Welcome to my Final Destination story. Like most of the Final Destination 3 stories, mine takes place a year after the pile up. Kimberly and Officer Burk will probably come in later.
Okay…please enjoy:
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"Michelle, let's hurry up!" 17-year-old Hana Kent called out to her younger sister. "We still need to go to the Grocery store and the Movie rental place before we can go home"
"But I'm hungry" Michelle wined "There's a McDonalds over there. Can you please buy me something to eat?" Hana groaned.
"Fine she snapped "I'll buy you a small fries. Nothing else. And you better not complain to me ever again and If I'm late for Karly's house because of you, I will blame you."
"YAY, I love you Hana" Michelle shrieked, and run up to hug her sister.
"Ewwww, get off me" Hana said prying her sister's arms from around her waist. "Lets just hurry up"
Michelle immediately let go and started running towards McDonalds and bolted inside. Hana groaned and started jogging to catch her sister. The second she was through the doors, she was almost run over by two little boys chasing each other with toy guns.
"Woah, settle down" She told the kids, and looked around the crowded restaurant. "Michelle?"
"I'm over here Hana!" Her sister called from one of the lines "I got us a spot, and I've already picked out what I want. Get me a cheeseburger Happy Meal with-"
"Michelle you're 11" Hana interrupted "11-year-olds don't eat Happy Meals. Plus there's no way I'm buying a dead animal on a bun. Do you want to know how the kill the cows to make the hamburgers? They hang them up by their feet-"
"I know Hana, you've told me a million times" Michelle sighed "Fine, just get me some fries"
After waiting 10 minutes in line, Hana and her sister got to the cashier. They ordered the fries to go, so after they arrived, Hana brought her sister to the car.
"Sit and eat carefully" Hana told Michelle firmly "Spill anything in my car and I will murder you."
"Okay!" Michelle agreed reaching for the bag. She snatched it from Hana's hands and looked inside "Where's the ketchup?"
"How should I know" Hana replied starting up the car. She backed out of the parking lot and was soon on the road. "We're going to the movie store first to return Dodgeball, then we'll go get the snacks for your Guide's meeting, okay?" Michelle didn't seem to hear her.
"Found it!" She exclaimed reaching into the bag to pull out a small package of ketchup.
"Fuck" Hana muttered as the car in front of theirs screeched to a stop. Hana slammed on the breaks just in time, but both girls were thrown foreword a little, and Michelle screamed.
"What?" Hana asked frantically. She looked over at her sister who had red stuff dripping off her forehead. "What happened, are you bleeding?"
"No, it's ketchup" Michelle told her, looking for a napkin.
"How the hell do you get ketchup on your forehead?" Hana asked taking some napkins out of her pocket and handing them to her sister.
"I dunno" Her sister admitted
"Well there better not be any on the seat" Haa said sharply. She grabbed a french fry from her sister's bag, and took a bite out if it. She immediately after put the bitten fry back in the bag, and spit the half she had in her mouth out the window.
"What are you doing?" Michelle asked "Their so good!"
"Potatoes are good" Hana told her sister "Potatoes covered in 10 pounds of grease are not good"
"Not 10 pounds" Michelle objected.
"Close enough" Hana replied. They continued driving for about five more minutes until they reached the Video Plex.
"You coming, or staying in the car?" Hana asked her sister opening the door to get out.
"I'll come" Michelle replied opening her own door. Hana quickly grabbed the DVD and her purse before slamming the door shut. The two of the entered the store to find a huge number of people lined up at the one cash register.
"Shit" Hana whispered "Is today huge line day or something?"
"Can't you just drop off the movie in the box?" Michelle asked her sister
"I could, but I also want to rent The Village for tonight." Hana replied. The two of them walked to the New Release section on the store, where there was a whole wall of The Village. Hana grabbed one of the copies, and started back towards the register.
"Come on Michelle!" She called over her shoulder, and accidentally bumped into someone, who in turn, dropped the movie he was holding.
"Oh…Sorry" She told the person she had walked into. Hana leaned down and picked up the DVD he had dropped. It was called Robbed and had a picture of two men holding two giant guns. She handed it to the person who had dropped it, a boy with bleached blonde hair who looked about her age.
"Walk much?" he asked her rudely. She gave him a dirty look and responded with:
"You're mother."
After getting her sister, Hanna took her place in the check out line behind a man who looked in his mid 20s. He was wearing a pair of ripped jeans and sneakers, but carrying a briefcase. She stood there in line and looked around the video store.
"Excuse me" Hana looked over to see a young, nice looking couple trying to get through the line to the other side of the store.
"Oh, sorry" She said, and moved out of the way. They both headed towards the New Releases which was right behind the candy rack.
She heard a crash from the front of the line, and saw a motherly, overweight women kneeling on the ground, frantically trying to pick stuff up that had fallen out of her purse, which had just fell.
A tall, blonde teenager behind the women just rolled her eyes and didn't even offer to help the lady. The cashier, who looked just out of collage, couldn't come out from behind the counter, but waited patiently for the women to gather all her belongings.
It took three minutes for the lady to get everything back in her purse, as everyone waited in line. Michelle got bored of standing, so she wandered over to the candy display, as the rude teenage boy joined the line behind Hana.
"1. 80" The cashier told the women, as he opened the cash register. When the lady had finished paying for her rental, she started towards the exit as the cashier moved on to the next person in line.
Just as the lady reached the door and began to open it, she was shoved aside by two males in their early 30s who had just burst into the store. Both were wearing big, heavy jackets, from which they pulled out two, large, dangerous looking guns.
"Okay, EVERYBODY FREEZE" one of the yelled as they both pointed their guns around the room.
"Hana!" Michelle shrieked and began running towards her sister. One of the robbers quickly moved his gun to face Michelle, and fired three bullets in her direction.
"MICHELLE!" Hana screamed as she watched her sister fall to the ground, a bullet wound thought her forehead. A stray bullet from the gun had also hit the women who had just entered the store with her husband.
"NO, get back to where you were!" One of the robbers shouted, and pointed his gun at Hana, forcing her back into the line, as she started sobbing uncontrollably. The husband of the murdered women, and the lady who had dropped her purse, was also made, at gunpoint, to get into the line.
The other robber walked over to the cash register and immediately began demanding money from the cashier. The robber who had shot Michelle remained still with his gun pointed at the people against the counter. All the hostages stood motionless, not making eye contact with the man holding the gun.
Suddenly, the hostages heard more shots being fired, and everyone looked around to see who had fired them. Hana saw the robber who had went to get the money, and the cashier of the store, fall to the ground. A small hand gun, which the cashier had most likely pulled out from behind the counter, also fell.
"Sh!t!" The surviving robber exclaimed. He quickly snatched up the gun from his dead friend, and ran behind the counter to get the money himself. The man whose wife had just been killed dove to the floor and snatched up the gun the cashier had dropped.
"No, don't" The man with the briefcase whispered. He reached out and tried to pull the husband of the murdered women back, but he just ignored the advice.
Everyone watched as he stood up slowly with the gun pointed towards the cash register. At that moment, the robber was bent down behind the counter, so the grieving husband waited until the thief stood up again. Unfortunately for the hostages, when the man with the gun shot at the robber, he missed, and the bullet hit the wall.
Before the husband could fire another shot, the robber had grabbed his gun, and pulled the trigger. The husband of the women who had been killed fell to the ground immediately, dead. After the gun the dead man was holding fell to the ground, the thief focused his attention on the remaining hostages.
"Get Down!" The man with the briefcase yelled, as the robber began to fire countless bullets towards the remaining five. He quickly dropped to the ground and pulled Hana and the teenage boy down, out of the line of fire. Seconds later, the overweight women and the teenage girl fell to the ground. Both had been hit with at least five bullets.
Hana screamed as the teenage girl landed inches away from her, and her lifeless hand hit Hana's leg. She quickly rolled over onto her back, and away from the dead body, still screaming.
"Hey, hey, settle down" The man who was standing in front of her said, trying to get her to stop kicking. Him and the rude teenage boy were both sitting up watching as the robber slowly walked towards them. Hana immediately sat up to and watched the burglar come closer.
The teenage boy watched the robber point his gun at the three survivors on the floor. Before the thief could pull the trigger, he reached across the floor and snatched up the cashier's gun, and pointed it at the robber. Both of them began shooting at the same time. The robber fell to the ground, but was still conscious. He just had a bullet though his leg. The teen on the other hand, was dead.
With some difficulty, the robber stood up, leaning against the counter, but kept his gun pointed at Hana and the other survivor.
"Please don't" Hana begged the robber "Please, just get the money, leave us alone, please!"
The robber ignored Hana and fired a bullet into the man beside her. She screamed as he fell onto the ground. Hana instantly moved away from his dead body, but screamed again as her arm brushed against the corps of the teenage boy.
"Please!" Hana repeated as the robber moved closer towards her. He walked so close that she could have kicked him, if she hadn't been too scared. The robber then pointed the weapon right at Hana's face. He then smiled, and pulled the trigger.
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The end
No, it's not the end. Anyone who thought it was the end obviously isn't the brightest cookie in the shed (no offence) . Anyway, yah. Please review and I will love you forever. Thnx. :D
A special thanks goes out to the Thesaurus on Microsoft Word. Even though it doesn't seem like it, I used it many many times while writing this chapter.