WeissKreuz HaikuStyle Lover

by LoveyouHateyou

A cold morning, mist and clarity, the scent of beauty... Yohji and Aya, thoughts and longings meshing in silence. Another K. Jeez, I must have lost it.

WeissKreuz – HaikuStyle – Lover

Lover I (7+5+7) (Aya)

Morning mist. Cold Water. Clear
From the well outside.
His smile fills my eyes with light.

xxx

Lover II (5+7+5) (Yohji)

Rain pearls on roses.
Watching him bathing alone.
The scent of beauty.

xxx

Lover III (5+7+5) (Aya)

An empty bottle.
Sake spilled over red ink.
Unauspicious day.

xxx

Lover IV (5+7+5) (Yohji)

Lips smiling softly.
Turn of his body. Away.
I welcome the rain.

xxx

Satisfaction (5+7+5) (Aya)

A hard hand scraping
Crimson gouges down his flank.
Evening sky. Alone.

xxx

Here is the first version of 'Satisfaction' – not a haiku, though inspired by the terse form:

A hard hand scraping
down his flank.
Crimson gouges. Evening sky.
The hiss of satisfaction

He wakes alone.

xxx