This time it's a concrete poem written in Edward's POV. Can anyone guess what it's shape is?
Concrete Poem: A concrete poem is a a free verse poem with the words arranged on the page to make a shape that suggests the topic of the poem. It can be about anything.
My Bloody Temptation
Sweet
and warm,
Sliding thickly down
my throat, your blood warms
me from the inside out. I drown
in its pure, sweet bliss, fighting
every step of the way, knowing
that you are my blood red
temptation.
So what did you guys think? I'm open and welcome to any suggestions. R&R please :)