This is my newest fic. So far it seems awesome and it promises to be fairly long, but it's awesome so please R&R. Skcitt From now on Drgn Prncss will be editing my fics so be sure to thank her in reviews cause she's part of the reason it's so fluent. Want proof? Check out my other fic The Spirit of Raven LakeThe War of the Fireballs.
Atto panted heavily. He had narrowly missed the shimmering blade. He didn't know how long he could do this. He had to end it soon. If only he had the right opening. Kantor stared at Atto. His pointy ears dripping sweat. Atto's best friend raised his sword and took a charge at Atto. Atto swept to the right and cut Kantor's chest with his own blade. Kantor fell to the ground clutching his bleeding side. A Hylian nurse rushed up to him and with a flash of light, healed his wound.
Kantor sat up and jumped to his feet. "Nice shot, I didn't see that coming."
"Well, I was waiting for the right opening." Replied Atto.
"That's enough for today." Atto and Kantor's teacher walked out into the ring. His name was Rhiyahd. "You two are dismissed." Atto and Kantor dropped their swords and walked to the bathhouse. The bathhouse was a small, domed building with a giant pool in it. It had soap, towels, and the necessities.
"Nice practice." Said Kantor
"Yeah, I liked that one strike you threw earlier." Replied Atto
"Yeah, that was a good one, but you were just amazing." Said Kantor
"Well, I try." Said Atto jokingly. They both removed their drenched garments and stepped into the water.
"Ah, this feels nice." Said Atto. He picked up a soap bar and was about to wash himself when he saw a girl walking past the window. She was Princess Zelda. Her hair, strung back, looked amazingly beautiful. She had a face that looked so beautiful Atto actually blinked and looked at her again to see if he was seeing right.
"Watcha looking at?" Asked Kantor because he had noticed Atto had dropped the soap bar. Kantor looked out the window and smiled.
"Yep, an extreme eye-catcher. She's most definitely beautiful but she's also the princess of Hyrule. What are you thinking?" Kantor knocked his fist on Atto's head, but he still stayed frozen.
"Man, she is WAY out of your league. Hello… Atto? You must not have your head on right." Kantor sighed and got back to washing up. Atto watched Zelda walk away chatting with her personal guard. Finally, he picked the soap bar back up and finished cleaning up.
Soooo… What did ya think? I like it. I hope you did too. Skcitt