I wanna address a review I got about a paragraph from the 4th chapter. I wrote a line or two in the first person when the whole story is written in 3rd. Well, even though this IS my first fanfiction ever, I've written stories and short stories all in the 1st person(sadly, they have not been published yet, but they will be………….soon). So anyway, I've gotten used to writing that way but I wanted to do something new here so, if you see words that indicate 1st person view, well, lets just pretend its not there lol. No really, I'll fix them when I get the chance.
I wanna thnk Mandie2484 for spotting that.
side note: I've started on the next chap. and it'll be Endy's view, you'll see why he is the way he is and what he really wants from Serenity... :)
thnkx again for those who reviewed me!