FINDING YOU
By: Suma Susaki and Kaytoko
Chapter 7: Heart break
Hey Everyone! Well… we're sooo sorry that it took this long to update…. ((cries)) its almost been a month and a half… ((sweatdrops)) please done kill us! We're back and with a verge! ((smiles)) ok well… I'm happy to say that we reached our 30 review mark! ((throws confetti)) Thanks to all the reviewers who keep us going:
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Chapter 7: Heart BreakLast Time: "I said… keep watch for Haku. I'm going to make sure only he comes." She snorted before disappearing. Shinitzu smirked after she was gone. 'This will be interesting.'
Now:
Haku raced as fast as he could towards Swamp Bottom. 'Chihiro!' He called for the tenth time since he felt her connection weaken from him, still no response. Haku was dying from worry, he didn't know what he would do without her…
Once he spotted Zeniba's cottage, he dove straight down towards it. Once his clawed feet touched the ground, he immediately turned back into his human form, and burst through Zeniba's door.
"Where is she? Where is Chihiro?" he yelled at Zeniba and Lin, who were at the moment drinking tea, and trying to figure out what Shinitzu and Yubaba (a/n: ha! I fixed it! Go me! Thank you all who pointed out the error!) were planning.
"Haku. We… we don't know." Lin said, apologetically. Haku's heart clenched with fear. "Tell me… tell me exactly what happened." Lin and Zeniba nodded, than started with the story.
(A/n: ok… since I'm extremely lazy, I'm not going to have the actual explanation. 0.0 … ((avoids tomato throwing)) )
"So then… It was Yubaba and Shinitzu." Said Haku, venom dripping from his voice, as he clenched his fist before punching the table, breaking it down the center into two pieces.
"They'll pay… When I'm done with them, they won't live to see the next day." He growled. Lin and Zeniba exchanged worried glances.
After a couple minutes of silence, to allow Haku to calm down and think of a plan of some sort, Yubaba arrived in bubble form once again.
Haku was angered at her appearance. "WHERE IS CHIHIRO?" he yelled, as he went to punch Yubaba, but sadly enough, only attempted to go straight through her.
"Where…. Is… SHE!" he growled, through clenched teeth. Yubaba laughed.
"Wouldn't you like to know!" she crowed in triumph. Haku practically snapped.
"You…. BITCH! I'LL KILL YOU! BRING HER BACK!" He yelled throwing another punch at Yubaba, this time, she dissipated.
"Haku…" started Lin, walking over to his side. She reached her hand out to touch his shoulder, but let if fall back down to her side.
"We'll find her. We will." She promised. Haku just stared at the floor angrily, thinking things over. He abruptly turned to face the door. "We're leaving." He commanded.
"Good luck you two." Said Zeniba with unnecessary enthusiasm. The door closed soon after that.
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"Yubaba should be gone for awhile… this might actually work." Said Shinitzu to himself as he walked towards the cell Chihiro was being kept in. He put his hand in the air, than made his hand into a fist, which instantly glowed a faint purple maroon type color. As his hand re opened, a key ring with several keys on it materialized into his palm.
He walked over to the cell, after finding the right key, before unlocking the cell door, and entering the small prison. Chihiro hadn't moved since she was put there. He walked over to her and slung her over his shoulder. "And now my plan can begin." He snickered. He held up his had and it glowed an indigo color this time. They both disappeared soon after.
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Haku carried Lin on his back as he flew through the cold, night air. Chihiro's mind was still blocked from him, as it had been while she was asleep for those two days previous. Although Haku knew this, he kept trying to reach her. After many more hours of trying with now success, Haku decided he needed to get to the castle even faster.
"Haku… we should land and make camp! You've been flying for well over 2 days straight now!" Yelled Lin, over the rushing wind. Haku growled in response, he couldn't quit now… not when Chihiro needed him most. But, he couldn't deny the fact that he was tired of no sleep for so long. Slowly, Haku descended from the clouds, and towards a forest.
Once they landed, Lin jumped off of Haku before he changed into his human form. She curled up on her side and was asleep immediately Haku did the same… but his dreams came as nightmares.
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Shinitzu took a deep breath of the crisp night air. He then shifted Chihiro on his back and took in the scenery. 'It seems like such a long time since I've been here." He thought, sadly. He started walking down the path covered with leaves, and made his way out of the forest. Once out, he noticed the neat houses on the steep hill, the blue house on the end caught his attention especially, and lights farther off in the distance from the city. 'I'm back home…'
End Chapter 7: Heart Break
OMG! Don't kill me for this EXTRMELY short chapter! ((hides))
Yah… had some trouble with this chapter. Sorry again that it took so long to update. Do any of you have any idea's where Shinitzu and Chihiro are? Tell me and if you get it right, you might get to make an appearance on Finding You!
Here are some questions you need to answer first…
What is my (Suma Susaki) real name?
What is Kaytoko's real name?
Where did Shinitzu take Chihiro?
Answer these, and leave a name that you would like to go by if you do get put in the story… thanks people!
Remember to R&R!
'/Suma ()()/Kaytoko