Teen Halliwell

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Chapter12-relationship problems

Paige stretched herself out in the rather uncomfortable hospital bed and yawned as she woke up. She was going home today, she couldn't wait to get home to her own bed and some of Grams cooking, the hospital meals were yuck! She sat up in her bed as the nurse came in with a tray with her breakfast on it, setting it on the table at the bottom of Paige's bed.

"Morning, how are you today?" The nurse asked

"I'm fine, can't wait to get out of here," Paige smiled

"I wish I could get out of here too!" The nurse laughed opening the curtains.

It was a lovely day, sun beamed through the window, Paige looked out over San Francisco it was a great view.

Paige picked up her breakfast, a plate of cold porridge, an apple and began eating it. When she'd finished she got out of her bed carefully as her bones were still fragile and managed to dress herself for the day.

Paige looked at her watch it was only eleven o'clock, Grams said she would come at one. She flicked the TV on and watched it to pass the time.


Phoebe woke up and sat up in her bed, the sun blinded her as it shone through her window. Phoebe loved Saturdays as she could have her long lies, she looked at the clock it was eleven thirty. She went downstairs and sat at the kitchen table beside her sisters.

"Good morning my lovely sister," Prue said hugging Phoebe

"I know we're being sisters again but that's taking it a bit too far!" Piper grinned

The other too laughed

Grams came into the kitchen and picked up her keys of the counter.

"Morning girls, any plans today?" She said

"Morning, I don't know yet," They replied as Phoebe reached for the cheerios

"I'm off to pick up your sister from the hospital, I'll be back in a while," Grams said leaving the kitchen

"Bye," They called

"I'm glad Paige is coming home today," Phoebe said

"Me too, things have been weird around here lately without her," Prue said

Just then the phone rang, nobody moved.

"Go get it then," Phoebe ushered Piper

"No, you get it," Piper replied

"I'll get it then!" Prue laughed shaking her head as she picked up the phone

"So when are you gonna talk to Cole?" Piper asked spreading butter on her toast

"Uuuugh I don't know, it's too hard, I have no idea what I'm going to say," Phoebe replied

"I know, I suppose if you go out with Cole it'll break up your gang?" Piper said through a mouthful of toast

"I never thought about that," Phoebe buried her head in her hands "It's too complicated,"

"I don't know what I'm going to do about Dan and Leo," Piper said

"Well who do you like better?" Phoebe asked

"I can't pick," Piper said

"Just think about all the bad things about them and then all the good things," Phoebe said "Dan first."

"Okay then," Piper laughed, "Well, Dan's got a really bad temper and he always starts fights, also he acts like I'm his property," Piper said

"Well, what about Leo?" Phoebe asked

"Em…………… I don't know he's a really nice guy," Piper tried to find something

"Good things now," Phoebe said

"Okay, well Dan's cute, got a nice car and well that's it really," Piper said

"There's your answer then," Phoebe said

"What?" Piper asked

"You can't say a bad word about Leo and you only like Dan because he's got money and he's cute," Phoebe said

"Yeah that's true, when did you become so smart?" Piper smiled

"I've always been," Phoebe laughed

Prue came back in with an unhappy look on her face.

"What's wrong?" Piper asked

"That was the garage, they've got the car there," Prue said sitting down

"And…" Phoebe asked

"The car is completely wrecked and cannot be repaired," Prue said

"Oh my god," Piper said, "What are we going to do?"

"There's nothing we can do," Prue said

"That sucks," Phoebe said

"I know," Piper and Prue both said

The door opened and Grams came in with Paige beside her for support.

"Hey," The sisters said as thy hugged Paige

"Hey," She said

"How are you feeling?" They asked

"Alright, a bit sore," Paige answered

Paige took a seat and they all chatted for a while.

After a while Paige said "Well, I'm gonna kick back in front of the TV and maybe have a snooze,"

"And I better get of to work," Piper said

"Well I'm gonna go talk to Cole," Phoebe said

"And I'm gonna see what Andy's up too," Prue said


Prue knocked on Andy's door. His mum answered.

"He's in his room, go on up," She said closing the door behind Prue

"Thanks," Prue said and headed upstairs

Andy was lying on his bed watching the TV.

"Hey sweetie," Prue said

"Hey, how's Paige and of course you?" Andy rearranged his wording as he noticed the look on Prue's face.

"We're both fine, Paige is just taking it easy," Prue smiled

"Good," Andy said

They watched TV for a while, Mrs Trudeau came up with some food and drink.

"Do you want to come over tonight for a while, watch a movie?" Andy asked

"Yeah sounds fun," Prue said

"Well I better go, see you…?" Prue asked

"Say sevenish," Andy replied kissing Prue on the lips

"Okay, bye," Prue shut the door


"Phoebe, what are you doing here?" Cole asked opening the door

"We need to talk," She said walking in

"Okay," Cole said

They went into Cole's room

"Look Cole, did you mean what you said the other night?" Phoebe asked

"Yes I meant it 100," Cole said

"Good, me too," Phoebe said

"Well what are we going to do about Gemma?" Phoebe asked

"I don't know, I don't want to split up the gang," Cole said

"Me either," Phoebe said sitting on his bed

"Let's just keep it quiet just now," Cole suggested

"Yeah that's probably for the best just now," Phoebe nodded

"So how's Paige?" Cole asked

"Well, she got home today but she has to take things easy," Phoebe replied

"Awww good," Cole said

"Well I better go," Phoebe said

"Alright, see you at school," Cole said

"Yeah," Phoebe said

They leant in and kissed passionately "bye."


Piper walked in to Krause in high spirits until she noticed Leo and all these weird feelings rushed around her head. She breathed

"You can do this Piper, he's better than Dan," She told herself

"Hey," Piper said casually

"Hey, how are you?" Leo asked

"I'm fine thanks, you?" Piper pulled a uniform out from under the counter

"Yeah fine," Leo said

"Look Piper…" Leo began but was interrupted by the manager

"Leo get back to work," He said

"Yes, right away sir," Leo nodded "Sorry."

He walked away from Piper who felt relieved now that she had some time to think

"What was Dan going to say when she told him she was dumping him for Leo his enemy?" Piper asked herself

She stopped spacing and served the customer waiting.

The hours went by until Pipers shift was finally over. She picked up her jacket and put it on.

"Piper we need to talk," Leo said approaching

Piper felt awkward

"Yes I think we do too," Piper said

When they were out of ear shot

"Why did you kiss me?" Leo asked

"Dan was dressed as batman too, I thought you were him," Piper explained

"Oh well, that's that sorted," Leo said in a disappointed uneasy tone beginning to walk away

"Leo wait…" Piper put her hand on Leo's shoulder and turned him around

"Hey babe," Dan said appearing at the counter

"Hey," Piper said turning away

Leo stood there watching

"What are you looking at freek?" Dan asked nastily

Piper could feel her blood warming up, why did he have to be so nasty?

"I'm waiting to talk to Piper," Leo said

"What? Why would she want to talk to a freek like you?" Dan said

"I-I-I em…" Leo didn't know what to say

Piper was getting more angry

"Well? Just get lost you pathetic loser, what kind of man are you?" Dan spat

"HE'S A BETTER MAN THAN YOU," Piper exploded, she just couldn't take it anymore, Dan was such a nasty person.

"WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM? YOU'RE A PATHETIC FREEK, YOU THINK YOU ARE SO COOL," Piper shouted gaining an audience

Dan looked at Piper taken a back at her out burst, he had never seen quiet polite Piper like this before

"Dan I can't handle this anymore, we're over," Piper calmed down a little bit

"Bu…" Dan began

"No buts Dan, this time its for good," Piper said

Dan looked at Leo and her and then just ran out the restaurant.

There was a silence.

"Em… thanks," Leo said

"No problem," Piper said "What are friends for?"

"Well I'll see you later," Piper said

"Yeah, bye," Leo said and watched Piper leave the place, what was all that about? He didn't know but was looking forward to finding out.


Prue shrieked and hugged Andy tightly as there was a scary bit happening. He put his arm around, Prue felt safe and warm with Andy. The movie finally ended and all the popcorn was finished. Andy stood up and grabbed Prue's arm and led her through the house.

"Where are we going?" Prue asked

"It's a surprise," Andy said

Prue closed her eyes until they stopped and Andy said she could open them. A tent was pitched on the grass.

"What is it I'm looking at?" Prue asked

"It's a tent, you said you've always wanted to camp out under the stars," Andy replied

Prue laughed and hugged Andy

"What are you like?" Prue grinned

They lay down and looked at the sky filled with bright flashing stars and a big shiny moon. It was beautiful, eventually the fell asleep under the moonlight.


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