DON'T FLAME ME… CONSTRUCTIONAL CRITQUING ONLY!
Okay so I got one flame… And the person doesn't know how to spell 'sausage' so anyway I'll leave it up and you can hunt them down for me.
NOTE: I know that I haven't updated ALL summer… But I had work and now I'm getting over a virus… But anyway, you'll feel special cuz I'm updating this DOUBLE! I know that I've veered off from the real Ryoki and his mom's personalities from the manga (I just got vol. 9!) but I mean this is how he's gonna change… But he'll change back soon enough… Once Hatsumi move's in and engaged and shit! Cuz then he'll be the controlling husband and that will be HELL!
"Hatsumi!" Shinogu shouted as he saw his beloved sister fall to the ground. He didn't know what to do, so he picked her up and ran into the living room. "Mom Hatsumi has fainted!" Shinogu shouted.
"Leave her be." Mrs. Narita said. "She's just pregnant. She'll be leaving soon enough."
"What do you mean by 'she'll be leaving soon enough?"
"She's going to keep it, so it's no use trying to talk her out of it. I'm not going to have my daughter disgrace this family!"
"You know what you sound like mother… Just like Mrs. Tachibana!" Shinogu said as he turned around and walked out. "I'll take Hatsumi upstairs to some people that most likely will care about their grandchild!"
Mariko was the one who opened the door when Shinogu was frantically banging on it! "Oh my! What's wrong?" She asked as she quickly ushered him and Hatsumi in. "She passed out in front of our door. I tried to reason with my mother but she's being unreasonable." Shinogu explained as Ryoki and Mrs. Tachibana rushed into the living room.
"Of all the Narita's I thought your mother was more reasonable. This is crazy. I may be stubborn and strict, but when it comes to something as important as my Ryoki's wellbeing then I'll push it to the side." Mrs. Tachibana said as she sniffed and patted her hair.
"Mother what do you think is wrong with her?" Ryoki asked.
"Exhaustion. I was that way when I was carrying you Ryoki dear. Now if you'd excuse me I've got some calls to make."
In the study, Mrs. Tachibana was punching the Narita's number in. She waited one ring, then two, and then on the third someone picked up. "Hello may I please speak to Mrs. Narita?"
"She's speaking."
"This is Mrs. Tachibana. I'm calling in regard of your daughter. I hear that you won't take any of this pregnancy. I know that nowadays it's unheard of children having babies, but this is my flesh and blood too, and I will not sit here and let this child be shunned."
"Mrs. Tachibana, I've had enough with your family. I've had to keep my head up high and now this is going to send my family down hill on the respect and family opinion. I am no longer going to talk to my daughter."
"Now this is something I'm very shocked. I thought you were a more rational woman. Yes it will change the outlook on my family, but wouldn't it make you look worse for shunning your pregnant daughter?" With that last word, Mrs. Tachibana hung up the phone.
She had tried her hardest to raise her son in the best sort of light. Her family had been cold and now that she saw the situation she understood that she had been doing the same thing to her dear Ryoki. She'd been thinking of nothing but herself and her popularity. Now that she was going to be a grandmother it was time that she unlocked the safe to her heart and melt the ice surrounding it.
Sighing she leaned her head on her hands and thought how she was going to deal with this. She was going to have to inform her husband. She knew that their marriage was over, but out of respect they stayed together for Ryoki's sake. She had always known about his affair with Miho and she had trapped herself into a corner and shut herself from true love and happiness. It was now a time for changes!
A/N: How was that everyone? Now I've got a reason for why Mrs. Tachibana is being nicer. And I have a deeper reason for it later. Like why she's supporting this. She was once like Hatsumi and she doesn't want to see it happen again. So you can try and figure it out. But with Shinogu and maybe Azusa, will Ryoki be able to keep the fuse unlit or will he blow up? Read and Review. REVIEWS ARE IMPORTANT!
I love you! Don't forget to check out my new fic on Hatsumi and Shinogu. And don't flame please. Someone already did that and calls it "the worst thing I've ever read so just give it up."
OMG if that person reports abuse and this account is terminated I'll be fucking pissed off! I'm not dealing w/ that shit again!
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Teri Baumer