First of all, I would like to thank Titan09! Your review made me
feel all tingly and warm inside :) And I would also like to thank
anyone who took the time to look at my poems! This ode is kinda written
in Edward's POV as well. It's basically Edward's view of Bella and the
sort of yearning he feels. Oh yes, the last three lines are supposed to
be a seperate stanza from the first nine, but FF won't let me put a
space there >:(
Ode: An ode is a single, unified strain of exalted verse with a single purpose and dealing with a single theme. It may or may not have end rhyme or regular rhythm. It can be about any subject.
Ode to Humanity
Blood rushing to your face,
Heart beating in your chest,
Lungs pumping oxygen
As you release your breath,
Hair growing longer,
Skin as soft as silk
Growing warm to the touch,
Your eyes a soft chocolate,
Encased in fragile bones.
Humanity has escaped me,
Falling victim to the seduction
Of immortality.
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