Knight 56: I'm glad you like this one better than 087.That one was not well written. This on is far more interesting.
Other guy: You will have to be more specific than that. Grammar is a large category.
This chapter has a mild torture scene in it. This one too, is short.
I jumped down in front of them again. I realized that I looked very much like an Elite in my armor. I must have been a strange looking figure to them indeed. I jumped at the other male, grabbed him and leaped to the top of the Library and began to kill him.
I believe I shall go into the torture scene. (As the reviews asked for, I think, action and description). And so, I took out my weapon and inflicted the pain necessary. I didn't have the right tools, but I made do with what I had. My weapon, and my sword. I first stared into his faceplate, a cold stare, I knew what this would do to him, it may have sent chills down his spine because I looked like an Elite from what I could tell by my reflection in his visor. I tied him down, I don't know what material it was, but it held him fast.
I first took up my sword, and drove it through his leg, so that there were two large holes in his leg, I then took waited until I could see Flood spores in the holes in his leg. I knew that this was burning him to the point that he could feel it, and it was taking everything he had to keep from screaming.I then cut the flesh off of his other leg and squeezed the bone until he gave a horrible shriek of pain. I again got face to face with him.
"I know the feeling", I said. I knew this startled him, and took away his concentration. So he cried out in pain once again. I heard the scream echo throughout the facility. I pulled off his helmet and put the tip of the sword above his head and I slowly moved it closer until I gouged his eyes out, burning them inside and out, the outside of them slid off, revealing theinner eye. He let out a scream of pain, I then took a bone from a dead Flood, cut the chest of his armor open, and stabbed him in the chest with it, the blood and spinal fluid sprayed the surrounding area. I then carved the name Duriel into the rest of his chest that remained. I looked upon my work with a cruel smile upon my face. I placed his body inside the shell that was his armor, and placed him and his makeshift coffin inside the entrance to the facility.
The next day I saw the Spartans reporting to the sarge. I was looking at them through the scope in my weapon. I saw them talking to him, and then he showed them the other male's body, with the leg becoming Flood, but you could still see inside the deep holes, his eyes were burned out, but his face still held that horrified look. And the bone was pierced through his chest, and his body was inside the armor. They looked concerned, and frightened, which pleased me very much. I laughed silently to myself as I pondered what had possessed me top do such a thing. I then remembered.
It was the fact that they were my enemy and I wanted them gone, if they would not leave, then I would force them too. I put the reticule of my weapons scope on the head of Mathew.
Should I kill or not? The reviews choose!