I want to thank Titan09 (i'm looking forward to your poetry) and kremmy (i'm glad you liked the shape) for reviewing! Congratulations, you got the shape right! -hands Titan09 & kremmy a cyber moofin (a cookie flavored muffin, or a cookie in the shape of a muffin, whichever you prefer)- These poems are haikus written from a 3rd person POV. The first one's kind of a literal take on twilight, and the second one is about the clearing where Edward shows Bella what happens when he goes into the sunlight.
2x Disclaimer: Egad! I forgot to put up a disclaimer for the last chapter again. I do not own Twilight. (Normally I would come up with something more creative but I'm reaaaaally stressed right now cause Science/History state testing is tomorrow and my nice Spanish teacher also decided to give us a quiz tomorrow too!)
Haiku: A Haiku is a short poem. Each haiku has three lines. The first line is five syllables, the second line has seven syllables, and the third line goes back to five syllables. It is usually about nature.
Twilight
Sunlight is fading
As shadows creep through the sky
Twilight is falling
The Clearing
Sunlight shoots past trees
Into the clearing within
Dancing on diamonds
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