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Dragonball: The defeat of the sayain race
Chapter 1:
The young (19 years old) and very much promising sayain, Bardock was standing on one of the deserts of the planet Vegeta, the desert was very hot and Bardock's lack of water almost dried him out.Bardock was looking angry, his eyebrows pointing towards his nose and he was
standing in a defensive stance. Bardock was standing in front of a alien from the same species as Burter, but this one was just a little bit taller then Bardock and his armor revealed that he was'nt such a high class henchman as the Ginyu force member was.
'Impressive, your powerlevel is 2500.' spoke the alien calmely. 'You seem pretty confident ugly, you look pretty weak.' replied Bardock. 'I am indeed weaker then you, my powerlevel is at 1800.' said the alien. 'Then why so confident?' asked Bardock. The alien grinned and
explained: 'Experience!' The alien dashed forward and caught Bardock with his fist, trowing him backwards. Bardock was surprised, not about how strong the alien was, but about how weak, he barely felt the attack and it was almost like he was now hovering trough the air
in slow-motion instead of flying trough the air with great speed, he easily gained control over his body again and he gave the henchman a glare that did'nt need any words to give it a meaning. 'If you think that that was my best trick, then you are wrong.' said the alien,
but the sweat on his forehead betrayed him. Bardock flashed away and appeared behind the alien, the alien turned around and received a knuckle punch in his stomach, he shouted and blood flew out of his mouth. Bardock followed his attack up with a spinning kick and the
alien fell onto the ground, Bardock tried to make a drill but the alien managed to dodge the attack by rolling over to the side. Bardock looked to the side and was uppercutted in his face, he grinned and his head did'nt even move, Bardock grabbed the alien's neck and firmed his
grip as hard as he could. The alien started to shout and grabbed Bardock's hands, he twisted them, breaking free of the grip, Bardock punched the alien away and saw that his opponent was on enough distance to finish. 'Bomber DX!' shouted Bardock and he trew the bundle
of energy towards the alien. The alien crossed his arms in a defense, but it was useless, the attack was so powerful that it burned the evil warrior to ashes. Bardock powered down and his hair was moved gracefully by the wind. Bardock jumped into the air and blasted of towards home.
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At home...
The small house was burning, and several pieces of a frieza armor were lying on the ground, Bardock looked around for his father when he suddenly had to dodge a nearing energy blast.
Bardock turned around and saw his father, Taroaen. 'Sorry son, but I thought that you were
one of those attackers.' spoke Taroaen, Taraoen looked a lot like Raditz, but his hair was similar to that of Goten in DBGT. Taroaen was wounded, his body was covered in bruises and scratches and his arm was covered in blood. 'I does'nt matter dad, we have to save mother!'
shouted Bardock. 'Were is mother, son?' asked Taraoen. 'She is in the Cliffia mountains, to buy a new dress.' asnwered Bardock. 'Then what are we waiting for, let's go!' shouted Taraoen, he took off at full speed, followed by his son.
In the mountains...
Trunia was a beautiful sayain woman, she had long loose hair and a beatiful face, she was defending herself against a alien that looked a lot like Recoome, but even taller, his hair was long and brown, and he missed a tooth in the middle of his mouth. 'Your powerlevel is 1400?' asked the alien. 'I'm strong, yes!' shouted Trunia.
'Well my powerlevel is 8500, so I will be able to defeat you with ease!' shouted the alien and he charged the woman with great speed, Trunia was knocked onto the ground, blood flying out of her mouth, her new dress was damaged by the fall. 'Hahahaha, you are weak!'
shouted the dumb alien and put his hands onto his hips. 'YOU RUINED MY DRESS, NOW PAY!' shouted Trunia in great sayain anger. 'Your powerlevel rose to 5500!' shouted the alien afraid and he pointed at the woman. Trunia made a combo of a spinning kick and a
thrust pushing the big alien back, the alien kicked but Trunia ducked and grabbed the leg were the alien was standing on, she turned around and pulled the leg back, causing the alien to smash onto the ground with his face.
Bardock and Taroaen where flying trough the air at high speed, their powerlevels were on 12000 for Bardock and 9500 Taroaen, they arrived at the mountains. Trunia was strong but still not strong enough to defeat the alien, she was in the air struggling to come out of the
aliens' grip. Bardock saw his mother being strangled by the alien and his powerlevel increased to 13500, he charged the alien with his fist and the alien's head was turned to the side, his cheek was swollen and blood was on his cheek. The alien stumbled back as he
rubbed his cheek. Taraoen dashed forward and punched the alien on the other cheek, the alien fell onto the ground and Taraoen jumped onto his chest, he punched down on the alien and wounded him badly. Taraoen looked at the bruised face of his enemy and he charged his
fist with ki, he punched down and knocked the alien out. 'We have to go to Kingcity, we will be save behind the highly guarded walls!' shouted Taraoen and he killed the alien by planting a ki-blast in the alien's face. The three took off to the west towards Kingcity.
Tora was lying on the ground, he had been defeated by a big alien with a purple skin and black horns, his forehead looked like one big brain. 'You were weak, but you have potential, come with me and join the Ginyu force.' said the alien.
'Never!' shouted Tora and he had to do a lot of effort to push himself up, his arms shaking.
Tora got into a fighting stance and shouted: 'I will fight till I die!' Ginyu grinned and nodded, he charged Tora and grabbed him at his chin, Tora could'nt even put up a defense and he was
trowen trough the air, he fell onto the ground with a loud thud and he bounced of again, leaving a pool of blood on the floor. Bardock felt the enourmous power of Ginyu and he looked at his father. Taraoen nodded and they changed their direction, followed by Trunia.
Tora punched forward and hit his enemy but he almost broke his own hand in the progress.
Tora screamed and Ginyu made a sweeping kick that knocked Tora down, Tora fell onto his face and sand flew into his mouth. Tora pushed himself up again and coughed,
'I see, you really mean that you are going to fight till you die.' said Ginyu who was having great fun in fighting with the sayain. 'Bring it on!' shouted Tora and blood flew out of his mouth as he spoke. Ginyu dashed forward with big smile on his face, he kicked, but instead
of hitting the sayain, he hit a blast that disentegrated his boot. Ginyu's feet were burned and he shouted. Tora was now behind Ginyu and he punched the alien on a nerve spot in his back, Ginyu fell down onto his elbows and Tora drived his shoe into Ginyu's back, pushing him
onto the ground with his face. Ginyu grabbed a big stone in front of him and pulled himself forwards, sending the sayain flying and freeing himself, he pushed up and turned around, Tora was standing confident and moved his fingers towards the palms of his hands to indicate that
he was waiting for Ginyu to make the first move. Ginyu pulled his hand up and formed a fist, he trew his fist down and caught Tora on the top of his head. Tora fell to his knees and grabbed one of Ginyu's legs with both his hands. Ginyu kicked his foot forward and caught
the sayain's nose. Tora rolled backwards and got up shaking his head to trow the blood of his face. 'You bastard, I feel that you are hiding something, and you can still defeat me with ease, while I am maxed out.' started Tora. 'You are right, my powerlevel is at 20000 right now,
your powerlevel is 10000.' Tora nodded. 'That seems about right, but what are you hiding?' asked Tora. 'This!' replied Ginyu and he raised his power up to 120000. Tora stumbled back as he felt the immense power. Ginyu grinned and dashed at the sayain, Tora managed to jump
away and turned around to grab his enemy in a neckhold, he squeezed as hard as he could but Ginyu trew a backfist towards Tora and got him onto the verge of life and death. 'You are strong, Frieza will be happy with you.' said Ginyu and he suddenly felt three large powers
nearing him. 'This is interesting.' said Ginyu and he flew towards the powers, taking the uncounscious Tora in his right hand. Bardock stopped so suddenly that his father bashed into him but Bardock was strong enough to pretend that he did'nt even feel it.
Ginyu was hovering in front of the family and he dropped Tora, Trunia dived and catched the sayain from crashing into the ground. 'I think that it would be better if you stayed there mother.' warned Bardock and stuck out his finger, he pointed it into the air and said:
'Mom, close your eyes as long as I tell you to.' Trunia nodded and closed her eyes.
Taraoen looked at his son and his son fired a ball of light into the air, the ball expanded and Bardock's teeth began to grow, his father smiled and he also began to transform.
'What kind of trickery is this, monkey?' asked Ginyu. Bardock was fully transformed and he growled. 'To answer your question, I'm not a monkey, and the form that I am in now is called Oozara, and call me Bardock!' replied Bardock. Trunia opened her eyes and she saw her
husband and son as oozaru's, she knew the destruction that could be inflicted by the oozaru and she flew away with Toran in her arms. Ginyu made a flying kick and hit Taraoen on his face but the oozaru only stumbled back and he grabbed the muscled body of the alien with
his right hand. 'You are no match for a oozaru!' shouted Taraoen and he started to squeeze.
Blood flew out of Ginyu's mouth and his armor began to crack, Ginyu widened his eyes and fired two beams out of them. Taraoen was hit on his snout and he shouted, dropping Ginyu.
'I am indeed no match for one of you, let alone the two of you, but I have a few tricks up my sleeve.' said Ginyu and he pushed a button on his scouter. 'I don't care if you will call for backup, I will crush you before they arrive!' shouted Bardock.
Will the Ginyu force be on time to save their leader? Find out in chapter 2!
R and R please, I think that this is my best story, what about you?