Peggysan:ok! I finally had a review! Which is my friend and someone very encouraging! Well, at first I didn't know where to look where they put the reviews, so I just explored a bit. it in my mind: oh no! noone reviewed! Where the heck do they put it! Yeah I thought that but now I know! This is sooo cool! Ok..to the fic!
Summer vacation:
"hahahaha! Stop it goku!(splashy splashy on goku)" lirin said.goku chuckled, then something caught his eye! It was a guy who was surfing.
"whoa…sugoi! " goku said pointining to the guy.
"wow! That looks fun! Let's try!" lirin grabbed goku's hand and dragged him to the..uh..ok! I don't know what's it called. Somewhere you can borrow stuff!
"mister! Can we rent those!" said lirin pointing to a red and blue surfing board!
"uh, sure kid" the guy said handing the boards.
"wow! I'll take the blue!"
"huh? No! I want the blue!"
"I thought blue is a boy's color!"
"I don't care! Gimme the board!"
"(sigh) fine you win, I'll take the red one"
"Good! Lets gggooo!" they ran to back to the beach and ran to the water, when the water came to their hips they paused.
"uuhh..how exactly are we gonna ride them?" goku asked
" oops! I forgot about that part!"
"hhmm…(looking at watch) oh my, its almost five! We better get ready for dinner gojyo"
…..
"uuhh gojyo? (looking for gojyo, then saw a crowd of girls)..gojyo?"
"gojyo baby, you must be rich to get in here, right girls!"
"(the girls:) yeah!"
"ladies! Im not really that rich I don't wanna boast!"
" yare yare desu ne!" hakkai said with a sweat drop.
"gojyo! We have to find goku! Its almost five!"
Guys whistling…
" (blushing) c-can we go now kougaiji-sama?"
"why?" kougaiji asked
"w-well..im feeling….uncomfortable"
"oh, I see! Don't worry we'll go,… after this"
Looking at the guys in a very serious look..
"hey! You whistling sissies! Stop looking at yaone!"
Oh, kougaiji-sama! Your so heroic and handsome!
"OH YEAH! Whatcha gonna do about it prettyboy!"
This guy thinks im pretty?
"you wanna fight with the big boys?"
"TRY ME! THEN DIE IN GREAT PAIN!"
"THAT'S IT! YOUR DEAD!"
The guys charged at kougaiji, in..well, 2 minutes they are know suffering in the sand with bruises and bone fractures.
"now we can go yaone, but first we have to find Lirin and dokugakuji"
"hai!...uh and arigato for..beating the guys"
"yeah, your welcome. Well, let's g-"
"ONI-CHAN!LOOK AT ME! IM SURFING! WOOHOO!"
Kougaiji and yaone sweat dropped
"where the heck are those lowlives! Its almost five!" sanzo said,Reading the newspaper.
"sanzo's gonna kill us is he" gojyo said trying to find goku.
"of course not!" hakkai said
"i am so gonna kill them!"
peggysan:yay! another chapter done! please review and say something about my story ok?