Sqweee! Lookit, chapter 11 is done -points to page- I''m so happy!
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Odie could hear the sounds of a fight drifted into the school from the field, normally it would be dismissed for a common skirmish that occured between the jocks with their over-inflated egos, however he noticed the fact that Herry and Archie were missing. This caused him to worry. Come to think of it, that Harris guy is missing too. I better go tell Jay he thought before running through the corridors to find him, and maybe Neil if he ran into him.
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"Come on, if they're in trouble we've got to help." Jay stated when Odie told him the news of the three missing people.
As he said that, he was already taking off with Odie behind him. Neil stood momentarily, torn between the fact that he knew he should help and also the desire to just goof off. Sighing, he finally decided that it wasn't worth the speech he knew he'd get, and tore off down the hall.
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They reached outside in a matter of moments, Jay already had Xiphos out and was ready for a fight. Forrunately, there wasn't anything except a semi-concious Herry lying in the field.
"Are you okay? What happened?" Odie asked as he kneeled down next to him.
"He's got the girls. Me and Archie (A/N: yes I realise that it's impoper grammar, but it's Herry who's talking) were fighting him, but I don't know, Cronos made him super strong or something..." Herry said, Odie helping him to sit up. Jay was looking around trying to find where they had gone while Neil was kind of just standing there looking good.
"Who's working with Cronos?" Odie asked.
"Harris..."
"Did Archie have his PMR with him?" Jay asked suddenly, both Herry and Odie answered with a nod of confirmation. "Then maybe we can get a lock on their location like that.
"Good idea" Odie said, taking out his devices and seeing a red blip on the screen. "This way, I don't think we have any time to loose..."
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The four drove through the streets, Herry of course in the driver's seat as it was his truck. The red dot seemed to draw closer as they approached what appeared to be a abandoned warehouse.
"Stop here" Odie told Herry, taping his shoulder.
"Okay" and he stopped the vehicle quickly, causing it to skid to a halt. Jay had Xiphos ready in his hand in case there would be a fight, something which was very likely.
"Be careful you guys" Jay warned as they cautiously neared the building.
The scene was eerily quiet, not even the rustling of rats or a stray alley cat or two could be heard. Even the wind seemed non existant. Hushing the others up, the group went in through the front door. Nothing happened, there were still no signs of life. Odie took another look and saw the red dot would lead them to just a few doors down. Walking, the pairs of footsteps caused loud echoes to reverbrate throughout the building. Even their breathing seemed like heavy panting. Suddenly another pair of steps, only louder than theirs, was added. Turning around, Neil ducked just in time as a giant swung at him.
"Hey hey! Watch the hair" Neil said loudly.
"Odie, keep looking for the others."
"Whoa! That thing looked like it came out of nowhere!" Odie yelled as he backed away from the fight as instructed by Jay.
Jay charged at the giant with his blade held in both hands, slashing at it's arm. Moving quickly, the monster sustained no injuries, instead starting to go after Herry.
"You want a piece of me? Well come and get it!" he taunted, grabbing it's hand when it swung at him.
"Atlanta, Theresa, Archie? Where are you guys?"
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The newest chapter is up! I''m sorry it's kinda short and it looks like a rush job, but I wanted to get it up ASAP cuz it's been a while since I updated last. Never fear though! the next chapter will soon be up and it will be a lot better than this!
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Yay! Thanks to people who have been reviewing my story! It's you guys who make writing this story with all my wasted time (not that I'd be doing anything better with it anyways.), worth it. I love you all in a friendly way! Hehe! I really appreciate all the comments!