Yah…..this is the next chapter. Please review it when you're done, and thanks to everyone who reviewed the last one. And to everyone who read the last chapter and didn't review, even if you didn't like it, please please review now!

To the person who said I could write the next sequel to the script, thanx! I wish I was that good, but I'm not tho! But thanks, that was really nice. :D

Also, to the person who said Hana should be more likeable, sorry, but I disagree. I mean, is it just me or is the main character in every movie/book/story always perfect. That bugs me, that's why Hana isn't. Plus my little sister's name is Hannah and shez kind of a btch. Plus, who's nice to their little sisters. Honestly.

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The blonde teenage girl, wife and Michelle all screamed as the shot rang out from next door. They heard screamed coming from the same place as the shots. Everyone who had stood up, even the mean husband jumped back down. They heard two more shots from the store next to the one they were in, and more screaming.

The cashier immediately got up on his knees and reached for the phone on the front counter. He grabbed it and began dialing as they heard another shot. Then a pause, then a scream, then another shot, then another shot.

"Hello….hello" The cashier whispered onto the phone. "Hi….Umm….there have been shots fired in the store next to ours. There being robbed. It's at the Strip Mall on 23rd Street. Yah…yah….it's called Dollar Value, a dollar store…..yah…okay…"

Just then, the two men who had tried to enter the video store ran past the big front window, holding a full bag of something, probably money. Everyone ducked back down, even though the robbers didn't even look at the Video Plex.

After that had left the customer's line of view, the man who had had the briefcase stood up and raced towards the door. He spent a second unlocking it before pulling it open quickly.

"What are you doing?" The women who came in with her husband asked frantically. He turned around and looked at her.

"I need to help those people" The man replied and dashed out the open door, and towards the store beside it.

The blonde teenage boy and the nice looking couple all jumped up and followed him outside. Hana remained on the ground crying, with her head in her hands. The teenager with the long blonde hair slowly stood up, followed by the motherly overweight lady, and then Michelle.

"Come on honey, get up" The motherly lady told Hana and reached out her hands. Hana looked up, tears running down her face. She reached out her hands and let the women help her up. The four girls left in the store slowly filed out and headed towards the dollar store beside it.

"There's no way I'm going in there" The blonde teenage girl said snottily. "It's all…bloody and gross"

"Well no ones asking you to" The motherly lady said sharply. They heard sirens coming in the distance but couldn't see any police cars yet. The four stood outside Dollar Value, the store that had been robbed.

Suddenly, the lady who had come into the store with her husband came running out of the dollar store with her hand over her mouth. She was followed slowly by her husband, the blonde teenage boy and the man who had had the briefcase, whose hands were covered in blood.

"Are they okay?" The motherly women asked. The man with the briefcase just shook his head.

They all stood there silently as the sirens grew closer. The cashier came out of his store about a minute later, and he didn't even have to ask the fate of the other store's customers.

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"Look, like I've told you, I had no knowledge of the robbers coming before they did!" the cashier exclaimed loudly to the officers interviewing him.

Soon after, a whole crew of police, ambulances and fire trucks arrived at the store. Everyone watched as lots of EMS workers carried almost a dozen bodies out of Dollar Value on stretchers. The officers then separated all the witnesses and interviewed them individually.

"If you didn't know then why did you lock the doors of your store" The cop asked.

"I didn't!" the cashier – James, protested. "It was that chick who was all freaking out about the robbers"

"Hana?" The officer put in.

"Yah" James agreed "She was the one who went and locked the doors….and…….saved our lives"

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"Like I just told you" the women who came in with her husband told the officer who was interviewing her "Nik- my husband and I were just renting a movie. I had no clue about anything happening with robbers, or the Dollar Store, or anything."

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"I was just getting a damn movie!" The rude teenager told the cop interviewing him sharply "I don't get why I'm being questioned here!"

"We just need to know what went on in the video store" The officer replied calmly "So Devon, you said that Hana started acting weird after she walked into you?"

"Yes" Devon sighed loudly "But I didn't do anything to her, and she didn't even walk into me that hard"

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"I saw it" Hana exclaimed hysterically "Like, I don't know. It was like, a vision, or a hallucination, or something. I really don't know"

"But you said you knew it was coming" The cop questioning her asked "How could you be so sure?"

"I don't know" Hana said quietly "I just….knew"

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"So, again, we'd like to thank you for your co-operation, and, we'll be in touch" The head officer finished. The cops had finally finished interviewing everyone who had been in the video store about half an hour after the ambulances left.

"So, we can go now" The teenage girl asked

"Yes Miss. Carter, you can go now" One of the officers told her

"Hey, you guys know what this is like" The guy with the briefcase started just as everyone began to leave. Everyone stopped walking, but no one answered so he continued.

"You guys have all heard of the Flight 180 thing two years ago right? The kid who knew the plane was going to blow up, so he got off and saved a couple of people's lives?"

"That was in the news" The overweight lady- Barbra put in "I mean, I remember reading about it a while ago"

"So what does that have to do with us?" Kali, the blonde teenage girl asked.

"So, that sounds a lot like what happened today." The guy with the briefcase, Clint, put in "Hana said she had a vision of the robbery. The kid two years ago had a vision of the plane crash. Hana's vision saved people. The kid two years ago saved people with his vision."

"Two years ago, that's not much of a connection" Nik said skeptically

"No, there was another one, last year" Barbra exclaimed suddenly "A huge pile up, and there were a whole wack of people on the on ramp who survived because one girl blocked it with her car"

"Again, so what" Kali asked. "So there are a bunch of physics in the world who save people. La De Da"

"I'm not done" Clint told her "In the papers; it said that everyone who survived the plane crash died afterwards, one by one."

"Same with the car crash" James put in "I remember seeing it on the news. Everyone who lived, died soon after"

"And this proves what?" Devon asked loudly

"It proves that if what you guys are saying is true, then we're all going to die" Lilly, Nik's wife said quietly.

"Wait" Michelle interrupted "Hana's not physic, she just had a bad feeling, right?"

"No, I saw it" Hana told everyone. "It was weird, but, I saw it"

"Well that settles it " Nik put in "We're all going to die" No one laughed and his wife punched him in the arm for that remark.

"Okay, I've heard enough to figure that you're all on crack" Kali said happily. She flipped her hair and began walking away "Have fun predicting your deaths!"

"She's right man" Devon said "I mean, how predictable is this little story. Everyone magically dying after being saved. Come on" With that, he too began away from their little circle.

Everyone else began scattering away from where they were all standing. Hana slowly put her hand on Michelle's shoulder and steered her across the Parking Lot, towards her car.

"Hey Hana, do you think this is real?" Michelle asked. She turned around and began walking backwards to face her sister"

"I…..I dunno" Hana answered. She looked down at the pavement as they both continued walking. "I mean, it kinda makes sense but" Hana looked up just in time to see a red blur out of the corner of her eye. Without thinking, she grabbed her sister's shirt and pulled her to the ground just as a red BMW speeded by, just where Michelle was walking.

"What!" Michelle asked loudly looking up at her sister

"Way to not watch the road retard!" Hana yelled at her sister. "You nearly got yourself squished!"

"Well excuse me" Michelle replied standing up. She angrily stomped to her sister's car as Hana followed slowly behind, wondering if a car almost killing her sister meant anything.

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Hooray for finally getting a chapter up after a million years of being lazy! Sorry for the last part, I know its kinda confusing and boring. Oo well. Anyway, for you're reading pleasure, here is a little list of all the people in this story, considering it might be a little confusing to get all these names at once:

Hana

Michelle

Overweight women- Barbra

Blonde teenage girl- Kali

Man with the briefcase- Clint

Wife- Lilly

Husband- Nick

Cashier- James

Rude teenager- Devon

Yah, so please review and I will totally love you:P Thanks.