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my-reflection- hahah.. see how the story goes and if the FLUFF starts coming P….Eriol and Tomoyo are a couple in the story.. but muucch laterz on! So yea… dun worry I love the general couple ups in fanfics so yea! Hehe…
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Well… I think that's everyone that reviewed my last chap! SO yea! Thanks guys! And still thanks to those who reviewed my otha chaps too! Just dun have enough time to review ALLLLLL! SOZ!
Disclaimer: Don't own cardcaptor as you should know! And unfortunately not really the plot either … btu I hope you like this version of it anyway!
ON WITH THE STTTTOOOOORRRIIIEEEChiharu opened the box again. This time she was putting it on, getting ready for a great night. She looked at herself in the mirror. She just couldn't believe her luck getting such a great dress. She had to be the most beautiful tonight………
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Richie pushed open the doors to the party room. He wore the worst outfit ever, looking like elvis. Sakura was so embarrassed. She wore her hair in a messy bun and wore a black formal dress with Tomoyo who wore the same except she wore the colour blue. They wore diamond studs that shone in the light. They entered the party and looked around.
"Sakura, isn't that person a TV star? That one too!" exclaimed Richie. "I'm gonna go and get their autograph!"
"Richie!" groaned Sakura.
But she couldn't stop him. He had his pen and paper and was already talking to them.
"Just leave him Sakura," said Tomoyo. "Isn't that Li?"
She pointed to a person who wore a white suit with silver lining. Syaoran looked up thinking he heard his name called. He immediately saw Sakura and saw she wasn't wearing his gift and looked down. Sakura quickly looked down too.
"You're here Sakura!"
Eriol came from behind wearing a black suit with a bit of silver lining. He had 4 ear rings on one ear.
"Hey you're here Sakura. Xiao Lang's over there," he said. "OI! Xiao Lang! Sakura's here!"
He shouted across the room to him. Syaoran looked up and saw Eriol with Sakura he put down his plate, turned around walked away from them. Eriol was startled and puzzled.
How rude! Thought Sakura.
Sakura didn't notice Tomoyo chatting to Eriol.
"Have I seen you somewhere before?" says Eriol.
"Um………I think you've seen me at school before," says Tomoyo shyly.
"I thought so," said Eriol smiling his charming smile. "It's very hard to forget a beautiful face such as yours."
Sakura looks up and saw them talking and Tomoyo blushing. She quickly goes up.
"Don't get involved with my friend!" says Sakura and pulls her away.
"Tomoyo-chan! You know he isn't a good guy to be with," says Sakura.
"That's not fair Sakura," says Eriol.
"He's a playboy Tomoyo! You can get pregnant talking to him!"
Tomoyo looks at Sakura then back at Eriol
"That was harsh," Eriol said.
Sakura glares at Eriol. "ERIOL!" she exclaims.
Eriol puts his hands up in defence.
"OK! I'll stay away from her a bit," he says.
He gave a bow and walked away to find some other girl to flirt with.
"He's so cute Sakura!" says Tomoyo. "My heart was beating so fast talking to him!"
Sakura rolls her eyes. Then everybody claps. They turn to see Sharina come out with her dad. Her dad says that he was proud of his growing daughter and says Happy Birthday. Then everybody claps more. The soft music started and Shingo and Sharina started dancing. They looked good together. Sakura started to get awfully jealous.
"OH! It's so romantic," says Tomoyo.
"It is isn't it?" says Sakura.
Shingo's gentleness is reserved only for Miss Sharina, she thought watching his dreamy expression as the two danced.
"I'm getting hungry. Let's go over there for plates. I'll go and get Richie," continued Tomoyo.
"I'm not that hungry you can go and get some food with Richie. I'll see you later OK?" says Sakura.
"Oh. OK then Sakura, see you later," Tomoyo says and goes to get Richie.
Sakura looks over at Syaoran. A girl was talking to him.
"Hi, your Syaoran Li aren't you?" says the girl.
Syaoran looks at her like she was crazy. But she keeps going.
"It's been a long time!" says the girl.
Syaoran nods uncertainly. The girl just still stands there.
"Is something wrong?" he says.
The girl shakes her head and walks away. He just doesn't get it when a girl flirts with him. Sakura looks away and walks out of the room. She wanted to get away from that room. It seems to be suffocating her. She walks over to the mini bar and sat down next to a guy in an all white suit. She looks at him thinking he was familiar. He was drinking a lot.
"Hiro?" she says.
The guy looks up.
"Sakura!" he says.
"Why are you here?"
"I hate those dancing places. Way too formal. Like the bars better. Want a drink?"
"Er………Ok. What do you recommend?"
"How about Jin and Tonic?"
"Ok."
"Bar tender, one Jin and Tonic."
The Bar tender gave her a Jin and Tonic and she said thanks politely.
I wonder what Shingo and Sharina, Sakura thought.
In just a few minutes she finished the whole drink.
"Mind getting me another?" she says to Hiro.
Hiro looked at her and chuckled. He finished the last drop from his glass.
"Bar tender, one Jin and Tonic and Vodka straight up," he said.
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Chiharu held her invitation nervous to get into the party. The dress looked great on her, she was excited to attend the party. She pushed open the door and went inside. Richie and Tomoyo just happened to walk past her as she came in.
"Chiharu? You're here!" said Richie halting.
"Richie! Yeah I'm here. Tomoyo, you look great!" says Chiharu.
Tomoyo smiled.
"You look great yourself," said Richie.
Syaoran was walking past and a certain dress caught his eyes. He looked at Chiharu and realised it at once. He walks over quickly. Chiharu didn't know a single thing. She looked up at him and smiled.
"Where did you get the dress?" says Syaoran coldly.
Chiharu looks down feeling something wasn't right.
"Wearing something that's not yours. Tsk tsk. You look like shit you know girl?" he continues and walks past.
Chiharu held back her tears and kept staring down.
"Are you alright Chiharu?" says Tomoyo.
"I'm sorry. I think I'll go now," Chiharu says and rushed out the glass doors.
"What's wrong with her!" says Tomoyo.
"I don't know. But lets go and have a look," says Richie.
They quickly rushed after Chiharu.
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"One more bar tender," said Hiro.
Hiro and Sakura were getting drunk drinking cup by cup of alcohol.
"Your………getting………drunk………," says Sakura.
"You………too!" says Hiro.
They gulped down some more of the drink.
"You know………Xiao Lang really………..like……..you," Hiro says.
They heard claps in the other room and looked across. Sharina was getting ready to talk. They both finished their last cup and rushed to the room. They bumped into each other like drunken idiots. (Which they are for now) They finally arrived and stopped at the door just enough to see and listen.
"Tonight's been a wonderful night for me," says Sharina smiling, talking into the microphone with her hands behind her back. "It's my 24th birthday and I'm happy so many of you can come. There's some things that are rather important I must say today. I like to announce that I'll be going away and leaving a lot of people. I've decided to go to France, Paris to study law and after to help poor people over the world. When I go there is a great chance that I may never come back to Tokyo."
Sharina's dad and mum stared at her.
"I'm going to achieve my goals."
"What are you talking about Sharina sweetie?" asked her mum with confusion.
"You're not getting anywhere Sharina my dear! You are staying with me and working for me. You're my only daughter," said her dad.
"Daddy, mammy. I want to be free. Be myself. Do what I always wanted to do. I don't want to be a doll of a daughter, always being like a puppet on strings," Sharina says looking at her parents with pleading eyes and then turning to look at Shingo.
Shingo looked at her firmly with his eyes. His face without an expression.
Sharina touched her long, wavy curls.
"This beautiful hair is not important to me. What is important to me is my freedom."
She took out scissors from nowhere and snipped a bit of her beautiful hair off. Everybody looked at her stunned. Sakura looked at her sadly. Shingo still stared expressionless. Sharina looked at him. He turned and began walking out of the room, he went straight out the door past Hiro and Sakura.
"Shingo………" said Sakura and began to go after him.
Hiro pulled her back by the arm then held her shoulders firmly.
"Don't bother him more," he said and went after him.
Sakura stared hopelessly and went out. She stopped when she heard voices. Syaoran and another guy.
"Forget about it. Wait till my father comes back to sort it out," Syaoran says professionally.
"Yes," said the other person.
Sakura heard the footsteps of the guy walking away. Then she saw Syaoran coming around the corner stunned to see her there.
"Sakura Kinomoto. Have you been eaves dropping?" he says.
"For your imformation!………I was………just walking past!" says Sakura.
"Look at you!" says Syaoran.
Sakura trudged over to the edge of a fountain nearby and sat down feeling rather drunken and tired.
"Don't need your compliment…..Li….." says Sakura.
"I was only TRYING to be nice Kinomoto."
Sakura looks down.
"Sorry," she stutters.
She gets up swaying.
"Look at you drunken! You look like an idiot!"
"Stop……… saying that!" she says swaying pushing him with weakling force.
She was about to fall when Syaoran caught her. She swayed forward onto him and suddenly she couldn't hold the bile coming up her throat. She vomited all over poor Syaoran.
"NO! MY NEW WHITE SUIT!"
Is it improving or not? Or is it just getting really boring? hehe Please review and tell me! Thx : )
Angol