Devil on the Doorstep
Hiya guys! Here I am, fresh back from my weekend break, complete with a gorgeousmoonstone, garnet and silver necklace… look out for a story about that, because it's given me a dead good idea! So yeah… And I still need songs. I got one from Winter, and I do have remote ideas, but I need more. It must have three good lines, because I need to quote them. And it must have a good title, because if it's called something weird, then it won't fit in particularly well with the story, now will it? So cast your minds and have a think!
Devil on the Doorstep; Chapter II: Hello
"So, Kai, is it good to be home?" Max bounded into their living area, which had recently acquired two sofas.
"No." Kai grabbed an energy drink and slammed the fridge door.
"Aw, come on, we're only trying to be nice!" Tyson sat down on one of the sofas and Ray dragged Kai onto the other one.
"I don't do 'nice'." Kai snapped, balling his hands into fists. He winced as some of the burnt skin caught. "I'm going to train!" He called as he walked out the door.
"You aren't supposed to do anything strenuous!" Ray ran after him.
"Newsflash: I don't care." Kai pulled his scarf closer around his body, shuddering in the early Japanese mists. Ray noticed he avoided the sunnier area, where a large patch of blood marred the beauty. Crimson eyes glanced at it nervously before pulling Dranzer out and beginning to train.
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Don't try to fix me, I'm not broken…
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"This is mad!" Bryan growled, pulling his Abbey cloak over his lavender hair. Tala nodded his agreement. "How the hell am I going to get to Japan?"
"Simple, say you're a Hiwatari. Charge it all to Kai." Bryan nodded, seemingly appeased with the answer.
"Hang about! What about my looks? I look nothing like Kai!"
"Hence the grey hair dye. Take off that ridiculous cloak!" Bryan bent over the basin of water and Kasi rubbed in the grey liquid-gel. She then hastily towel dried it and kissed the top of Bryan's head. Tala pulled out a blue pen and quickly shaded in four blue shark fins at the older boy's collarbone. Bryan pulled his hood on nervously and began to run down the tower steps, knocking into Boris.
"What the-" The older man growled. Bryan cursed under his breath and sprinted across the frozen tundra. He found the hole in the fence easy enough and wriggled through, for once glad of his Abbey training. He heard barking, and realised Boris had released the dogs. His breath was coming in gasps and his ribs were hurting. Suddenly, he hurtled forwards into the snow. Rolling over, he blinked as he was several large helicopters hovering above the Abbey. As he watched, small implements began to fall from them. He realised what they were. Bombs. One hit the canteen, two hit the main building and dungeons and one hit the tower.
"NO!" Bryan screamed, frozen tears on his face. "Please God! No!" He curled up, sobbing like a small child. It was only the barking of the dogs that spurred him onwards.
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Suddenly, I know I'm not sleeping…
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Seth screamed as the liquid came into contact with his face. Voltaire paused, a smile spread across his features.
"Now, my boy. Where is he?" Seth shook his head, tight lipped. "I can inflict more pain than this!" The older man snarled and slapped his son. Seth was thrown backwards by the force of the blow. He winced as it hit his burnt back.
"My lord!" Boris burst into the room. "Bryan's escaped!" Seth's heart leapt at the news.
"Run Bryan!" He gasped in pain. Voltaire looked like he was about to say something when the roof fell in.
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Hello, I'm still here, all that's left of yesterday…
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I didn't like this chapter at all, especially the Abbey bombings bit. I think I kept Kai in character (wow!) but nothing else really works. It looks like a five year old wrote this, and I think I'm rushing too far with the storyline. If anyone has any ideas, do not hesitate to tell me, because I'm not too sure what's going to happen!