Wow!I feel so special!I have 4 reviews!even tho 2 r from hiddenflames...

O...and this fic was actually written over the summer...I just hadn't figured out how 2 post them...yes...I kno...it really is kinda simple...but...as I was writing this...I read it over the phone 2 my friend who is refered 2 as "Light"...and she yelled at me and told me 2 write more...so...here it is!

Again!this is my very first fanfic!pleeze be nice 2 me...if I ever get this posted that is...or hopefully you'll think it's stoopid and you won't read it...well...and yes...that is how I spell stoopid

I decided 2 write this fic because I always wanted yuki and ayame 2 get along so that's why this fic exists!well...pleeze no flames...I know from personal experience that fire is indeed hot...and so is the wax...constructive critisism is always welcome...

And...as always supposedly must be said...I do not own fruits basket...If I did own it then I would have killed Akito off with a horribly painful death the first tyme we saw him...and yes...I do kno about the spoiler...I just don't wanna "spoil" it for you...

A (Long) Bus Ride With My Brother

chapter 3

For a few minutes they just sat there staring ahead. Slowly Yuki realized what had just happened.

/I'm stuck...In the middle of nowhere...in a car...with no gas...with this imbicile.../Yuki thought/It can't possibly get ANY worse.../

Just then they heard thunder and then the rain started coming down.

"I stand corrected...I just HAD to say SOMETHING."

"What was that, Yuki?"

"Absolutely nothing..."

Ayame sighed as he looked forward again.

/This isn't going at all according to plan. Yuki and I should be happily talking things over and finally sharing a brotherly bond!Well...at least he hasn't found out about the psychiatrist yet.../Ayame thought/...but...I thought that getting "lost" would be perfect for me and Yuki to bond!At least I know where we are...I think...ummmmm...I think that tree looks familiar...maybe I can find a friendly squirrel to show us the way.../

Just as he was thinking this...a bolt of lightning struck really close to the car. They both sat there looking at where it had struck ground with wide eyes.

"I think that we should-"

"-Get out of the car!"

They both jumped out of the car and started running to find low ground.

"You idiot!If you had just turned around when you got lost then we wouldn't be out here!"

As Yuki said this Ayame noticed him shivering. He took off his coat and offered it to him.

"What're you doing?"

"I'm lending you my jacket."

"But...if you get cold you'll transform."

"I know...but I'm the older brother...let me worry. If I transform we have nothing to worry about. If you had an attack then I wouldn't know what to do."

"But if snakes get to cold they die!"

"What's this Yuki! Do I sense a little bit of concern? Is this a positive step towards our goal?"

"Our goal? Since when has it been our goal"

"...So you're saying you'd rather just keep fighting like this?"

"...I don't really know...but there are things that have happened that I can't ignore..."

"I know Yuki!But I'm trying to make up for them!I swear I'm trying!...But you won't give me a chance...though...I guess I don't deserve one..."

To this Yuki said nothing. He continued staring at his brother in disbelief.

/So he really isn't a complete moron afterall...who would've known.../ Yuki thought taking his coat and slipping his arms into the sleeves. Five minutes after he had put on the jacket, Ayame sneezed and transformed. Yuki didn't really feel like being responsible for anyone's death, so he picked him up and tucked him into his jacket and slowly fell asleep.

A few hours later Ayame woke up still in his snake form and felt a tingly sensation. Four seconds later he changed back to normal.

He started reaching for his clothes and felt something wrapping around his chest. He turned to see Yuki clinging to him in his sleep like he was a giant teddy-bear.

/Oh come on Yuki!at least let me put some clothes on!I'm cold/ Ayame thought / This isn't what I had in mind as far as "brotherly bonding"..well...maybe if I hug him back then I can get at least a litlle warmth/ Ayame hesitantly wrapped his arms around Yuki's thin form and slowly drifted off to sleep.

A/N finally!the third chappie!I'm so happy!I posted three chapters yay!

Well the enthusiastic thing isn't really me for those of you that think I'm a really up beat person...actually...I'm kinda depressed...I was seriously considering counseling...but after seeing how many ppls had looked at the fic I was really happy...so I'm in a really mood!

HiddenFlames...you better post ur fic soon...keep working on finishing it or I'll start sending YOU threa

srry about that...I screwed somrthing up with the computer...oh well...

And to Tsuki Houshi Hikari...thank you for putting me on your favourites list!I feel so special now!

Pleeze review ppls!