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Disclaimer: I DO NOT OWN LEGEND OF LEGAIA AND ANYTHING CONNECTED TO IT. SIMPLE AND PLAIN
Gala looked around and observed the surroundings. In the distance he could see Conkram, which once in a while he could smell since the Seru was decaying. There was something in the air other than the stench of death. Gala could sense tension and a dark presence, what the dark presence was he did not know.

"Over here" shouted one of the soren, I think I found something

Everyone approached what had been found, it was a mass of bloody fabric. One of them turned it around and all of them gasped in horror. It was the body of a person with it's head chopped off by what they assumed was a monster.

The soren took the body and they started handing out doors of wind. "I'm staying here for a while, go ahead I'll catch up later" Gala said as he took the door of wind given to him. The soren glowed and they were gone and Gala was alone.

Gala had sensed something and it was his duty as a biron monk to protect the world so he had stayed behind to try to locate the presence. It was a dark presence, where exactly it was coming from he couldn't tell. So he decided to start walking toward Conkram. He was halfway there when he stopped, he sensed someone following him.

Suddenly a hooded figure wielding a blade appeared from behind a tree and started to run towards Gala. Gala parried the blade as it slashed with his axe. The figure almost fell back from the force of the block, but he was also quick. He quickly recovered his balance and ran toward Gala and kicked him in the chest. Gala was able to block him with his hands but he was still forced down. "Who was this guy?" Gala thought.

Local Bar, Jeremi

The music in the bar was lively as usual, and everyone was happy because they were preparing for a wedding. However in one corner there sat a man slowly drinking his drink, he was wearing a dark traveling cloak over warrior clothes. His heavy gauntlets stood out since he did not wear any armor. His black hair was standing and he was wearing dark sunglasses.

Some of the people were talking about him. He looked strangely out of place in the bar, though as he sipped his drink one could clearly sense his confidence. The girls in the corner were staring at the handsome and mysterious youth and were giggling at him, trying to catch his attention.

Suddenly the doors burst open and in walked a child about 3 years of age accompanied by no other than Noa. They were talking happily and they sat down.

"Can I get a juice sister" Cort asked

"Of course, sit here while I order okay" Noa replied

Noa walked over to the bartender and she passed the cloaked man. As she did she felt something, like a cold wave had passed her. She looked at the cloaked man when he suddenly stood up left.

As the man left the bar, she suddenly felt like a wave of relief had flooded her. At that instant she knew something was wrong she chased after the man. When she got out the man was nowhere in sight

"Something is up, I should go to Octam for advice" She said to herself

Meanwhile in Conkram the deadly battle between Gala and the hooded figure still ensued.

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