at her after they finished. Kim was the same age as him and had long purple hair that was layered; she had amber eyes.
"Sorry but Ray had to go somewhere and dropped me off early," she replied looking around the room, "nice room, I hope I didn't interrupt anything," she traced the car poster with her fingers.
"Nothing I was actually planning on climbing onto the roof but I guess we can do the project now," he looked around the room and frowned, "sorry it's a bit messy," he motioned to all the clothes on the floor, "we lost a few animals in here so if you hear a frog don't worry it won't get out," he stepped over a jacket and rollerblades, while Kim snickered.
"I like messy rooms, it creates personality," she replied stepping over the stuff.
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Mirage walked into the house a few hours later with all her friends behind her, she looked around everything seemed normal, and she knew the busy schedules of some of them, "guys we're going to the amusement park you want to come?" she called through the house.
"Sure."
"Yeah"
"Why?"
"Not why you idiot, when?" Mirage could hear Butch's voice and could imagine the punch she gave to Clyde.
"I don't have a clue why, Crystal and the others just want to go and I'm inviting you," Mirage replied waiting by the stairs.
"But I've got a project to finish," Shawn said coming down the stairs.
"I'll write you a note," Mirage said, "with words this time," she added. The last time she had to write a note she coded it to see how smart the teachers were. All you had to do was use the numbers and swap them with letters.
"Can Kim come as well," Clyde asked.
"Whatever floats your boat," Mirage walked into the kitchen and saw dinner ready, "but first lets eat, tell your girlfriend to come down at well," she called out.
"She is not my girlfriend!" he yelled.
"You can never get bored with this family," Cristina said to Sayuki who nodded her head.
"What I want to know I how does she keep up with their lives?"
"She's got a file on each of us somewhere, it has our most important dates on it and what's happening to us, and it also has our secrets," Butch sat down at the table and helped Jo cut up his steak.
"Really it's like a little diary on our lives instead of hers," Jack added cutting up Joe's steak.
"Do know if she's got a diary?" Tyrone asked leaning over, "cause I need something to use against her," he mumbled. Crystal shook her head and started eating.
"We tried looking but we already know she doesn't have a diary, the hidden cameras around the house would show you if she did," Jack replied.
"Do you really have hidden cameras?" the blonde man asked.
"They don't work anymore," Butch answered, "be wonderful if they did," she said.
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"Let the fun begin," Crystal said happily as she looked at the amusement park, "Tyrone lets go on the Ferris wheel," she pleaded holding onto his arm.
"Why? So we can make out? We do enough of that already at home hon," he smirked and put his arm around her waist leading her towards the round ride.
"You think he'll do it tonight?" Cristina asked curiously watching the two twenty two year olds leave.
Mirage nodded her head and turned around seeing she was only with Cristina and Sayuki, "you thinking what I'm thinking," she said.
"That the brand new rollercoaster is just waiting for us," Sayuki said smiling.
They smirked and looked at each other, "last one there's a rotten egg!" Cristina giggled, starting to sprint off. They were all wearing comfortable clothes so nothing made it difficult to get anywhere, apart of the crowd.
"Uff," Mirage groaned as she was knocked to the ground, "sorry," she mumbled looking up at the person she bumped into, "wasn't watching where I was going…" she trailed off and her mouth dropped open surprised, "Kai?" she choked out.
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I am so mean! I just left you in a giant cliffhanger! So what did you think? And please review. Major chapter the next one. Today was fun I guess because I got to be with my friends, but my younger friend rode off without telling his parents where so it was my job to go look for him. Now I've got to go because I have to have dinner. Cya. Luv from me.
Oh, you hate your job? Why didn't you say so? There's a support group for that. It's called EVERYBODY, and they meet at the bar.
