Okay, this is the fourth day in a row that I've posted a chapter! I seriously can't believe I'm writing so fast. (For me anyway) Hope you like it!
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For some reason, this chapter is a bit more…humorous…(or weird…whichever way you'd like to think)
Disclaimer: This story is fanfiction. The whole concept of fanfiction is to write a story based on something else that is owned by someone else. I do not own Danny Phantom, therefore I write fanfiction.
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Death's Castle
Ch.5
"Darn it!" the nurse screeched, and she promptly threw a temper tantrum more suited to kids under the age of ten. The crowd stared.
"Sorry," she apologized sheepishly, and they continued preceded to ram the door.
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"That's not going to hold much longer," He said to Sam, who had just locked the door. It was shuddering in its frame.
"Just tell me the risks,"
"There isn't enough time to explain, but there is a chance you could lose your mind or soul and never get them back."
She bit her lip, and she glance at her mother.
"Hurry," He prompted, his gaze directed at the door.
She took a deep breath and squared her shoulders, saying, "I'll do it."
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The nurse heard something snap in the doorknob, and the door slammed open.
"Yes!" she shouted, jumping up in the air. When she registered what she was seeing, however, her jubilee went right out the window, replaced by disbelieving shock.
A strange teenage looking thing was floating in front of Sam! The thing flung its hand toward the girl, somehow causing a bright flash that nearly blinded the nurse. When she could see again, the thing had disappeared, and Sam collapsed on the floor.
The nurse screamed…really loud.
A doctor in the crowd asked another "Is the sedative ready?"
"Yep, but weren't we preparing it for that other girl?"
The first doctor shrugged.
The screaming abruptly stopped and she was carried out of the room and set on the floor in the hall while two doctors entered the room and inspected Sam. The two doctors, who happened to be twins, stood back up and faced the crowd. One cleared his throat and began to speak, in an unfortunately whiny voice which would make any normal person cringe.
"We have determined that…"
"this unfortunate girl is…" the other spoke.
"in a coma…"
"much like her mother's."
"However, the girl…"
"Is stabilized."
They walked out of the room and joined the crowd, which had now turned to watch the nurse drowsily wake up.
"What happened?" the nurse questioned groggily as she sat up.
"You fainted after you looked into the room," an anonymous doctor lied.
"What did you see?" Another nurse asked curiously.
The nurse paled and said shakily, "T...There was…this thing…It was like a human…but its eyes…they glowed! And his hair was white…it did something to Sam and it disappeared!"
The crowd was astonished. Had Sam infected the nurse with her craziness? Or was it the truth? They weren't able to look into the room, but they had witnessed the flash of light. Maybe they were all going crazy?
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Swirls of green floated and danced in green tinted air, and barren purple land stretched as far as they eye could see. There was no sun, but the place itself glowed, giving an ethereal twilight. A hole appeared in the sky, a swirling portal, which a figure dropped out of and onto the ground below. It was the Reaper, with Sam's soul in his hand, in a form of bright condensed light.
He sighed in relief. 'That was close.'
He let the soul go and it hovered in the air, slowly transforming back into the appearance it had assumed on earth, but with no body this time…she was composed of pure spirit energy. Once she had transformed, she blinked wildly, trying to get rid of her disorientation.
He looked slightly surprised.
"What?"
"You're able to completely solidify," He answered, a puzzled look now on his face, "Most spirits can't for at least a year."
Now it was Sam's turn to look puzzled as she pointed behind him and asked, "Who's that?"
"Huh?" He asked while turning around.
"BEWARE!"
The Reaper raised an eyebrow.
"For I am…THE BOX GHOST!"
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Hee..heee…this chapter was so weird…oh well. It's a bit shorter too..
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