FMO: I'm BACK! I was on vacation for a while. Any who… I'm just gonna go ahead and get on with the chapter…(P.s. I bound and gagged the Narrator)
Chapter 10! YAY!
Iroh's POV
It was four p.m. before Zuko woke up; Marina had been annoying the crew waiting for Zuko to wake up so she could annoy him. I had been watching her that morning and afternoon to make sure she never got violent. So far all she did was poke, scream at and disrupt the crew the entire day. It was three o' clock. An hour before Zuko woke up and…
"A little girl such as you should respect the hard work of this crew!" A soldier yelled after being annoyed by Marina.
"A fucker such as you should respect the fact that I can blow up your brain with the power of my thoughts alone." Marina said smirking.
"I doubt it!" The man said on the verge of laughing.
"I would not be so sure of that. Marina has been known to kill, burn, blow up and do criminal things." I said taking a sip of tea.
"Ya see he knows not to mess with me because I do fucking murders and other crimes sometimes." Marina said grinning triumphantly.
"I know that the entire crew agrees with me, and would no doubt help me to teach you some manners!" The man yelled threateningly.
"Oh, I'm shaking in my fucking boots over here." She remarked sarcastically.
"I'm with him!" Another man shouted.
"Me too!" Another added.
It was not long before the entire crew was ready to attack her.
Marina grinned evilly. "Good, I feel like having a little fun today."
Marina glared at me to warn me not to interfere. So I didn't, even though I was a general, this girl was stronger than me and I did not want to get on her bad side.
She stood in her fighting position while the crew got into theirs. This would be interesting…
Four of the guards ran at her with fire balls in their hands. She smirked and threw her hands back, then brought them forward, a fireball forming in them. It grew in size until it turned into a giant dragon. The fire dragon raced forward and bit the four men, leaving them nasty burn marks and rendering them unconscious. The dragon flew back to Marina and came around her in a protective crescent shape. Marina lifted her hands to the sky and ten soldiers made of fire emerged from the ground. She put her hand forward and the soldiers ran forth. Not only burning everything in there path, but harming soldiers that where in their way. Half of the crew ran for cover like the pathetic whimps they where, the others stood their ground in pure bravado. Only to be hurt and burned.
Marina was having a very nice day…
Zuko's POV
I awoke at around four. Morning amnesia took me for a moment but then I remembered. I found something besides a mask in Marina's chest. I lifted up my mattress and searched for it. And there it was…
Marina's Diary
She would have to kill me for this but I didn't care! It would be fun while it lasted. Hey, maybe her mood swings would even work to my advantage this time. I opened it and began flipping through the pages. He stopped on one.
Dear Diary
I found out I was pregnant today and I am going to kill Zuko. I can't believe that fucker for getting me pregnant! He is such a little asshole! Don't ask me why I love him because I can't really tell you.
Love ME!
Ok. At least she loves me… Let's try the first page…
Dear Diary
I am seven today. My daddy gave me this diary as a present. He's a water bender and he's really kind. My daddy says he named me cuz my Mommy doesn't want me. She's a fire bender. I am happy with my daddy. Mommy was mean to me. She was always mean but Daddy loved her. Daddy loves me too. He says that when he first saw me when I was born, He loved me like he had known me forever. Well, that's all for today.
Love ME
That explains a lot… I skipped through the pages. I came to a page a few seconds latter that was wrinkled. It looked like water had been spilled on it. The text was smudged and hard to make out.
Dear Diry
Tody it has been a moth since I got yu. I have been hidein all day. Fire bendrs came to my vilace and killed a lot of pepl. They klled Daddy too, I miss him alredy. Mommy wa with the Fir benders and is looking for m. Daddy, befo he died, instuctd me to go hide. I have ben crying ever since. I loved Dddy very much but now hes gone. I will rite more later.
That was the last of the wet looking part of the page. The rest I could read clearly.
Mommy found me. She grabbed my wrist and made me come with her. She said that I had to come with her and I could never come back here. After I was put on the big boat they burned the village and left. I can't ever come back… But I swear I will make Mommy pay.
Love, ME
Wow, I didn't think that Marina ever cried before in her life… Well, I guess that might even crack someone as tough as Marina. I flipped to the next page.
Dear Diary
I am nine now. Sorry I could not write for a while. Mother made me come to the fire nation and live with her. I HATE HER! Some strange things happened today.
Love, ME
Okay… Next page.
I skipped to a page that had a familiar date on it…
Dear Diary
Zuko, was challenged by his on FATHER to a fire duel! It was outrageous! My god damned mother stood in the crowd near me and that son of a bitch, Zhao! We always pulled pranks on that BASTERD! Anyway, this is what happened. Zuko was badly burned on the face by his father…
Flashback
"ZUKO!" Marina yelled running to his side.
He lay on the ground with a bad burn mark on his eye. He was unconscious from the pain.
"Who is that?" The fire lord demanded.
"That is the water bender girl, Marina." A soldier said.
"Water bender? Well, it looks as though she is no threat here." He said.
Marina shook Zuko trying to wake him up.
"C'mon, wake up." She whispered franticly.
"You monster! How could you do such a thing to your own flesh and blood?" Marina yelled up at the man.
"Silence, girl." He commanded.
"UP YOURS FAT ASS!" She yelled in fury.
"Guards! Take this girl to the dungeon and keep her there until she learns respect!" The fire lord commanded.
Two soldiers came and grabbed her arms and lifted her to her feet.
"Let me GO!" She yelled in protest.
"What are you gonna do about it, little girl?" One of them said smugly.
They began to carry her off.
"Zuko!" She yelled fighting the soldiers grip.
She was too weak and they where able to hold her even though she resisted, kicked and fought.
Marina finally broke down and started screaming at the top of her lungs, SO hard her eyes squinted shut. The two soldiers standing next to her fell to the ground with blood leaking out the sides of there heads. Their brains had been blown up from the inside.
The crowd gasped.
She smirked evilly and turned to the Fire lord. A ball of fire emerged from her hand and she pushed it forward towards him. He blocked the attack.
"How?" He asked. "What are you?"
"I'm a little girl…" She said.
She picked the unconscious prince up and flew into the air, fire balls from the soldiers coming at her but she blocked it with a physic energy shield. She flew to the nearest medical center and brought Zuko in…
End flashback
… The doctors said the wound would leave a scar. I'm just glad he's ok.
Love, ME
I was shocked. I could not believe what actually happened after I got my scar… It was horrible. And Marina, what about her? I couldn't go on… Wait, yes I could…
This page was written in red ink…
Dear Diary
My mother killed my loving father. And I killed her; she was a fool to be so evil. Now I am evil because of her… She will burn in hell but that will not bring father back and it won't undo my life. I wish I had never been born. I would have never had to live such a terrible life, and Zuko would not have a scar to remind him… I taught him my father's kindness and he spoke out because of it. I am a thief, murderer, disgrace, and an abomination. My parents should have had an abortion before I even walked this earth. I will not hold it against my father. But my mother, I wish I could have done more to her to make her feel my pain.
That page was the worst of all. It tore me up inside. She has to be tough to survive this. I felt like thronging up and I only read this. Marina is a strong, beautiful, multi-talented girl, she deserves better than this. Marina is unbelievable, she's… Incredible to do this and move on… I know I never could have. I was banished from my country and scarred on the outside. Now I know I have NOTHING to complain about.
(FMO speaks… "Ok, yeah. I know it is boring, dramatic yadda yadda. But it will get better. I PROMISE! No flames or else you shall feel MARINA'S RATHE!" FMO has spoken…)
("P.s. I don't like constructive criticism that much either, IF YOU WANNA WRITE SOMETHING SOME WAY. YOU WRITE A STORY! Because, what I've noticed is that most of the people who write 'constructive' CRITISIUM don't have any stories. Why? Because If YOU like a story than YOU tell that person how to make it 'better'. Well here's an idea. Take your criticism, shove it up your ASS and slit your FUCKIN WRISTS!")
I was tired of reading these so he decided to skip to the most resent entry.
Dear Diary
Uh! I can't believe Zuko left me to the stupid fuckin music night all alone! Dammit! It was so boring! The worst part is: HE HASN'T FUCKING PROPOSED YET! I mean, is he going to show up with the avatar and an unmarried girlfriend holding his child? Uh, STUPID! He should REALLY propose, like, NOW!
Love, ME
I never though about that, what will happen when he shows up with his child and Marina? She was banished too so, does it even apply to her? UHG! HEADACHE!
Wait, if they get married they could BOTH come home. He's the prince so he would be fire lord, she would be fire lady. He would get his nation, a child and Marina. But, would she WANT to come back. Well, she doesn't exactly have the most amiable memories of that place, but with her as Lady she could execute people who displeased her and maybe even a little 'hands on' help in that. Infect, she could kill many and it would be perfectly legal. She would have a ball as fire lady. And we could stop this damn war! I'm sure she, apparently being a water bender, wouldn't want the nation of her father to be killed by her mother's nation. It would be a… Repetitive situation for her.
That was it; they would marry and be happy.
Just then, who would walk in but Marina, who immediately took note of the diary I held in my hands… I-was-SCREWD!
"First of all, thank you for what you did after I dueled my father. Second, I would love to marry you." I said.
"what?"
Authors mindless ramblings…
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