Mine,His

by Rara Erza Heartfilia

Mine:"- just so you understand,Princess,I don't share." /His: Petrified emerald eyes darted between the two. This was revolting. WRONG. Yet there he was,perusing,giving in.What else could he do?"Ten seconds,feline."Came that acidic voice. Panic began to set in."Four,three,TWO-"He knelt and their innocent green and blue eyes screamed 'NO'..."I surrender."/R&R!

11. GUEST REVIEWERS ONLY

A/N: MUST READ

Hey all you amazing people!Ra Ra here!Okay so, as I've said previously,I really feel the need to respond to you guys, so here it is!

I will respond to everyone, right from the reviews of the first chapter, so If you have reviewed in the past, this chapter will have a response from me to your guest for future chapters.

OKAY SO HERES HOW THIS WILL GO DOWN:

The chapter that you reviewed will be in Bold words/your review (I won't edit them because I want you to instantly recognise your review)will be converted to italic, and mine will be in normal font. After every review you will see a number and the next review.

That means my response ends there for that review.

Feel free to ask questions guys! This chapter is for you, it will be updated every time I post a chapter, so keep an eye out for a response okay?

I hope you guys are happy with this, so without further ado, let's have some fun! :D

CHAPTER ONE:

1) chiken chapter 1 . Nov 18

YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS THIS IS AMAZING!
I FUCKING LOVE IT!
I need more supervillan!Chat Noir
Im beyond excited and interested to see where this goes. I've read some AUs like this and I loved all of them.I cant wait to see what you come up with!
Until then,Cant wait till the next chapter!

Hey there! :D I'm so glad you thought so! Trust me, you will be getting much, much more of our kitty!I hope you're enjoying the story so far!It's great to have you on board!Thank you so so so much for reviewing, you rock!

2)Anna chapter 1 . Nov 18

This is really interesting, can't wait for the next chapter :)

Hey there Anna! :D I'm happy you think so!I hope you're enjoying the fic,and thank you so much for reviewing it!

3) Guest chapter 1 . Nov 18

This is amazing , keep going :)

Thank you! :') I surely will! And thank you for reviewing this!

4) Miralove chapter 1 . Nov 18

I TOTALLY enjoy. Your fanfic is sooo awesome, tan increible. You need to continur because I love it with just the first chapter

Hey there Miralove! I'm so excited that you feel that way! :D I will definitely continue, and I hope that even as it goes along you will still love it! Thank you for reviewing :D

5)Dreamloverdover chapter 1 . Nov 18

This is awesome!I can't wait to see what you come up with in future chapters!Once again,This is up the great work :D

I glad you think so! I hope you've been enjoying the chapters, thank you again :D And thank you for reviewing :')

6) Spiked Dragon chapter 1 . Nov 18

It's actually quite a good first chapter, maybe in the next chapter it could be about Adrien and Plagg meeting, and Chat Noir giving Chloe the scratches she so rightfully deserves( I don't like Chloe).

Hey! I was actually really worried that people didn't really enjoy it that much…I'm sorry the next chapter wasn't about that, but I hope that chapter 10 made up for it! :D I don't like her either, and I'm kind of peeved that she's getting the Bee Miraculous in the show -_- Anyways, thank you so much for your review! :'D

7)Aurieii chapter 1 . Nov 19

Nice ;)

Hiiii! I'm glad you thought so! Thank you so much for reviewing it!

8)Lolilust chapter 1 . Nov 19

Can he meet her again while she save his civilian self from Chloe?

Hmm, that's a secret, but it's always a possibility ;) :P Thank you so much for your review question!

9) Guest chapter 1 . Nov 19

Oh my GOODNESSS! Im already in LOVE with this story! Ims so excited to see what happens next! Please please PLEASE continue soon. I love bad boy chat noir. Doesent it make you melt? It happens to me (loving sigh) anyway aweasome story so far. I love everything about this story! Until next time spots on claws out!- wonderful weirdo

Hey there wonderful weirdo! Ra Ra here :D I'm so glad that you're loving it!I will continue, I purromise. YES!I adore him! Thank you so much :') And thank you for reviewing!

10)Guest chapter 1 . Nov 27

mooooore give me moooooooore btw I love this version where chats the villain

Hi! I will I will, cat's honor! I love it a lot too, I couldn't resist making a fic because of that very reason LMAO! Thank you so so much for reviewing :D

11) MissfanFic0405 chapter 1 . Dec 11

Update? Unless life got into the way, if course..but its Sunday today/tomorrow, so maybe you'll have free time?

Life did get in the way, but I'm so thankful that you all patiently waited for the chapter regardless of it being a bit late :') I love you guys :D Thank you so much for you review! It made me feel so honoured to know that people actually wait to read the chapter, so thank you, you rock!

12) Big Fan chapter 1 . 17h ago

I love how you made chat noir a villain! You did a really good job on the first chapter.

Hey! Thanks :D I'm so pleased that you liked it! Thank you so much for reviewing it! :'D

13)MissfanFic0405 chapter 1 . 13h ago

Please update soon. If you've got enough time, no rush if you haven't. I can't wait for chapter 12, seriously though! I probably check twice every hour to see if there's an update. With similar time zones, I might know the times to update, reasonable times, such as one in the morning. Just kidding! Take your time, but expect me to be here when you do update. ; )

Updated! :D Hope you enjoy chapter 12!Can't wait to hear your thoughts on it!Thank you so much for reviewing Miss! :D

14)Big Fan chapter 1 . Dec 21

I love how you made chat noir a villain! You did a really good job on the first chapter.

I'm glad you love it! Really? :D Thank you!And thank you so much for reviewing!

CHAPTER 2:

1) Lisbeth chapter 2 . Nov 20

Can't wait for next XD XD XD XD Plz post SOON :)

Hi there Lisbeth!Ra Ra here! I hope you enjoyed chapter three,and thank you so much for your enthusiasm! I love it! Thank you so much for reviewing! :D

2) Guest chapter 2 . Nov 20

Ok let me just saw that i was so happy to see the next chapter! While reading this entire chapter i couldnt breath! I was too over whelmed and happy. And just between you and me i was fanning myself and entirly screaming in my mind i love this story so much! I cant wait for the next i will keep looking for this story every day! Keep up with the great work you have here!- wonderful wierdo

Hey again!:D Omg!Wow, I'm so happy that you enjoyed it so much! That's awesome, thank you so much! Thank you for your support, it means a whole lot to me :') I will! And thank you so much for reviewing! :D

3)Don'thaveanact chapter 2 . Nov 23

OMG I LOVE THIS! CONTINUE THE GREAT WRITING! :D

Thank you! That makes me so happy! I will :D Thank you so much for reviewing!

4) Cami chapter 2 . Dec 8

*claps like a seal until her hands start bleeding*

*Gasp* *Hands you next chapter so your hands stop bleeding* XD Thank you so much for this review!It made me laugh!

CHAPTER 3:

1)Miralove chapter 3 . Nov 27

OMG I loved! No, I LOVE it. Your fanfic is so funny and soooo cool. My gosh, can't wait for next chapter. But I really want to know if Nathaniel is Marinette's boyfriend.

I'm so happy that you LOVE it! XD I try my best to make you guys enjoy it, I hope you enjoyed the next chapter and that it offered substantial insight ;) Thank you so much for reviewing!

2) Guest chapter 3 . Nov 27

Omg! In love with this fic! There aren't a lot of Evil. Chat Noir fics out there, and from the ones I've read, yours is by far my favorite! It has so much potential and I can't wait to see how Marinette responds.
Ps. I've had trouble with the website changing my words, so I've pretty much stopped writing.
Please don't stop writing!

Really! Omg I'm so honoured! *Jumps up and down in giddiness*

Honestly, this word thing is really getting out of hand, and it hurts when people criticise and say I have terrible grammar because of it. It's super upsetting and one of the main reasons I get put off writing on , so far, the only chapter that hasn't given me a problem was Chapter 10, so I'm crossing my really sucks when I open a preview of a chapter and I see the sentences missing many words, seemingly incoherent. BUT nevertheless,I'll edit as many times as I have to for you guys!

I won't stop hopefully!

Thank you so much for your review!It's awesome to know that someone understands my dilemma too :')

3) Guest chapter 3 . Nov 27

Update ! Update !
I want update !
Love this story
Keep writing

You're so awesome and sweet XD Thank you so much, I will keep writing! I hope you enjoyed the chapters that followed! And thank you so much for reviewing :D

4) Aureii chapter 3 . Nov 27

0-0
Jeez Nathaniel...how does HE know about Marinette's broken window? Is he stalking her too? WTF man!

Also random side note :
Wouldn't nailing up boards be the FIRST thing that you would do (in this neighborhood) when the window breaks and u almost die from a creeper ? Maybe? IDK?

Good luck with ur studies!
And update soon! (Plz)
Cliffhangers are EVIL!

LMAO XD Noooo he's not stalking her! :P I hope the next chapter cleared things up! Thank you so much for the well wishes, it raised my spirits during those papers!

I'm paw-rry, but cliffhangers, well,I can't resist :'(

5) Marichattrash90 chapter 3 . Nov 27

Did Chloé and Adrien have sex or did she tried to make him do it, but he said no or made up some excuse? Could you please clear that up for me in the next chapter? I'm really confused.

She forced him X( I hope the chapters that followed have cleared up your doubts, and thank you so much for reviewing! :D

6) Miralove chapter 3 . Nov 28

I have a question. Adrien and Chloe have sex?

X( Yes they do :'( Thank you so much for the question :D I love questions! And thank you for reviewing! You're amazing!

7)Lisbeth chapter 3 . Dec 4

Help...I search the fanfic Mine miraculous but no avail. It was so hard to find again. What happened? :/ anyways good luck if that test is still coming.. if over... hope u did well...

Oh no! :O Okay I don't know why it isn't working, but here is the story url,maybe you can put it on a quick memo:

: / / w w w . s / / 1 / Mine

Remove all spaces!I hope that helps!

It's over now, and our Matic (Final year) results will be out soon, just gotta trust God that they're awesome!Thank you so much for the well wish,and for reviewing! I hope it works!

8) MissfanFic0405 chapter 4 . Dec 22

I think I know the purrfect song fur this fanfiction. All we know by The Chainsmokers.
"We're falling apart, still we hold together. We've past the end, still we chase forever. Cause this is all we know. This feeling's all we know."
I feel like those lyrics *comically points up* describes this fanfiction. Maybe its just me?

That's one of my absolute favourite songs!Though the song I generally listen to is Evanescence:My Immortal, also: Evanescence-Bring me to life,Evanescence-Broken, Paramore-Monster, Paramore-When it Rains, I have a whole songlist that I listen to, I could put them up if you like!Thank you for reviewing!

CHAPTER 4:

1)Miralove chapter 4 . Dec 5

I love your fanfic. And I'm wondering what could happen if Nath finds out.

Thank you! I love getting your reviews and hearing from you,you're awesome!

Hmm,we'll just have to wait and see…Thank you so much for reviewing! :D

2) Random Reviewer1 chapter 4 . Dec 5

Oooh...
This sounds interesting! I can't wait to see how their relationship develops!

I'm glad you think so! I hope you like how it's been developing so far!And thank you so much for reviewing! :D

3) Yuna chapter 4 . Dec 5

-eyes widen-

Ow... Hmmm... QUESTION TIME!
Does chat get Really Jealous of Nathiel?
Does Chole find out adrien is chat?
Does marionette find out the chat-Adrien?
Does marionette hate chole in this story( I read a few where they were friends...)
Does Marionette get jealous?
Does chole try to get rid of Mari?
Does Adrien or Chat lash out at chole for making Mari upset?
Does Chole try to charm Chat?
And... that's it... :)

Okay!

Yes he does, that's a secret ;) , Yes eventually, Yes she despises her, Pawssiblyyyy, Well Chloe is always trying to get rid of her lmao… Perhaps he will-who knows? Possibly :p

Thank you so much for your questions! That was fun! And thank you for reviewing!

4) Guest chapter 4 . Dec 5

Wow

I hope that's a good Wow XD Thank you for reviewing!

5) Miraculous lover chapter 4 . Dec 5

I need more! It funny and cute

I'm glad you think so! More will come soon :3 Thank you for reviewing!

6) Guest chapter 4 . Dec 5

Pleaaaase make this smut
SIN SIN SIN

Hmmm, I'll think about it, but I warn you, I suck at smut…If I do write it though it will be a new side story as a branch from this you for reviewing XD

7) Guest chapter 4 . Dec 7

I love the whole bad guy thing please don't change this too quickly this is such a cool twist on the story I think the dark side of adrien/chat is awesome xx

I won't! Don't worry, he'll be evil for a looong time. I'm glad you think so because I like dark Chat too! :D Thank you so much for reviewing this!

8) MissfanFic0405 chapter 4 . Dec 9

AWE
I'm also from South Africa, just like you! What part? Finally I find a South African writer!
On another note, this fic is LEGIT! I don't usually read things like this, but this fic is captivating. I wasn't even planning on reading it- I came onto the site to read a bit of Adrienette fluff!

Heya!Seriously? :O That's frigging awesome, I'm from Durban and you?

Oh I'm so happy you're enjoying it!Eishhh, I'm sorry :'( But I hope you like this regardless! Thank you so much for reviewing! :D

9)anonymous chapter 4 . Dec 15

...she let him stay with her...um ookay?

It's weird, I know I knoowww, but he planned to stay even I she said no! XD Thank you so much for reviewing!

CHAPTER 5:

1)HowlLikeAWolf chapter 5 . Dec 6

Will there be a reveal? Will Mari and Chat become a thing?

Hi!Yes eventually there will be! And wellllll, they're soul mates, ;) I hope that answers your question :P Thank you so much for this review!

2)IZZY chapter 5 . Dec 6

I loved this chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

Awww thanks Izzy!I hope you're enjoying the story! Thank you for this sweet review!

3) Bee chapter 5 . Dec 7

I love this story it's my favourite! Please keep updating as often as possible! But little request, please make the story develop over time; I guess I would rather wait and have a non rushed story but still...I'm so impatient lol but keep up the great work I love it!

Really! :D That's so awesome, that makes me so happy! I'll try my absolute best, but you know how hectic the festive season can get! It will, I promise :) Lmao I will, thank you so much for reviewing!

4)Lilly chapter 5 . Dec 13

Omg this is soooo Freaken gooood to read ! Ty for writing this golden story !

Thank you for reviewing and being so kind!You rock! :D

5)anonymous chapter 5 . Dec 15

Chloe is a b***h. Plagg is adorable. Simple and short.

She is! I know :3 I love him! Thank you so much for reviewing!

CHAPTER 6:

1) Lokilust chapter 6 . Dec 7

Please have Mari save adrein from himself I strongly believe that you can save someone with work love and compassion

She will!I believe so too, thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and reviewing!

2) Guest chapter 6 . Dec 8

OML that made me cry so much! I would want to do that too if that happened to me but like Adrien said, I'd never know. Like dude I can't survive without eating something for 20 min. I love how you update so fast and I hope you make chat kill Chloe or something or idk someone needs to avenge for that poor boy.

I'm sorry :'( , I'm completely the same don't worry,I'm really happy to update whenever I can or have the time to :D He will be avenged! Thank you so much for reviewing!

3) Cami chapter 6 . Dec 8

I cried with this
Stop this, stop his pain, please

It will end eventually I swear :( Thank you so much for reviewing!

4) Idk chapter 6 . Dec 8

You did an amazing job with the story! The only criticism I have is you should try to watch out for spacing between punctuation and words. That is the only thing I got. Everything else is amazing! Keep up the good work!

Thanks! Okay I will! I'll try my best, but when I upload it to doc manager, for some reason, words and some punctuation marks get removed, I'm sure you noticed a few sentences where a whole set of words are missing :( But thank you!I will try and sort those out! Thank you so much for your feedback and amazing review! :D

5) Furever A Fan chapter 6 . Dec 8

Me...ow...

Woah...Meow nyever thought chole was furry...pawsceful... O.O It's left meow feline purrible...
Meow thinks this fanfic is purrfectly pawsome but this chapurr is purry high on... stuff... :/ I think mew should admit depaw on THAT fur the sake of younger readers... meows furrend read mews fic and...er...anyways...

-Oh..And mew should kynow, meows nyame is Kuro Tora. Kuro Tora is meows purr-fect dispurr here...

Hey Kura Tora! I know it is high on that stuff :( I'll try and keep it T rated in future! Thank you so much for reviewing! Loving the puns BTW! :D XD

6)Yuna chapter 6 . Dec 8

Dark... :/

I know :( I had to make it live up to the angst bit, it was essential :'( I hope it wasn't too dark for you! Thank you for reviewing :)

7)Lisbeth chapter 6 . Dec 8

Really...very...ugly...I didn't know chole could be more hated
I also didn't know that this would become the darkest chatnoirisavillanhere fic...

Hey there, I know it was :( I hope it didn't scare you too much or make you not want to read it anymore :/ Anyway, thank you for reviewing!

8) Guest chapter 6 . Dec 8

I read this chapter and all I can say is "wow." This chapter was really good but...it makes me wonder...are you, the author okay? Are you going through something right now?

Thanks! Don't worry, I'm alright :) Thank you so much for your concern and review!

9) Guest chapter 6 . Dec 8

Wow that got dark real fast

I know :( But it was essential, thank you so much for reviewing!

10) Guest chapter 6 . Dec 9

Wow.
That's all I can say.
Love it! Keep going, just...
Wow.

Hi! I'm glad you love it, and I will keep writing more! Thank you so much for this review! You made me smile :D

11) anonymous chapter 6 . Dec 15

DIE CHLOE DIE! MWAH HAH HAH HAH!

I know how you feel :'( X( Thank you for the review!

CHAPTER 7:

1) Little Red chapter 7 . Dec 9

The last part had me laughing my ass off. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Great story by the way.

LMAO I'm so happy it did! I'm really glad you're enjoying it,and thank you so much for your review! :D

2) Miralove chapter 7 . Dec 10

OMG! Your fanfic is soooooooo cool and awesome. The darkness on it makes it better, and, call me crazy, but I laughed when he aterrorizes the people, I don't know! it is just funny. But of course, in the fanfic, not in real life. And it was like a movie in my mind when he transformed on the rainy day and all the devilish smiles and I imagined him in four paws on the rooftops. I literally imagine it all, it rocked. I LOVE IT

Hey again Miralove! Thanks! :D Don't worry, sometimes I feel the exact same way!I'm so glad that you actually picture it,that's brilliant! Thank you so much,and thank you for reviewing!

3)E chapter 7 . Dec 10

Not little at all...lmao

Lmao writing that part killed me XD I'm so happy that it made you laugh,and thank you for reviewing! :D

4) Blue Dragon chapter 7 . Dec 10

Yes! That would be awesome!

Hey, I hope this makes you happy!Thank you so much for reviewing and I look forward to responding to all your future questions and reviews here :D

5) Furever a fan chapter 7 . Dec 10

Mew... the meowful bird is in furry purry trouble...it popped on meows most infameows crimewnal of pawis... -gulps-

- Kuro Tora

Hey! Seriously, your puns are like amazing XD This made me laugh, thank you so much for this review!

6) Guest chapter 7 . Dec 10

Yay

:D Yayyy! Thank you for reviewing :p

CHAPTER 8:

1)PandaLUVpanda chapter 8 . Dec 11

I LOVE YOUR WRITING! Your ability to shape hurt and comfort and fluff together makes this fanfic one of my favourites! :)

If you don't mind me asking, how do you post a fanfic? I've been wanting to write one for a while, but I just don't know how...You don't have to answer, but I would be very grateful if you would consider helping this newbie! :)

Hey there! Really? :D I'm honoured,thanks!Awwww!

Ooooh it's prettu simple, here's what you do:After clicking publish, accept the terms and conditions under RULES AND , go back to Publish and click New Story, after that, just follow the steps on the tabs that pop up and you're good to go!

I generally find that it's very important to have a great first chapter, because that sets the pace, I can't tell you exactly how to write, because you have your own style, but here's something I don't tell people, before I post, I write down about two or three versions of a chapter, in the end, the one I'm most pleased with gets posted, that's why I generally post like after 3 or more days.

I hope this helped and good luck!

2)Miralove chapter 8 . Dec 11

My Gosh. She's gaining his trust, or at least some, I dunno. Oh crap, I love ittttttttt. I think this is one of my three favorite fanfics in the world. But I wonder what Adrien o Chat do with the stuff that he is Chloe' boyfriend.

Yes she is!I'm glad you do :D Really? Wow! :D I hope you're still enjoying and thank you so much for reviewing!

3) Cami chapter 8 . Dec 12

Omg I was so sad about Mari saying that Adrien was Chloes bf, like god no poor little sunshine my baby he feels so bad with that bitch and she says hes her boyfriend Im gonna kill her

I know, I was too :( I feel the same way -_- Thank you so much for reviewing Cami! :D

4)Pokelover619 chapter 8 . Dec 13

I can definately say I'm impressed. This story has a lot of heart and I feel that this adrien you have created is both realistic and deep. The story has the perfect balance of dark, humor, and fluff. Truly a wonderful piece. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks!Wow, thank you for such an amazing review! It really made me smile! :) I hope you're still enjoying the story, thank you for reading it!

5)MissfanFic0405 chapter 8 . Dec 14

Best chapter yet! I really love Chat in this.
When I finished chapter 7, I sat there waiting for chapter , I went to read another fic while I waited. Unfortuntely, I forgot the name of this story -_-. I was so disappointed in myself and I spent a few days looking for this fic again...NOW I FOUND IT...YAAAAAAS

Really?I'm glad you think so! Oh man, I'm sorry :( But hey, you found it again!That's all that matters! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for your review!

6)anonymous chapter 8 . Dec 15

you have to keep writing this

I will! And really, thank you so much for taking the time to review, it means more than you know :')

7) S Spice chapter 8 . Dec 15

This is beautifully written, thank you for your post. I look forward to the next chapter!
This my favourite story so far, I will try to sign up to fanfiction to "favorite" it! LOL.
xoxo

You're very welcome,and thanks! :') Whoa really :O Awww thank you so much *blushes bashfully* Please do! Lmao!Thank you for reviewing! :D

CHAPTER 9:

1)Miralove chapter 9 . Dec 17

Love it! And OMG, I hate so much Chloe. Maldita enferma. So insane, I wonder what Adrien would do with the video

:D I feel the same, you're right, it is really sick X( That will come later, don't worry, it will be an intense chapter! Thank you for reviewing!

2)E chapter 9 . Dec 17

aawww...

:3 I'm happy you found it cute :D Thank you for reviewing!

3) Guest chapter 9 . Dec 17

It's ok to take a long time to update as long as the story will update eventually and is not rushed. I'm pretty sure everyone will be happy. :-) the story is really good and well written and unique :-)

I really hope so because I may only be able to update on a weekly basis when campus opens :/ Thanks! I'm glad you think so! Thank you for being so kind and understanding, and for this review :')

4)Guest chapter 9 . Dec 17

That's right Adrien is Marinette's Chaton so back the fuck away Chloe and keep your filfthy hands to yourself

XD I love this! Lmao thank you for this awesome review! :D

5) Go girl guest chapter 9 . Dec 17

Great chapter!
So sorry u had a stressful week,
Update SOON!
- gogirl out!

Thanks, aww it's alright, I'll try my best! Thank you so much for reviewing!

6) Scrappy chapter 9 . Dec 18

Awww my poor little kitty! Let me hug u! Love your story dearly and can't wait for mrew!

And that Chloe b****~! Some big blackmail is urgently necessary!

*Chat opens his arms* , Aww thanks! Yes it is! It will come in time, don't you worry!Thank you so much for reviewing!

7)MissfanFic0405 chapter 9 . Dec 19

It is legit 02:40 am and I was supposed to go sleep at 12am. But, alas, sleep will have to wait, because the fics I'm reading cannot wait! Absolutely stunning fanfiction! I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Right now its around 2:00 a.m and I'm also supposed to be asleep, but I really needed to see to it that my guest reviewers get the recognition they you so much, I posted a chapter earlier,hope you enjoy it!Thank you so much for reviewing!

8)Sspice chapter 9 . Dec 19

Awww! MariChat fluff awesome! Love it! Please continue to write more! Thanks for entertaining heartfelt chapter. Can't wait for then chapter! LOL :)

I'm glad you love it!I will soon, and youre welcome!Thank you so much for reviewing!

9)Cutie pie chapter 9 . Dec 22

Awwwww my heart melted

Awww,I'm glad you enjoyed it, :D Thank you so much for reviewing!

CHAPTER 10:

1) Tamashi chapter 10 . Dec 21

just let me ask one think WHEN I CAN KILL !$!$$! CHOLE FOR WHAT SHE DONE TO OUR CINNAMON ROLL THAT...GIRL * !? anyway wow, i haven't feel that...spark for a fic in a long time and your'e making a wonderful work with it! D the drama, the angst are combined so perfect that i can feel the impotence SO STRONG a fic who can handle the emotions, for me is the perfect story. I can't wait to see the continuation. CONGRATS!? D

Soon Tamashi, soon, I'll help! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it so much! Wow, thank you! I've updated, and I hope you enjoy it! Thank you so much for reviewing!

2) skye chapter 10 . Dec 21

are you making another page ?

Yuppy!You're on it XD , I hope you like it!Thank you the review!

3) MissfanFic0405 chapter 10 . Dec 22

Amazingness. I've recommended this to my friends so many times, I've lost count! Now, I haven't read chapter 11 yet, so I don't know what's to come, but do Tom and Sabine ever catch Marinette and Chat?

Hmmm, I'm not sure if I'm going to let that happen, but if I do, that will be one dramatic chapter!Thank you so much for reviewing!

4) Pokelover619 chapter 10 . Dec 22

That was deep. I cannot blame the poor boy for acting the way he does. While I don't condone it, I understand why. You have quite the skill in creating connections between the reader and the characters. Adrien feels so real, like a kid you could actually meet one day. I love the show itself, but I feel that it needs to incorporate more of the elements that you do in relation to adriens life. The darker side of his emotions. It's hard to imagine a real person with that level of tolerance for the kind of situation he is in. All in all it was another brilliant chapter and I love how it was plags point of view. On a side note, while I love reading your story, your health is a priority. Make sure you get plenty of sleep before continuing the story. We can't have one of our favorite authors collapsing from fatigue, now can we? Until next time.

I'm glad I could create the connection :) Exactly, I feel that for someone who's going through that much they make him way too passive.I'm so glad that you enjoyed it!Awwww, don't worry, I rested up really well! One of our favourite authors? *Collapses from happiness* Thank you so much! :D And thank you for this amazing review!

5)DeepKnife chapter 10 . Dec 22

OMG! I love this story so much
While I am furious at Chloe
I LOVE the way you wrote plagg, I just feel the more fatherly plagg fits in with the story.
Update soon
Love this story
Byeeeee

Awwww I'm so glad you love it! He does in this version,doesn't he? :3

Thank you so much for reviewing, I've updated today :D Thank you so much for reviewing!

6) Sspice chapter 10 . Dec 22

Awesome! Completely blown away! Please continue writing! :)

Thank you!I will!And thank you so much for the review! :D

7)akacool12 chapter 10 . Dec 23

Okay, first of all GREAT chapter bit I wasn't surprised since I'm getting used to your awesomeness. Anyway I wanted to ask how long until chat/ Adrien admits to plagg that he's in love with mari? Also this chapter really cleared my twitching if marinette is gonna get the ladybug miraculous so thanks a lot. Love ya girl. That is if you are a girl. :-P

Awwww thanks! :D Hmmmm, weeeeellll, I don't want to rush the story too much, and seeing as they've only known each other for a short time, I'd say maybe at the end of the 30 days when their parents return?I love you toooo!And yes, I'm a girl XD Thank you so much for reviewing!

CHAPTER 11:

1) Guest chapter 11 . Dec 22

Hey, Ra Ra, I was wondering, could you do a damsel-in-distress type chapter? Where Chat saves Mari? Sorry, I just those kinds! XD

Hey! :D Hmmmm, of course I can!I love em too! XD Thank you so much for the suggestion and review!

2) MissfanFic0405 chapter 11 . Dec 22

I'm from the Western Cape, and thanks for answering mine and everyone else's reviews! Its really nice of you. * smiles *

Also I found this on the internet and thought I'd copy it here:
When a fanfiction gets so good that you start imagining stories for the fanfiction and then it becomes fanfiction fanfiction.

It was no trouble at all, I really do love you guys! :D

Whooooaaaa :O I think I do that sometimes XD

Thank you so much for reviewing!

3) Furever a Fan chapter 11 . Dec 22

Mew thinks puns are pawsitively pawsome? Meow is purry happy! Meow thinks mew has a purry pawsome fic here and purrlease update b4 meow furnds the need to furead anofur furry long fic.

Heee heee, I've updateddddd!I hope you like it purry much!And keep those puns coming! XD Thank you so much for your super awesome reviews!They never fail to make mew smile! :D

4)Lisbeth chapter 11 . Dec 22

Wow...:( :( But isn't nathelie always with Adrian in the cartoon ? The last chapte brought more hate for chole.
But I'm so happy you read the reveiws! Thanks so much

She is :( But I felt he needed to be more lonely for the plot to thicken, of course I read the reviews!You guys are my world!It's no trouble at all!Thank you so much for reviewing!

5) catbug21 chapter 11 . Dec 22

i cried i cried so hard poor adrien trust me im balling right it amerzing

I'm sorry it made you cry :"( but I'm glad you found it amazing!Thank you so much for reviewing!

6) Katistrophic chapter 11 . Dec 22

This is the fan fiction I have been waiting for. I am dead serious this is my dream. I am in love . Thank you, I can happily die now.

I'm so happy you love it, I'm really honored, but please don't die on me X'( Thank you so much for reviewing!

7) Guest chapter 11 . Dec 22

IM SERIOUS! THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC IVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE! IT SHOWS TRUE PAIN AND EVIL IN JUST THE RIGHT WAY EITH THE BEST TORMENTED PAST OF ADRIEN AND THE LIGHT THAT SHINES SO BRIGHTLY FROM MARINETTE IS JUST MAGNIFACENT! I CAN DIE PEACEFULLY NOW, I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE FANFIC!

Wow really? :D Thanks! Wait, don't dieeeee!I'll write more, I promise! Just don't die! Thank you so much for your sweet review!

8)Lokilust chapter 11 . Dec 22

Btw if your going to take Chloe down you first take away your enemies support which is Sabrina if you like have her be caught trying to delete the police entry and evidence against Chloe and then have adrien bug her phone as record her telling Sabrina to doing that once you taken away her support go all out and send that bitch to jail personally I don't believes the bee mirculous

That's true, but in this story, Sabrina has no idea what Chloe's doing to Adrien, but I have a big plan for that thing,she will neither!Why is she getting it? X( Thank you so much for the review! :D

9)PandaLUVpanda chapter 11 . Dec 22

Thank you so much! I'll take your advice into account, but I recently got a new job, so...if I do start writing, it will have to be when I have time. I really appreciate you answering my amateurish questions. :)

Awww it's okay!It's not amateurish,they're brilliant, and there's no harm in asking brilliant questions :) Thank you for reviewing!

10)PEACHES chapter 11 . Dec 22

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update real quick

Just updated!Hope you enjoy it! Thank you for reviewing! :D

11) Miralove chapter 11 . Dec 22

Now I get nervous with the intense chapter. But I think I could handle it. Ohhhh, my arms are shaking. And will Chlor and Marinette like meet again and talk about Adrien or Chat Noir or...?

Hey Mira! Don't worry, you'll handle it :D … Well I don't wanna give a spoiler…But perhaps they wont,or maybe they will, who knows? ;) Thank you

for reviewing!

12) Michelle Rita chapter 11 . Dec 22

You think in a chapter you can explain why Chloe is doing this why she's like this and why she hates Marinette you can make it up from the top of your head because no one is just born evil and go to such lengths for no reason especially to Marinette please please I'm begging you it doesn't need to be the next chapter just in a chapter pwease (bats puppy dog eyes)

Hmmmm, I'll think about it,buuuut since you asked so nicely,maybe I will! :D Thank you for reviewing!

13)Shelly Marsh chapter 11 . Dec 22

I love it it's everything I want in a MariChat fic romance a poessesive green eyed kitty, an innocent kind but witty Marinette a Charon with a character development involving our cherry blossom ladybug

Awwww, I'm glad you love it! :D Thank you so much for this amazing review!

14) Shelly Marsh chapter 11 . Dec 22

Wait I got an idea of how he can take down chole it involves hidden camera and posting it online add it up together with the video chat had when he confronted the guys Chloe blackmailed and BAM take down! Woo woo and Don't say it won't be Easy cuz it totes will besides Chloe's has too much lack of brain cells to know and as long as Adrien makes sure to not say anything for her to ruin the plan BAM instance take down

Hmmm, that is a pretty cool idea, but I've already plotted how she's going to get taken down…Lets say its more…Brutal… I can't say anything else because I don't want to spoil it, but thank you so much for this awesome suggestion and review!

15)random person chapter 11 . Dec 22

i normally don't review anything and stay in the background despite my BURNING THOUGHTS AND QUESTIONS on a chapter or story, reading all your responses to your guest reviews has encouraged me to write one myself! (pls keep in mind this is my 2 review EVER, and the first on was for my close friend's first fanfic.) so without further adu...
what's with the quote at the top of the chapter? (i think it"s called the chapter summery but i don't know for sure) in the first couple of chapters it made sense, but now that their relationship has evolved to it's current level i just cant picture it happening AT ALL. DOES SOMETHING HAPPEN?! (i know you probably wont give me a straight answer because this is the miraculous fandom and NO SPOILERS! but please just keep it in mind.)

Hey :D Okay the chapter summary is definitely in the story, I know it seems all hearts and roses no but that quote is part of one of the really dark,intense chapters that will come around the climax of the story.I can't say more than that because I don't want to ruin it, but I have to say you've done a brilliant job on this review and I think you're amazing, thank you so much for reviewing!And remember, I'm here to answer anything! :D

16)Guest chapter 11 . Dec 22

Cat puns?...
LOL

I just had to do it, I couldn't resist XD Thank you so much for reviewing!

17) Guest chapter 11 . Dec 23

Loved it

I'm so happy you did!Thank you so much for reviewing!

18)Guest chapter 11 . Dec 23

Ch 12 pls

Just posted it!I hope you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for reviewing!

19)Whoop chapter 11 . Dec 24

I LOVE IT! CONTINUE TO WRITE BECAUSE THIS IS A GREAT STORY AND I WANT TO HEAR IT! :D

I'm so glad you do! I will, I will! :D Thank you so much for reviewing!

20) Idk chapter 11 . Dec 25

I didn't expect you to respond. I feel so special :D! Keep up the good writing!

You guys are all extremely special to me, thank you so much,I will!And thank you for reviewing!

21) AdrinetteLover chapter 11 . Dec 26

Please continue with this story, I want to read more MariChat romantic moments, I really want to know when Mari will realize that she loves Chat, how Chat falls for her and I can't wait to see Chloe's end!

I will :D Don't worry, it will all come in time! :D Thank you so much for reviewing this!

CHAPTER 12

1)Lokilust chapter 12 . Dec 28, 2016

Not just Chloe go down but her father and Sabrina as well if you ask y the father is because he is blind to the crimes of his daughter and Sabrina for helping so what did you think of my plan I mention

Hmmmm, wellll, Sabrina has no idea about what Chloe is doing, so she hasn't helped like in the slightest. Mayor Bourgeois… Perhaps you're onto something there!We'll just have to wait and see!Thank you for the cool suggestion and review!

2) Izzy chapter 12 . Dec 28, 2016

Omg! This give me shivers! Probably the best three chapters I read in this fan Fiction! Plz update soon!

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I have, and I hope you've enjoyed that chapter,thank you for reviewing it!

3) Miralove chapter 12 . Dec 28, 2016

Fuck. Holy Shiiiiiiiiiiit! Damn, how the hell they did that to her? In a party? I am going to die with Marinette.

I know, I know! X'( Absolute morons! No no no!Don't die! Come back! Thank you so much for reviewing! :D

4)Guest chapter 12 . Dec 28, 2016

I just wanted to say...I'm in love with your fic. WHY DOES THIS HAPPEN TO ADRIEN? WHY MARINETTE? Other than that, aaahhh it is awesome. This chapter went from 0 to 100 real quick. And also, this ain't a copied fic because it is unique, mari isn't defenceless, Adrien has friends, there are miraculous, Adrien goes to school, his motives were different, and countless other differences. Just bc it's an evil!chat fic doesn't mean it's copied. Just wanted u to know that and ily!

Awwwww! I'm glad you think so! :O Wow thank you so so so much, I'm glad you picked up those little important things :D I love you too!Like a whole dang lot! Thank you so much for your kind words and amazing review!

5)Peachy Queen chapter 12 . Dec 28, 2016

And on my b-day, no less. Best fanfic ever. Seriously. Wow.

Wow you really think so? :D Happy Birthday!I hope you have an absolutely amazing,super awesome, fantastic splendid,miraculous year and that all of your dreams and that all of your dreams and aspirations become reality! Thank you so much for reviewing!

6) Guest chapter 12 . Dec 28, 2016

No no ! You cant leave us like this we need the next chapter I want to read how he gets chloe back!

Next chapter is uuuup! I hope you like it!Thank you so much for reviewing! :D

7) Guest chapter 12 . Dec 28, 2016

No no ! You cant leave us like this we need the next chapter I want to read how he gets chloe back!

It's ouuutttt!Hope you enjoy it!And thank you so much for reviewing!

8) Guest chapter 12 . Dec 29, 2016

Thank you sooooooooooooo much for the super long chapter! I can't wait to see what Chat does to Chloe! And those guys who hurt our Mari!

You're welcome!The next chapter is out and I really hope you enjoy it!Thank you so so much for reviewing!

9)JayFan67 chapter 12 . Dec 29, 2016

CHLOE IS GOING DOWN! IF CHAT DOESN'T GET HER, I CERTAINLY WILL! *revs dual chainsaws menacingly* CHLOE BOURGEOIS! *becomes akumatized into Chain Link, chainsaw akuma XD* I DON'T CARE ABOUT THE MIRACULOUSES, I. WILL. END. HER!

-JF

(P. S. forgot to log in, please forgive me D:)

LMAO! XD

Wait wait wait!Chat needs to finish this on his ownnn! Omg Chainsaw Akuma XD I forgive you, thank you so much for reviewing!I laughed!

10) Yoko89 chapter 12 . Dec 29, 2016

this my real review ignore the other one that is meant for another email. DAMN! I cannot wait for what happens next I want revenge on what Chloe did to Mari keep up the amazing work cannot wait for the rest.

Oki dokes!Heee heeee,my revenge plan will be a loooong one! :D Thank you so much!And thank you so much for reviewing!

11)Ladybug5252 chapter 12 . Dec 29, 2016

THIS MESSED WITH MY EMOTIONS SO MUCH! YOU ARE AMAZING AT WRITING PLEASE CONTINUE! Also I saw earlier that you were going through something, I hope that whatever that something is it makes you stronger. THANK YOU FIR DOING THE WORLD A FAVOR AND WRITING THIS! 3

Awwwww thank you thank you I will!I was buttttt I'm okay now, thank you so much for caring!I love you!And you're very welcome!I love writing this!Thank you so much for reviewing!

12)catbug12 37d chapter 12 . Dec 29, 2016

will adrien finally be brave and tell his father?

Not now…But eventuallyyyyy maybe… ;) Thank you so much for this review question!I hope you enjoyed the chapter!

13) random person chapter 12 . Dec 29, 2016

hi! it's me again! thank you for answering me in this chapter! (i feel so special) i really want to give you a big hug right now because *long high-pitch squeal* yyyooouuuuu aaaannnnsssswwwweeeerrrreeeedddd mmeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! and i'm no longer super confused when i see the summery before diving into the latest update, but i cant due to the obvious conflict of, you are on my computer screen sssoooooooo... please imagine someone giving you a nice big hug or give one to your self! (cause your awesome and, in my opinion, deserve a million more) but remember that it's a very big thank you from some human on the other side of your screen! have a wonderful day, this new chapter is awesome, and (this is the last one, i promise) tttthhhhaaaaannnnkkkkkkk yyyyyooooouuuuu! *continues high-pitched squealing*

Hey there! You're very welcome!I'm so excited that you've reviewed again!I love you! Awwwwww I'd really love a hug! *The millions would be pretty awesome too!* I'm glad you thought so! Thank you thank you thank you for this super sweet,kind, wonderful review!You really made me smile a whole lot so thank you very very much!

14)BlackChat chapter 12 . Dec 29, 2016

OMG OMG OMG YASS! This story is soooo amazing. I honestly think you are one of the better writers on this website, and I've read about a hundred fanfics by now. Also, DIE CHLOE DIE! Sorry, just had to get that out of my system lol. XD.

Keep Writing. Bye!

Hee hee hee, Thank youuuuu! Wow really?That such an honour to hear, I'm really flattered thank you so so so much!LMAO,patience, her demise will come in time! ;) XD Thank you so much for your kind words and amazing review!

15)katherine Heart chapter 12 . Dec 29, 2016

omg! i love it i cant wait to see what happens!

I'm so glad that you do!And I really hope you enjoyed chapter 13!Thank you so much for reviewing!

16) MissfanFic0405 chapter 12 . Dec 29, 2016

That was totally, obviously and most DEFINATELY worth the wait. The cliffhanger left me hanging. (Obviously, its called a cliffHANGER) but still...anyways hope you had a good Christmas! The update was an AWESOME gift
Chlo is dead now though...eish...am I a bad person to say I don't feel sorry for her? ...not the slightest bit of remorse for that dementor. She literally sucks the life out of me in this fic, and she's a fictional character! : (:
Good luck in for writing on! Can't waaaaaait

Yayyyyy! I'm glad you thought so!I had a great Christmas!I hope you did too!No no, you aren't, I feel exactly the same way!OMG loving the Harry Potter reference, besides Miraculous, Harry Potter is one of my favourite fandoms!Thanks!I hope you enjoyed chapter 13!And thank you so much for reviewing!

17) Guest chapter 12 . Dec 30, 2016

Will there be more chapters I love them

Yes of course!Awwww thank you!And thank you for reviewing!

18)Guest chapter 12 . Dec 30, 2016

I know you just updated this but... I really need to know what happens to Mari and Adrien! I love your story so much thank you for writing it!

Hiiii!I updated and I really hope you enjoy it!I'm so happy that you love this story!And thank you so much for reviewing it! :D

19)Guest chapter 12 . Jan 1

OMG THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! Absolutely LOVED the chapter! Can't wait for more! :D Oh, and Happy New Year!

You're very welcome!Wow :D I'm so excited that you did! Thank you so so much and a very happy new year to you as well! And thank you for reviewing!

20) chapter 12 . Jan 1

This is fucking amazing!

Adrien didn't go to school right? So he doesn't know how people hate Chloe. If she told them that he touched her her even if it was the opposite way around, they wouldn't believe her, would they? I don't think they will but we'll see.

Poor Mari! Chloe you're are an arse.

Thanks! Nope, he didn't, and they wouldn't believe doesn't exactly know that they wont believe her, and he's a bit too frightened to take the risk… So he doesn't want to tell anyone as she is an a***!Thank you so so so much for reviewing!

21)Furever a Fan chapter 12 . Jan 2

Oh...my...FUR! That was furishly pawsome! Meow! The _itch Is meowing down! I thank mew so much fur mews furtastic fics! Meow enjoyed it purry much! But...Meow wants to knyow what the purry fur happened nyext! What a meowy cliffhanger...

Awwww thanks!Yeah she is!You're very welcome and I'm glad you enjoy em! :D Hope you enjoy the latest chapter! Thank you so much for your Punny review! ;) :D

22)DeepKnife chapter 12 . Jan 2

I'm reading thru this and I feel like crying
I think you should kill Chloe or have something EXTREMELY bad happen to her.
Can't wait for the next chapter of this sad pile of shit
*start to cry silently*
Bye
Love your story

Nawwww!Dont cry! Perhaps I will :3 I hope you enjoy the next chapter! *Hands you a handkerchief* Thank you!And thank you for reviewing it!You rock!

23)Guest chapter 12 . Jan 3

Can't wait for the next chapter! So excited

:D I hope you enjoy it then! Thank you so much for reviewing!

24) WHOOP chapter 12 . Jan 4

OMG CLIFFHANGER! I MUST HEAR MORE! PLEASE WRITE!

I will I will! I hope you enjoy it! Thank you so much for reviewing! :D

25)Lilly chapter 12 . 7h ago

0.0 omg u make it impossible to sleep at night , I must know what happens till the end ! Please it's soooo goood ! Xooxoxoxoxo

Lmao I tryyyyyy! Awwww thank you! I'm so happy you think so! I hope you enjoyed the latest instalment and thank you so much for reviewing!

CHAPTER 13:

1)Tamashi chapter 13 . Jan 4

*clap, clap, and clap 1000* goood dammit, that's why i call a magnifique VENDETTA :D oh dear, i really love how you interact with the characters...so deep, showing us their angst their moral... o jezz i need to see more! keep going *w*

*Bows* Heee heee, thank you!I'm so glad that you do, I really try my you will!The next chapter is out!I hope you enjoy it!Thank you so much for reviewing!

2) Oh my chapter 13 . Jan 4

BURN YOU LITTLE SHITS

Heee heee, and burn they did :3 Thank you so much for reviewing!

3)Miralove chapter 13 . Jan 4

OMG, finally this chapter. I was waiting like crazy. But I have to say that those guys deserved the pain, how could somebody do THAT to Marinette? She even care about a villain! I love Chat so much. But it's ok, I can share him with Marinette.

Lmao yes they did, they're absolute morons. Hee heee, I know, I feel the same way. :'( Thank you so much for reviewing Mira!

4)akacool12 chapter 13 . Jan 4

hissssssss. dont you think those guys were a little hard on mari. well really hard, but how could they! but still i understand you put the roughness in so that you can show how much he cares for her. :-) anyway another question:
Chat kisses mari on the forehead when shes asleep right? sooooooo, how long do i have to wait until their first kiss on lips. im not rushing you but its just that the suspense is killing me. :-)

They were a bit too hard ayyy, but then again, this is a dangerous angsty fic!And yes I neded to show the extent of his care ;) Yes he does kiss her on the forehead…Hmmm, well I suppose it will come, not too soon, but not too far away, when it does, it will certainly be beautiful :) Thank you so much for reviewing!

5)DeepKnife chapter 13 . Jan 4

Why do I want some chili right now.
Well I just have to say that...You are a dark human being
Managing to keep it all light and funny but also dark and creepy 0.0
I fear for my not so innocent mind
Pllease please just be done with it and kill Chloe
Look out Chat noir I honestly think that Mari gonna hit you and laugh about it :)
I love this so much
When will the next update be
I love this so much
Bye
I'm gonna dream of murdering chilies now

Lmao, so I've been told :3

I would love to kill her, but I want her to suffer just a bit more. Death would be far too simple.I'm so glad that you love it!I just updated so remember to check that long one out! :D I hope you enjoy it, and thank you so much for reviewing!

6)MLBFanxox chapter 13 . Jan 4

OMG THIS IS INCREDIBLY FANTASTICALLY AWESOME PLEASE DO UPDATE SOON IM DYIIIIINNNGGGGG

Awwwwww thank you! I hope you enjoy the next chapter!Thank you so much for reviewing! (PS DON'T DIE OR CHAT WILL COME AFTER YOU)

7)Guest chapter 13 . Jan 4

Chloe needs to go to prison and be sentenced with no parole for hiring the bastards to try and harm and kill Marinette. And for raping Adrien.

I completely agree with you.I'm serious, she sucks. Thank you so much for reviewing!

8)ShiningStar78 chapter 13 . Jan 4

Gosh, you got some mad writing skills here, I love how you can make it funny and light one second and sick and twisted the other. Actually I like dark, creepy stories but this is just... WAH. The thing that scares me the most though, is the fact that I was actually smirking and chuckling while I was reading this... guess my darker side took over. Please update soon! I NEED another chapter! XD

Lmao thank youuuu! I try! Hey don't worry, there's nothing wrong with being cynical ;) Thank you so much for reviewing!

9)Whop chapter 13 . Jan 4

PLEASE WRITE MORE I LOVE IT

Gotcha!Thank you for reviewinh!

10)guest11111111111 chapter 13 . Jan 4

omg yes I have been waiitng for so long love this make more its amazing beyond all the fics i have read BLOODY chat noir is my life ;) yes revenge on those ppl REVENGE MWAHAHAHAHAHA

Awwwww thank you! He's mine too XD Thank you so much for this crazy awesome review!

11)Vengeful dragon chapter 13 . Jan 4

It is very interesting reading this as it has such a dark theme wich is both shocking and enticing. I have noticed that he only attacks monsters which I thank you for as violence for the sake of violence tends to irritate me but losing anger and righting wrongs make it, well I am going to use the term delicious!

That's true Heee heee delicious in a chapter involving chillies :D Lmao, thank you so much for reviewing!

12)Guest chapter 13 . Jan 4

pls tell me that chat deleted the photos of mari!

Yes, yes he did! Thanks for the question!And for reviewing!

13)scaring myself chapter 13 . Jan 4

this is the kind of chapter you read alone in a dark corner while evilly laughing to yourself like a psychopathic maniac, i love it. thank you for this gift.

Lmao that's how I am when I write these kinds of chapters… Heee hee, thanks!And you're very welcome!Thank you for reviewing!

14)Pikachu chapter 13 . Jan 4

You have to make more! This is the best!

I promise that I will!Thanks!And thank you for reviewing! :') Love the name btw!

15)Furever a Fan chapter 13 . Jan 5

MEW WAS SO PAWSOME! ~ Meow could fur a purrfect death with no mewgrets... gl on mews test! Nya~ ~ meows furring to draw a purry fat but pawsomely cuteeee! Kitty Caaaattt! (Mew...copied...furom...muta...)

Awww thank youuuu! But don't die!I'll miss you!Thank you again for reviewing, I seriously wait for your review Kuro Tora!

16)I LOVE IT chapter 13 . Jan 5

Keep writing! Don't leave us hanging!

Heee heee, got it! Thank you so much for reviewing!Enjoy the next instalment!

17)Guest chapter 13 . Jan 5

.when is the next chapter coming out ?

It just diiiiid!I really hope you enjoy it, thank you so much for reviewing!

18)Izzy chapter 13 . Jan 5

This was amazing! Please please please please update soon

Awwww thank you! I just did, it's super long so I hooooope that it makes up for the long wait!Thank you so much for reviewing!

19)lexlex13 chapter 13 . Jan 5

I love this story so much. Im literally bursting with joy when I find out there is a new chapter.

Awwwww thank you so much lexlex! :D That makes me feel really appreciated :') hank you so much for reviewing!

20)an1malover chapter 13 . Jan 5

i just can't stop reading this story, and I'm very glad to read it. looking forward to your next chapter :3

I'm just so excited that you're enjoying it!I just updated, so I hope you enjoy it!Thank you so much for reviewing!

21)Chibi Fighter chapter 13 . Jan 5

I love your story so much! The way you wrote chat as broken villain is well written and well thought out and detailed which makes me wonder...are you okay? Anyways I really liked this chapter
and I can only imagine how Marinette will react when she finds out what chat did, if she finds that is. Anyways please keep up the good work :3

Thank youuuu! Well, I'd like to think that I am I'm so glad you did!I'll do my best, thank you so much for reviewing!

22)MLBFanxox chapter 13 . Jan 5

Crossing fingers
How was ur results?
I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE UPDATE OMG OMG OMG

I did really great actually!Aww thank you, I just posted the next chapter, I hope you enjoy it!Thank you so much for reviewing!

23)MissfanFic0405 chapter 13 . Jan 5

*blinks twice before coming out of enclosed reading hole*
Woah. Woah. Woah. Woah. Woah. Woah. WOAH.
Chat got them gooooooooooood. Shame. They could've denied and went to police but nie gits ek moet dit nou doen *rolls eyes *. Those three Banshees did it and felt it.
Well worth the wait! Thanks and hope the results were good! *thumbs up and smiles as if she didn't just read torture scenes*

Hell yeah he did! Hulle wil dood wens Chat kon hulle moord. *sigh* Maar Plagg sal woedend wees. 'n Woedend Plagg is 'n skrikwekkende Plagg. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yeah they were, I ended up with a 76% aggregate overall and a couple of distinctions, I'm gonna send the subjects with B's for remarking though!Thank you so much for reviewing!

24)Guest chapter 13 . Jan 6

I hope your results came out well.

Dude! This chapter was great.
I wonder if Marinette saw the live broadcast? Hopefully, she drank enough water and ate all the stuff she was supposed to.
Adrien was livid, and with reason.
I wonder if Chloe will be stupid enough to tell who the girl was or if her sense of self preservation will win out...
Looking forward to your next chapter, as always!

I'm glad you think so!

Heee heee you shall see!I hope you enjoy it, I just posted! Thank you so much for reviewingggg!

25)Guest chapter 13 . Jan 6

love this so much

Awww thank you so much!And thank you for reviewing!

26)Guest chapter 13 . Jan 6

Okay...
This i sooooooo awesome! You are an insanely talented writer gurrlllll! I can no to read more of this story! Just keep doing your best!️️
-Kaly

Really? :D You think so?I will Kaly!Thank you so much, and also thank you for the review!

27)Your fan chapter 13 . Jan 6

O.O omg ... clap clap clap , that was intense but very greatly written ...

*Bows low* I'm glad you think so! :D Thank you so much for reviewing!

28)Miraculous fan chapter 13 . Jan 7

This was amazing!I loved every bit of this chapter especially the revenge part of it.

Heeee heee, I loved writing that part… *Evil laugh* Thank you so much for reviewing it!

29)xmaslover chapter 13 . Jan 7

This is a very good story you're a very good writer! I really would love to read the chapter with sentences from the summary in it. And I also would love to see Ladybug.

Awwww thank you!'m honoured! Oh it will come in time, not right now though, :D Thank you so much for reviewing!

30)Guest chapter 13 . Jan 8

I absolutely loved this fanfic to far! You put so much detail into it and it made me feel like I was in that world! I think you are an amazing writer and I can't wait for more!

:') I love when I get reviews like this, it makes everything worth while, then again every review makes writing worthwhile, but I'm really thankful that you feel this way,Thank you so much for this review!

31)FanficAddict chapter 13 . Jan 8

I LOVE THIS FANFIC SO MUCH OMG. AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING!

Thank youuuuu! :D :D :D *Sighs in happiness* And thank you so much for reviewing!

32)Katsorific chapter 13 . Jan 9

thank you holy jeezuz lord that you made this fanfic. It's has the right balance of romance and hurt and comfort and violence and emotion and sexuality(ish). The relationship between Mari and CHAT is astounding. I believe you could genuinely be a successful writer. THIS STORY IS SO PROFESSIONALLY BEAUTIFUL AND OMG IT MAKES EVERYTHING SO GOOD. I LOVE THIS SO MUCHHHHHH. PLEASE, AFTER YOU HAVE FINISHED WITH THIS FANFIC, PLEASE TRY TO MAKE ANOTHER MIRACULOUS LADYBUG FANFIC WITH ANOTHER PLOT LINE BUT SAME FEEL( with the emotions and shizzz) thank you very much Rara, I worship you

Hee heee, just using my God given gift, you think so? That would be so wonderful if I could!I will do that, I promise, I want to finish my other one first though!But I will, don't 're very welcome!Thank you so much! And thank you for this inspirational review!

33)Theamazinger chapter 13 . Jan 13

I'd love to see marinettes thoughts on all this, she's probably having second thoughts on being close to him. I can just imagine her scolding him like the disappointed mother he never had...

Heee heee, well the chapter is up ;) And I hope you enjoy it! Thank you so much for reviewing! *Hopefully Marinette isn't to mean*

34)MissfanFic0405 chapter 13 . Jan 14

Please update soon! I know school/university started a few days ago, but when you get the time, please update! I really can't wait to see what happens, and I'm sure that other readers feel the same. Mine truly is an amazing story, and its so realistic. Cause, well, as much as I hate so say it, this stuff happens in real life. (Not a hot guy prouncing around in a cat suit, I mean what Chloe's doing.) Can't wait for your next update :)

PS, if you start seeing the name "batch of books" reviewing, its me. My friend, 'Cupcake' came up with it, now I w

I will! I just put the newest instalment up, and I really hope you love it! Awww, you're making me blush *hides face*, yes, yes it does,doesn't it?

I'm going to continue the rest of my response with the rest of your review XD

35)MissfanFic0405 chapter 13 . Jan 14

Merlin's Balls this device posted my review while I was busy typing!

*glares at phone* as I was saaayyyiiingg.

My new name is batch of books! My friend batch of cupcakes came up with it, cause I read so much! *grins* hehe

~MissfanFic0405, now known as batch of books

Oh I hate when that happens, don't worry, it happens to us all :'( *Sobs* That's actually a really super cool name :o Thank you so much for reviewing!I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

36)batch of books chapter 13 . Jan 17

Writer's block? School, University, Life? Whatever it is, I really hope that gets better. I really cannot, emphasis on cannot, wait for the next chapter.
Now I should sleep (ha right) as I have school tomorrow.

Data struggles -_- The Telkom line was down so I had no wifi, I just ordered a P9 and so I was awaiting it,needless to say I had nothing to make a wifi hotspot from, and so I was reduced to responding to reviews whenever I went to a friend's place. It's back now though so hopefully I won't have a problem,have a great day at school!It's like 1:13 right now lmao,but thank you so much for reviewing!

Feeling like a biaaatch for letting the reviews accumulate but life was messing with me guys, it's been a shitty year for me, nevertheless,I'm going to try to answer all the GR of the final chapters part one and two,here we go!

Final Chapter:Part One

1) Lokilust chapter 23 . Sep 16

Send Alya and Nino their miraculous

Hey! Hmmm, we'll have to see about that,thank you for reviewing!

2) Aurei chapter 23 . Sep 17

THE SUSPENSE!
WWWHHHHHYYYY?!

Umm...many pages? IDK

I'm sorry I'm sorryyyy!The pages were actually 75, I had a cramp by the time I was done! Thank you so much for reviewing!

3) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

OMG...

I know right… Thank you for reviewing hee hee

4) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

53 pages

Nooo, 75, good try though!

5) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

And this, kids, is why being a tramatized sociopath is bad.

Hee heee, my parents just think I'm strange and leave me in my room… Wait you're talking about Chat?Pfffttt I knew that hee heee *looks around*, he has some issues

6) Fragile leaf chapter 23 . Sep 17

Me: I can totally handle gore

Also me: cries and can't handle a rated-t description of what is essentially "cat-man beats up some dude on a boat."

Awww man I'm sorry I'm sorry I hope you didn't cry too much! Thank you for reviewing even though you were sad!

7) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hee heee, hope you enjoyed it!

8) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

132 pages? Is the ending going to be a "Happy" ending? Please I need it be be happy or else I'm going to die of sadness :(

I'll try my besterest! I wouldn't want to make anyone sad :(

9) Maryam chapter 23 . Sep 17

This is such a good story I'm gonna be so depressed when it ends keep writing and this chapters full of drama

Don't you worry, we have a looooong way to go,and thank you for the review!

10) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

Hii!This story is amazing!WOWW *O* love 're an awesome writer!goid job,hugs and kisses from SLOVENIA 3 love ya

Heyyyy! Oh cool I have another reviewer from Slovenia?!That's amazing! Love you too and thank you for reviewing!

11) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

Please please please please please please please please poosssstttttttttttt!

I promise I will asap! Thank you for reviewing!

12) guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

OK HURRY PLEASE CONTINUE I LOVE THIS STORY

Oki doki! I'll do my best, and thank you for taking the time to review!

13) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

Update part 2 as soon as possible please! I'm begging you! I'm so sad to see this end but I love it and I need to know what happens so please update as soon as possible!

Don't sweat, we have a looooong way to go!Thank you for reviewing!

14) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

Ooooohhhhh that's where the description came from. And aaaahhhhh, I love this story so much!

Lmao I bet everyone was like, "finally, the description is here!"Hee hee, thank you!And Thank you for reviewing!

15) FONZ chapter 23 . Sep 17

This is one of the best fanfics i have read literally it scared me

Whoaaaaa, seriously? Thank you! And thank you for reviewing(Hope I didn't scare you too bad coz the sequel is coming)

16) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 17

i love this so much i can't wait for the next chapter

Awwww, hope youre ready for the sequel! And thank you for this review!

17) Guest4 chapter 23 . Sep 17

My guess 106 pages at least.

Heyyyy, it was 75, but good guess! And thank you for reviewing!

18) Frankie chapter 23 . Sep 18

Just found your story today and I binge read the entire thing. I love what you're doing with it.
I hope Nathaniel pulls through and I really hope Chloe gets what's coming to her. I feel she gets away with too much in the show. So, having extra evil chloe get brought down will be amazing.
I'm also curious as to what happened to Fu and I can only assume.
Please see this story through to the end. I can't wait.

Awww thank you, don't worry, everything will tie up in the sequel, I promise, so stay tuned!And thank you for the review!

19) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 18

Jkk

Babe, talk to meeee!I don't understand *sobs loudly*

20) Lilja Olafsson chapter 23 . Sep 20

OMG IM ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT! HURRY UP AND POST IT PLEASE!

Oooooohhhh!I'm so happy I got to evoke that reaction from you! Thank you for reviewing!

21) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 20

Oh gosh this is hands down the BEST CHAPTER I'VE EVER READ! How the heck did you come up with this?!ps I think it was around 20-25 pages for Microsoft word in size 14 calibri body font

Awwww thank you!I really tried hard on it! It was actually 75 pages, but good try! And thank you so much for reviewing!

22) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 21

OH MY GOSH PLEASE DONT KILL HER... without some great explaination at least" Btw ive just marathoned this and i absolutly love it

Omg I love FF marathons, do you have any suggestions?I feel I've read like everything! Don't worry, I wont kill her heee heee, and thank you for reviewing!

23) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 22

Can't wait for the next one...hope you do a sequel to this mine to your

Hee heee, of course! Hope youre pumped!Thank you for this review!

24) Miralove chapter 23 . Sep 22

OH MY FREAAAAAAKIIIING LOVEE! So much talent kills me, why do you write so good?!

Now I'm dying, call an ambulance, no, better, I need part two for salvation!

And the pages were, 6 I think

Heyyy Mira! Noooo don't die! Part two is ouuuutttt, man, six?Ahhh it was 75 :'( Thank you for reviewing!

25) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 22

And 6 pages

Noooooo :'( Thank you for trying though!

26) MadiAmbrie chapter 23 . Sep 22

Ahhhhhh! This was what I said when I saw you updated. I was insanely happy! You have made my week! Alright anyways the chapter:
I loved it! Again amazing. I liked how much more involved Alya was in all of this. The piano scene was wonderful! That was really sweet and it showed the Adrien in Chat. But now the BIG scene. My goodness I was flinching the whole time Chat attacked Marcus. It was gruesome and also very well written! I loved reading the initial quote even though I also hated it cause of how horrible the situation was. Now I know a lot of people are hating on Marinette right now but if I just saw someone destroy another human being like that while enjoying it enough to laugh I would definitely have a few things to say myself. Of course I do have to admit she did know everything Chat was capable of so she put herself in that situation. But Chat took it too far and shouldn't think he can walk in with a swift apology ~ which he doesn't think he can. Still I love both Chat and Marinette and I do hope that they work this out which I'm sure they will. I just really hope Chat doesn't take it as far as he did with Marcus when or if (depending if Tikki somehow finds Marinette and she's able to Ladybug herself out of the situation) he finds the people who have kidnapped her.
Im really looking forward to a few things though like...
~Marinette as Ladybug
~The big Chat/Adrien reveal
~Chloe getting everything she deserves
~Possibly a flash forward to see Nino with his miraculous?
~Not that I'm looking forward to it but seeing when Marinette finally learns Nathanael has been in the hospital
~Seeing what happened with the Master Fu situation
~What a villain Chat free Paris is going to be like
~When or if Chloe finds out Chats Adrien
There's plenty more but I need to stop cause I've already typed so much haha. I honestly do feel like I'm forgetting something though...
Oh well if I remember I just leave another comment!
I'm gonna tell you this again and it probably won't be for the last time you're an amazing writer. Like I said I was flinching during the whole attack scene it was all so real. You bring this all to life you're amazing. Your fanfic is also purely amazing and I'm sad but also happy to see it ending. I would love though if after you've finished this fic that maybe you could make a sequel or a one-shot of all the characters lives "now". That'd be awesome! Alright alright this review is insanely long. Love you love your writing love this fic!

You're exactly right, honestly, if I were her and I saw my man slaughtering some guy and barely listening to anything Im saying, I would go cold and crazy on him too, they will work it out, they always doooo, okay so

~done

~Hmm, done

~Getting there

~Nopeee

~Eeeep, perhaps it will happen soon

~Getting there

~IF she ever finds out, which I doubt

Awwww thank you so so so much, I try my best, and I can tell you that it isn't ending any time soon,I love you too, and I'm so happy to have you guys to support me, it makes everything worth while, thank you so much for this review!

27) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 23

This is really really good. Really intense and amazing chapter. Please please update again soon!

Thanks!I'll update asap okay? Thank you so much for reviewing!

28) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 23

I can't wait for the chapter, been having a bad day and this made me better...can't wait for the next one

Awww man, sorry about your bad day, I hate those, I hope youre ready for the sequel!and thank you so much for reviewing!

29) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 24

I love this fan fiction so so much !
I've been waiting s long for the final chapter I cant believe its already here. All that's left is part 2.
don't stop

27 pages ?

Okay, I'll make it as long as possible, as long as you continue to support me, deal?Thank you so much for reviewing!

30) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 24

OBVIOUSLY ME NOT! I DIDN'T ACCEPT IT AND DIDN'T SIGN FOR THE FEELS. This chapter is a masterpiece please update the second part I am waI ting for it anxiously. I can't wait to see what will happen

Heee hheee, the next part is out, and I hope you enjoy it!Also thank you for reviewing!

31) Ti chapter 23 . Sep 24

Rara you dirty brother killer I know what you did there, stop making us wait man. Bro, pal, friend. I don't want to hurt you but stop letting us all suffer. I thought we had something man, I thought you had a s pecial bonding with the readers like Adrien and Nino have

Pffft Babe suffering is a certain step of falling in love! I'm sure that's what Margaret Mitchell actually meant! Lmao

32) Character chapter 23 . Sep 24

When I compare Adrien now with Adrien from the past chapters you can see a character development. This is a huge success and it pleases me in so many ways. I love to see how characters change and develope into someone better.

I tried really hard with him, I'm happy that you guys notice, thank you so much for reviewing!

33) Undertale chapter 23 . Sep 24

I'M EMOTIONALLY AND MENTALLY NOT READY AND STABLE .

NO!You're brave and awesome and you can do this!Thank you for reviewing!

34) Alya chapter 23 . Sep 24

I love how Alya is taking more part in this story, since she is my favorite character. I laughed when she taught that Nino is cheating on her with Adrien aka Chat Noir.

Lmao I wanted to add her for ages! That part, I just had to, to show how close the boys had actually gotten, thank you for reviewing!

35) Sonikku chapter 23 . Sep 24

I'm gotta go and catch my feelings back. Since I didn't know that I was being signed up for this shit.
I didn't agree to this.

Gotta go

I would help you but like my feelings are having their own way with me here too, I'm pretty sure they're having fun killing me lmao, thank you for reviewing!

36) Angelica Ham chapter 23 . Sep 24

I CAME AS SOON AS I HEARD

I'm glad!And I hope you enjoyed it!Thank you for reviewing!

37) Sans chapter 23 . Sep 24

It's a beautiful day outside.
Birds are singing,
Flowers are blooming
On days like these
Authors like you, shouldn't be allowed to give me so many feelings.

Lmao I LOL'ed at this review! I do try to though, hee hee, thank you so much for reviewing!

38) Ahaber chapter 23 . Sep 24

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE I NEED TO KNOW HOW IT CONTINUES

Oki! As you wish!Thank you for reviewing!

39) Vandextra chapter 23 . Sep 24

My heart was everywhere with this chapter. Absolutely canNOT wait for update. Ohmygooooosh

Don't worry I felt the same writing it, I'm glad you liked it and thank you for reviewing!

40) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 25

update !update !update !
I love this story

I did!And the sequel will be out sooooon! Thank you so much for reviewing!

41) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 25

I think it's 75 pages

Wow!SPOT ON!WELL DONE! Thank you for guessing and reviewing!

42) An chapter 23 . Sep 25

Me again :)
I just noticed that the last time you updated this story was last year . Pls I need other chapter so pls author update this Amazing story.

Hey love!Going to respond to your other reviews here too, I'm so so so glad that you love the story! Also, wait, last year? But I've been updating monthly,eeeepp! I'll update as soon as I can, which will be soon enogh because I'm going on holiday now,Thank you for reviewing !

43) Winter chapter 23 . Sep 26

Hello there! I just finished reading your story and guess what! I love it! I want the next chapter pls

Heyyy! Awww thanks! Don't worry, it will be out soon! TY for reviewing!

44) Melany chapter 23 . Sep 26

Hi! I just read the sneak peaks and I can't wait anymore! I want a next chapter pls!

Hiiii! The sequel will be out soon, I promise! TY for the review!

45) Elena chapter 23 . Sep 26

This is amazing.I already want to read the final chapter!

Awww thanks! It's outttt, thank you for reviewing!

46) Mari chapter 23 . Sep 26

Ok I need to say it! It's amazing! I fell in love with your story. Can I make a request? Can we see an epilogue in which one Marinette and Adrien have kids? It's his dream... having a family. A real one. Have a good day!

Hmmm, you know what, sure, why not?It wont be an epilogue, maybe a twoshot or something since the story isn't done yet… You too! And thank you for reviewing!

47) Marco chapter 23 . Sep 26

This touched my heart. You are an amazing writer! Pls write an scene with Marinette and Adrien's kids. He deserves a real family.

Hee hee, sure,Mari above wants the same thing, so I'll try my best, thank you for reviewing!

48) Daniel chapter 23 . Sep 26

I'm not good at waiting. Pls update soon.

I'll try my best, thank you for reviewing!

49) Irene chapter 23 . Sep 26

Poor Adrien...he went through a lot. Thank you for writing this story.
These kind of subjects: rape , abortion, etc... many times are ignored.
But you managed to write about them in your story and at the same time making us aware that regardless of being a women or man we can be a victim. And doesn't mean that you are "less man" or a "'whore".

So thank you. I really want to read the end of the story. I already imagined a Marinette and Adrien with their kids in a nice house. All of them very happy...

You're welcome,and you're right, they really are, but they're something I feel strongly about, especially rape, male rape is one of the most overlooked crimes of the century and honestly Irene I cannot tell you just how much it gets to me that there are little boys, teens and men who have to suffer in silence, society has taken a stand against rape, but most of the time female rape is focussed on, and I'm not saying that's wrong,rape is excruciating no matter what gender it is you are, it leaves you paranoid and afraid and wondering what you could have possibly done to deserve it, it sickens me, and the fact that male rape is overlooked just… breaks me. So many men and women, children and teens are quiet about it, because of the blackmail and fear of what people think, I think that's what pushed me to write this story. I want people to realise just how conniving these rapist bastards and bitches are, they play games with you, and the manipulate you into believing you can't get help, but there's always help, the choice is up to you to be brave and speak the heck out. Sorry, I'm ranting eekkkk, anyway, yes someday they will be happy, I'll try not to end this in tragedy!

50) Hi chapter 23 . Sep 26

Okay I need to know what happens in the next chapter. Pls update soon.

Okay I will!And thank you for reviewing!

60) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 27

345 page

75 pages eeeepp! Thank you for trying, and reviewin!

61) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 28

Hello can u pls update soon? Plsss I really love this story

I will, I promise! Awww, I''m glad you do!Thank you for reviewing!

62) Hi chapter 23 . Sep 28

I already imagined them in a beautiful house with their kids ... you are an amazing writer!

Awww okay I have to do that two-shot now!

63) Simon chapter 23 . Sep 28

I love your story! It's really amazing. Pls update soon. I really want to Know what kind of end you wrote! Maybe you wrote them with their kids?

Lmao thank you! Like I soooo have to do that twoshot, like if you read up, everyone is imagining them with their kids! Thank you for reviewing!

64) any chapter 23 . Sep 28

Hello! Ok I need the final chapter. Your story is spectacular! Can't wait for the end. Plsss update soon.

Heee heee thanks! Oh the end is farrrrr away, but thank you for reviewing!

65) Joe chapter 23 . Sep 28

Pls update soon

Oki!Thank you for this review!

66) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 28

I can't wait anymore please update soon

The sequel will begin soon!Thank you for reviewing!

67) Nanami chapter 23 . Sep 28

Plsss post the final chapter

Done!Hope youre ready for the sequel!And thanks for the review!

68) Marinette chapter 23 . Sep 28

I really love your story. Update soon pls :)

Awwww, oki!Thank you so much for reviewing!

69) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 28

OH MY GOODNESSS. THE FEELS MAN. THE FEELS. WOAHHHHHHHHHH. I love how long the chapters are. Chat is crazy. I don't blame for marinette saying those things. But seriously he should've went to her sooner! I also liked how you added the kidnappers voices about their kids. It gives the readers insight to why they're helping her and not refusing. PLEASE RELEASE THE PART 2 SOON. CANT WAIT. THANK YOU!

Heee heee I'm glad you got the feels, I was throwing emotion into the chapter in truckloads! It's released and I hope youre ready for the sequel!Thank you for reviewing!

70) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 28

update plz
I luv the story so much

Awww thank you, and I will soon! Thank you for reviewing!

71) Adrien chapter 23 . Sep 28

Post the final chapter pls

It's up!Ready for the sequel?Thanks for the R&R!

72) Elena chapter 23 . Sep 28

I want to read the final chapter plsssss

Hee hee, its out! Thank you for reviewing!

73) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 29

OMG i NEED more of this! I need Final Part 2, and even though I am sad it is almost over, I cannot wait much longer!

It's out, and I hope you're just as pumped for the sequel!

74) Guest chapter 23 . Sep 29

PLEASE I LOVE THE STORY TOO MUCH JUST SEND OUT THE LAST CHAPTER *cries in a corner*

Don't cryyy!NOO don't cryyy! It's out! Thank you for reviewing!

75) EGE chapter 23 . Sep 29

I doubt I'm right but 20. Also please update soon!

Ahhhh man, it was 75, thank you for reviewing and trying!

76) Stefi chapter 23 . Sep 29

Hello dear author! I really admire your story! Pls update soon!

Hey there, thank you! And I will, thank you for reviewing!

77) Readallday1234 chapter 23 . Oct 1

I felt sooo sad for chat, after seeing mari get kiss by someone else...heartbroking. I love your detail about chat emotion on reacting to mari. It basic and realistic. The whole story doesn't feel rush and push to get to a center point.. we see the tense between chat and mari, the calm before the strom, and the resolution(hopefully). And getting marinatte to become ladybug later is a really plus, because other would have try to bring her in soon. You Capture chatnoir pain and past, his point of view, his story, his downfall and redemption. You show a really grown in the story, taking the storyline one step at a time...also love how you didn't forget nino, Adrien best friend. At the beginning, you had a big puzzle, now you just need to finish the last few piece...then we will see the big picture, you were telling us. Thank for writing this and until next time

Awww I'm so happy that you got everything I was trying to convey, it was difficult at times but I tried to be as realistic as possible, thank you for reading, understanding what I was trying to do and reviewing!

78) Sol chapter 23 . Oct 2

Helloo can you pls update soon? Thanks

Okiiii!Thanks for the R!

79) Guest chapter 23 . Oct 3

JUST POST PLEASE. HELP ME KEEP MY SANITY BY TELLING ME WHAT HAPPENS. PLEASEEEEE

Hee heee, its out, thank your for reviewing, hope the chapter keeps you sane!

80) Guest chapter 23 . Oct 3

I can't wait for the next chapter! The chapters length always satisfy me

Hee hee, took forever to type though,eeek, thank you so much though and thanks for the R!

81) Wha chapter 23 . Oct 3

Ra raaaaaa! I HATE cliffhangers. Pleaaasee post it pleaaaseee.

I'm sorrrryyyyyyy!Thank you for reviewing though!

82) Justmiraculous chapter 23 . Oct 3

This is one of my favorite fanfictions about MLB EVER! And I'm a picky reader. I mean I read a lot but I forget 80% of the fanfics I read and I gotta say I've been to your fanfic site more than I can count ( ok thats exxaggeration but still its one of my special favorites. I love the chloe-abuse idea. Don't get me wrong, I dont approve of abuse but the idea is very original ( and new!) and the plot is shaped intellegently. I love your writing style, the wide varietions of vocabulary and your detailed writing on portraying the you can literally feel the anguish of marinette and shock/pain of chat. I also like the idea of chat noir!criminal. For some reason it suits him better. I like authors who change the roles of characters. For ex: one of my other favorites is called "the declaration of love" by imthepunchlord. Its short, sweet and a bit comical. Basically marinette gets the peacock and adrien gets the fox miraculous, and personally I think that suits him better. Honestly the fox kwami in the fanfic was sooo much better than plagg in ANY other fanfic so...yeah. I dont know if you read imthepunchlords works but if you didnt my advice would be give it a shot becuase he/she has many creative ideas that you can be inspired of.
I'd say read
1-) Pracitically ALL of the works of imthepunchlord ( over the wall, lucky fox paradox, a declaration of love, chat sith, grumpy cat (though dont read the second and third book of grumpy cat - minpa and chapa- its extremely sad. Even the author said it doesn't have to count as the ending of the whole thing. Its just depression honestly) the thing why imthepumchlord is my favorite is that she/ he has really changed the roles of the characters. Like literally a LOT. Thats what I like to see in an author. Choosing a different path, presenting a different perspective. Opening a new view, a new door to the reader and giving them a taste of what things could be or what things SHOULD be.I think thats what a reader looks for the most in an author. I mean I read a lot of fanfics with identical stuff. I mean don't repeat what other authors already published ( like the adrienette fanfics for ex. Big deal adrien found marinette cute. So what!? He found uer adorable! So?! Buddy we are past that already do something new.) Now is it going to be easy? Of course not! How do you think all great authors in the history were famous in the first place? They did the unpredictable and thought the unthinkable. That never means you can't do it. It just means you are just one person in all of those crowds of people who are looking for the right spark to set them flying. If you want that spark earlier, than just search and think a little harder than others. Create something new, find something new. Like the chloe-abuse idea? Now THATS new. I 've always seen chloe as just an annoying brat whose continually ignored in all of the fanfics I read. Definitely not a person with power .But this fanfic helped me see a much crueler side of chloe than a whining child. I'd say its really good actually. Because chloe gained a new and better importance in the story. She's more significant now, more rememerable.
Note to author;
If you ever happen to answer the reviews posted please tell me your thoughts and ideas on the fanfics listed below/upward or just did u like them or not? Its hard to find someone close to me to discuss my interest in the MLB Fandom these days so I kinda got into the int. And you are one of the authors I admire...so it would be awesome if you wrote your thoughts.

2-) the works of ghostgirl19 ( a few of her works are really original especially "on the prowl" Now thats REALLY popular. ( I also love selfless and one way or another too they're really good as well)
3-)through a dolls eye by eNcee death ( her writing skills . .best ever...and she's really pleasant and polite. Just read her authors note! Honestly it made me smile and feel warm inside.
4-) the red string of fate by somethin weasely ? I dunno. But if you just write the name and " miraculous ladybug fanfiction" it directly comes up. This one is a bit comical mostly emotional ( I love the part where hawkmoth comes up. You'll understand if you read it. Its really humorous)
5-) I give you limited time by demifics. This one chapter fanfic will make you cry your hearts out. Its Extremely EXTREMELY SAD . If you do NOT like sad fanfics I advice you STAY AWAY from this one as far as possible as if your life depends on it. But if you want to experience how to write an emotion-moving or inspirational fanfic, I'd say you are on the correct spot. Honestly read it. Really. The plot is very very original. One of my favorites actually ( And I DESPISE fanfictions with sad endings) but this one...I mean it .

Hey! Awww thank you, and thank you for these suggestions, I have read most of them, except option five, I'm not too keen on the whole tragedy thing, like that ish messes me up emotionally, to the extent that I don't read a book unless it's complete because I need to know if the end has a tragedy, fanfictions been messing me up pretty badly tbh because Ive been reading some fics that just stop of have these heartbreaking endings, I have a really really weak heart for these things so its difficult to actually read them, but yeah, thank you for reviewing!

83) Person chapter 23 . Oct 4

F I'd gsisbdudbdidbdishs9sbdidydksbdhcjbfj WHYYYYYYYYY OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. Deep breaths deep breaths ahhhhhh. Okay, how tf did Chloe ALREADY find someone else to do her dirty work for her?! Lile wtf? Ugh just skip to the rescue and happy ending kiss and all is well gosh omg I can't do this I need closure...ok ok I'm don't ranting. Now for compliments: I fudging love this story and the fact u included explanations for the kwamis and miraculous and such was so cool! Also just like, I love the plot, always keeps it interesting. And ahhhhhhhh I can't believe she still doesn't know he's Adrien...will she ever find out? She better or imma cry...for the lile 10th time in this story ahhh ok can't wait! Thanks for being an amazing author!

Lmao omg skip to the happy ending? Hee heee thanks! I really tried hard with this,awww thank you again for the compliments and for the review!

84) Guest chapter 23 . Oct 4

JUSTMIRACULOUS!
You have the same thinking as me! Ghostgirl19 and imthepunchlord are both amazing ~ along with you RaraErzaHeartfilia! I love On the Prowl Selfless (I really hope she continues it) and a lot of others by Ghostgirl19. Imthepunchlord's Over the Wall was the first of his/hers that I read and now I read almost all of his/her stories and I'm reading some of the ones he/she has faved or followed. The red string of fate I have read it was really good but I can't remember the author or other works by them I may have to look into that again. I'll also have to look into eNcee. I do like fanfics with ChatNoir as the villain. I also agree about the adrienette getting kind of old. I do read some and like them but I don't like them as much as say this fanfic. I have found a couple that are new or at least I haven't seen anything like them such as "Please Check Your Number and Try Your Call Again" by kathaka9. I would strongly recommend "The Crossroads of Life" by LightningStrike83 it think it is really good. I have read many MLB fanfics that are really good but I have a pretty bad memory so that's about all I can point you to. But anyways I hope you see this. And sorry RaraErzaHeartfilia for using your review but hey if you wanna look into any of these do because they're great!
Until next time ~ Bye!

Awww I'm happy you think my writings good…Ahh, it's chilled, just don't make a habit of it, oki? 3

84) Guest chapter 23 . Oct 6

Tbh this is the best ML fanfic I've ever read so far. Totally non-cringey and so suspenseful and sad

Awwww I'm glad you like it!Don't worry there's much more to come!Thank you for reviewing!

85) Luna Willows chapter 23 . Oct 6

I think this chapter may have taken up...22-32 pages? That's my guess. But this was a very good chapter. I hope Tikki finds Marinette soon, though. I wonder if Tikki would be able to sense Marinette's presence. I mean, Master Fu did give her some weird stuff when she got sick. But I can't wait for part 2! EEEEEE! So excited!

Heyy!75 pages, I'm glad you thought so!Heee hee, I hope you're just as excited for the sequel!Thank you for reviewing!

86) ML4ever chapter 23 . Oct 7

Love this soooooo much please keep writing you are so incredibly talented!

Awwww thank youuu! And thank you for reviewing!

87) DieLaughing chapter 23 . Oct 8

56 pages

75 pages, but that's a pretty good guess, thank you for trying!And reviewing!

88) Hi chapter 23 . Oct 9

Don't be cruel to us anymore pls :c we want to read another chapter

I'll update soon!Thank you for reviewing!

89) Andrew chapter 23 . Oct 11

Please hurry!

Okay I will!Thank you for the review!

90) Guest chapter 23 . Oct 11

I have to know what happens! Please update as soon as possible!

I will!You'll know soon enough, thank you for the review!

91) Fonz chapter 23 . Oct 12

Girl your killing me with suspence...!

I'm sorry!But I'll be posting soo, thank you for reviewing!

92) Guest chapter 23 . Oct 14

RA RA PLEAE POST IT. I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. MY LIFE IS NOTHING WITHOUT YOUR STORY.

Awww babe, don't say that, tbh my life is nothing without you guys, I'll update soon, I promise!Thank you for reviewing!

93) Guest chapter 23 . Oct 14

I am so sad to see this go. But hopefully you will come up with another Amazing fanfic that I can fall in love with, so please update this as soon as possible because I need to know what happens! Have a good day/night (whatever it is where u live) love your writing, bye!

Don't you worry, we have tons more to go!Thank you for reviewing!

94) Guest chapter 23 . Oct 22

love this story so ,much cant wait for finale chapter

Awww thanks!Hope youre ready for the next part!Thank you for reviewing!

95) Guest chapter 23 . Oct 22

OMG you have to update soon! I'm on the edge of my seat and I've practically fallen off!

I will, I'm glad I got you tensed up!Hee hee, thank you for reviewing!

96) MorbidCheeseLoaf chapter 23 . Oct 22

just dont. dont make my poor soul wait any longer. i am dying and i need this before my life ends. plz post the next soon, my scheduled death date is October 27th. post before then or my tortured soul will haunt you with writers block for the rest of your days.

Lmao pffft, Ghosts cant get me, #Protectedbytheblood Buttttt I will be updating soon, and I hope you like it!Thank you for reviewing!

97) Guest chapter 23 . Oct 25

This is so good please update as soon possible please!

Oki oki! I will soon!Thanks!And thank you for reviewing!

FINAL CHAPTER:PART TWO

(WILL UPDATE TODAY)

Hey guys!I'll post the next CHAPTER guest responses once all the reviews flow in, I wanna say a big thank you to you all BTW,I love and appreciate you,feel free to drop a review, thought,question, anything, I will respond :D

REVIEW! ASK! …GIVE ME LOVE! Lmao,ttyl!

XOXO

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