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"Who the hell are you and what do you want?" Gala asked as he ducked yet another well aimed slash

The figure suddenly stopped and laughed as he began to take off his hood.

"Gala! It's you! Sorry I didn't notice you with the new hair style"

"Vahn! We almost did each other back there. Yah I had it shaved for a ceremony and it just started growing back." Gala said as he touched his hair which was now very short.

"So Gala what are you doing here anyway?" Vahn asked.

"I was here searching for a Soren we found him alright. Dead. That was when I sensed something. A presence in the area but I just couldn't figure out what it was. So I was going to Conkram when I met you. What about you why are you here Vahn?"

"Same here I sensed a presence and my instincts told me to come here. I just arrived. If both of us felt the presence then something must be up. Something bad." As Vahn said that lightning flashed and the clouds started to gather. "We should get out of here before the rains start to fall."

Octam Underground, Hari monuments

"Cort you're goint to stay here while I'm away. This is my friend Dinira who will take care of you. Don't give her trouble since she's a busy person. She's one of the prophets here."

"Okay sis"

Noa had met Dinara two years ago when she was just starting out to be prophet. Ever since they had become good friends. "Dinara thanks for taking care of my brother"

"Don't sweat it Noa, you're one of the Ra-seru heroes. It's the least we could do for you. Anyway you say you're going to Conkram because you felt a presence?"

"Not just an ordinary presence Dinara, something evil, something tells me I'll find answeres in Conkram"

"And what about that guy you saw in Jeremi?" Dinara asked as she started to sweep the monuments. "Do you suspect he has something to do with this whole presence?"

"I think so. Something about him just gave me the creeps Dinara" Noa said as she looked up from the spot where she was praying"

Then the monuments glowed. "What's happening?" Dinara and Noa both asked in shock. A mysterious glow started to exude from the monuments and a voice was heard. "Noa, it is me Hari, I am using my powers to talk to you. You must get to Conkram. There you will find your friends" the voice said in a strangely hollow way.

"You mean Gala and Vahn?"

"Yes, the answers to this evil presence will make it self clearer when you get there" Then the light vanished.

"Noa, I guess this settles it you must go to Conkram!"

"Yes, I'll leave right now!" Noa started to run to the elevator connecting Conkram with the upper world when suddenly three Gilliums appeared out of nowhere.

"Noa, watch out!" Dinara shouted.

The first Gizam lunged and knocked Noa down. The second Gillium attacked and would have hit Noa if Dinara hadn't stepped in and whacked the Gillium with her staff. "Get up Noa, we must fight." Dinara exclaimed.

"Where did these things come from anyway and how did they get in here?" Noa asked as she got up.

"I don't know all I know is we must kill these things before they do damage." Dinara said as she took a fighting stance.

"Right, here goes!" Noa ran toward the last Gizam. "TEMPEST BREAK!" TheGillium fell back but started to get up when it was hit in the head by Dinara's staff and it disappeared.

"Look out Dinara!"

"The second Gillium had charged electricity and had launched it towards Dinara. The bolt hit her and she crumpled to the ground.

"I'm sorry Noa!"

"Dinara!" I need to get her a phoenix down, fast, she thought. Noa started to go to Dinara but the Gilliums blocked her. "Take this! MIRACLE ARTS!" Noa delivered a barrage of arts on one of the Gizams and killed it. However, when she turned around the other Viguro attacked her and threw her to the ground.

-WHACK- Someone had hit the Viguro with Dinara's staff. But when Noa turned around Dinara was still out cold. "Who?" She leaned over the Viguro to see who was holding the staff.

"Cort! No!"

"Take the boy! Leave the girl. It's him I want"

Noa turned around just in time to see a guy. "That's the guy from the bar in Jeremi!"

TheGillium swooped down on a screaming Cort and started to go back to the man in the cloak.

Noa stood up and ran toward the Viguro. "TEMPEST BREAK!" TheGillium fell and disappeared leaving behind a shocked Cort. Noa turned around just in time to see the man in the cloak disappear into the caves

"We will meet again Ra-Seru hero!"

"Come back here coward!" screamed Noa as she ran after the man.

"Sis! Dinara needs help!" shouted Cort after her.

"Almost forgot"

Noa ran to check on the Dinara and Cort. Dinara soon woke up with the help of a Phoenix Down

"Noa, I heard everything. They were after the boy. I'm sorry but if they attack again I won't be able to protect him. I can't take him in. Is there someone else who could take him in?" Dinara asked weakly

Noa thought for a while. "I'm not really sure, but it would have to be someone who knows how to fight, closer to Karisto and can take care of children." "I can't think of anyone else" Noasaid after a while. "Who can possibly look after Cort with that guy trying to steal him from me"

Then an idea suddenly struck her, "Steal! That's it! Cara!"

CONKRAM

"Gala this place smells like a dump!"

"I know Vahn but that feeling led us here, there must be something"

"I sure hope so it's a pretty exhausting climb"

"Vahn! Look!" Gala pointed at something.

"A Genesis Tree!"

Hope you like it. It's longer than the others and more in depth. The next one will be about focus more on the seru world. Please Review.