Hello, it's another chapter, and I'll answer some of the reviews now. The reviews are bold and the answers are in bold & italics.
Ollie: Dude this is way way weird. That's all I have to say. Hmmm, can't really answer that one, don't know why I put it in here...
Jokergirl: Thank you you made Shindou's story just right. I loved it. But Shindou is grey with white fur. I don't care what happens to her but please don't kill her pleaze. udate soon. Sorry, I thought she had black and white fur, my mistake. Why would I kill her, I'm not that cruel, and besides I love Shindou!
blackicewolfie: YES! u put my character in there! yay! good job! erm...losing one and winning one, eh? well, caiman are basically crocidile/alligator things and um...wutever robin got bit by was probably a snake and... wait is one of the titans gonna die or something? winning or losing? i will take a crack at it...winning: i dunno... seems like anyone could lose... sorry! update soon! keep it up! Well, you didn't exactly take a crack at it, 'cause you didn't answer the question. Glad you liked your character, I love Jade, she's cool!
xenos:hm... nice fic all though still missing something, you know... more details... and so on so forth, nyhow improve it, a-rios. Sorry, I'll try to put in more details next time. Thanx for your review.
Swizz: Thanx, I'm improving gradually I think, if you want to read it, I've changed the entire ending of chapter 2 to make it better.
Sierra lobo: thanx also, your's and Swizz's reviews are helping a lot.
Please note:Swizz's & Sierra lobo's reviews are too long to put right now. I've changed since they put the reviews up. ¬
I like fiddling around and making faces in text.
Here's the story, hope you like it, Oh, by the way, I've got a new character, say hello to Shadow the panther, played by tofurlz. Let me just say tofurlz, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, you gave me a chance to save Raven. Oh, if anyone's wondering, Raven was the one losing the fight for her life. tofurlz saves her, all is explained in next chapter... tofurlz, I hope you like the friend I've given you.
Oh, I do not and have never owned the teen titans, I forget to put the disclaimer in...
Here we go!
Kitarto lost hope, and conciousness.
When she woke up, she immidiately sensed another panther in the entrance to the spacious cavern she was lying in.
"Ah, so you're awake, I'll call my friend, she'll want to see you," the panther said before Kitarto could talk. "My name's Shadow, by the way, what's your's?"
"Kitarto harkos, but call me Kitarto," Kitarto answered.
"Okey-dokey, I'll call my friend." Shadow said, before letting out a massive roar. Suddenly an ocelot appeared.
"Where'd you drag this in from Shadow?" The ocelot asked
Kitarto started growling, but as she tried to stand, her leg burst into pain. She cried out and fell back.
"You shouldn't move your leg, it's badly wounded."
"And I thought you said your friend would want to see me." Kitarto said gritting her teeth against the pain. She was trying to lighten the mood a bit, when Shadow put something on her wounded leg. The pain eased a bit, but still was noticeable.
"Kitarto!" A voice said from the entrance just as Sky bounced in, trailed by another jaguar. "Who are you?" Jade asked Shadow and the ocelot.
"I'm Shadow," Shadow said.
"And I'm Shingle" the ocelot said, just before Kitarto lost conciousness again...
"How far away from the river are we?" Sky asked.
"We'll be there soon, but meanwhile, I smell 2 panthers and another cat, I can't identify that smell, anyway, they're in a cave not far off, lets check it out." Jade answered.
So they set off in the direction of the cave. When they got there, Sky was surprised to see Kitarto lying on her side with her leg torn into ribbons.
"Kitarto!" She yelled and bounced in. Jade trailed after her.
"Who are you?" Jade asked the panther and the newly identified ocelot.
"I'm Shadow." The panther said.
"And I'm Shingle." The ocelot said.
Sky saw Kitarto lose conciousness, and became distressed.
"Will she be alright, what happened to her?" Sky's questions were seemingly endless and she asked more and more, none of the cats noticed the piercing gaze that bore down upon them until it was too late...
Silver was having a hard time handling Sierra, first she would jump for ages, then spin in circles until she got dizzy, then she flopped down on the grass and had a rest, then the cycle began all over again.
They travelled south, towards Ethiopia and Falcon, after about a day's steady running, they crossed out of Russia and into the south of Asia.
Falcon kept moving North, he knew his only hope was to reach Silver and Asia.
The poison was already at work, he was growing weaker, and he knew his only option soon would be to give up and die. But Falcon wasn't about to take the easy road out, he was stronger than that.
He reached Mongolia in about 2 days quick running, then weakness overtook him and he crashed down onto the floor, nearly defeated...
Vello pressed southwards with Shindou, he had to reach the girls before something horrible happened to them.
He'd had scary news, according to the birds, a panther was stalking a capybara, but when it pounced it miscalculated and fell into the river. It had disturbed 2 giant caimans, which promptly proceeded to tear it apart. He only hoped the birds were wrong...
Sorry about the really short parts, I've got to get most of this story up before Summer term hits home, and I won't use too much description, maybe describing the characters or something.