!this is my very first fanfic!pleeze be nice 2 me...if I ever get this posted that is...or hopefully you'll think it's stoopid and you won't read it...well...and yes...that is how I spell stoopid

well...pleeze no flames...I know from personal experience that fire is indeed hot...and so is the wax...constructive critisism is always welcome...

And...as always supposedly must be said...I do not own fruits basket...If I did own it then I would have a lot of kick ass pics of my beloved Ayame!I love Ayame!

A (Long) Bus Ride With My Brother

chapter 4

So with Yuki leading the way...we find ourselves with the two brothers beginning their long trek home...

"Hey stupid...Are we going the right way?"

"I don't really know..."

Yuki heard his normally hyper brother's dull responce and couldn't figure out what was wrong.

"Hey...Ayame? Are you feeling alright."

"I'm just fine Yuki..." said Ayame with a sigh. Yuki turned around to see his brother trudging along with his head down.

/holy shit! What's wrong with him? Could what I said have taken that much out of him? He usually doesn't listen.../"Are you sure? You don't look so good..."

"I'm really fine Yuki..." was all he got besides another sigh.

3 hours later

after their long walk they finally found a rest-station...better yet...a rest-station with payphones!

"Yes!" Yuki said as he ran forward to the old phone when he noticed that someone was already there.

"And so I was all like 'OMG!' and he was like 'ooooh' like he couldn't believe it!...huh? What do mean! Ohmegosh! Now way!uh-uh!Oh man I can't believe it! So what did you say!...No!She said that to you!now way! Get out of here!Oh man!... So...hey...do you like...wanna go out sometime-"

"Excuse me m'am but I need to use the phone!" Yuki yelled as he shoved the unlucky girl away from the phone. "She'll call you back!" he yelled as he shoved the phone down before pulling out a quarter and putting it in the slot.

"Hey man! Not cool!I'll have you know that I can sue your ass for this!"

"I don't care!I need to use the phone!I've been stuck in the middle of nowhere for my pathetic excuse for a brother!I need to find civiliztion!"

As soon as he said brother she turned and looked at Ayame leaving Yuki to the phone.

With Yuki

"Come on! Come on! Pick up the phone!"

"Hello, this is Hatori Sohma what can I do for you?"

"Hatori! Oh thank god! AyamegotuslostinthewoodswithoutgasandwewerestuckandiyelledathimandIshovedagirlawayfromthispayphonesoIcouldcallforhelp!"

"Wait a minute...who is this?"

"It's Yuki damnit!"

"Alright Yuki...try to tell me again...but calm down and breathe more...and try not to run the words together..."

Sigh"Alright..Ayame got us lost in the woods without gas and I yelled at him and shoved a girl away from this payphone so I could call for help."

"That's better...So do you need me to pick you up?"

"Uhhhhhh...YEAH!"

"Where are you?"

With Ayame

"So are you like...Single? How old are you? 'Cuz I'm like...17 but you know!we could work something out!I mean...there's only like a...4-5 year difference!"

"I'm single...and I'm 27."

"Well...that's not that much of a difference! So ummmmm...do you wanna go out sometime?"

"What's the point? We're all gonna die in the end...or if we're lucky then we'll all get vaporized quickly before we have to suffer a horrifyingly painful death."

"You're kinda weird...but you're still cute!call me sometime!here's my number!" said the strangely annoying payphone girl handing him a slip of paper.

"I'll think about it but you shouldn't wait for me to call..."

"Geez mister! Lighten up!"

"I see no point in 'lightening up'"

"Who shoved the stick up your ass?"

"It was my fault..."

"Whatever..."

Then yuki ran up and grabbed Ayame and pulled him along saying that they were going to wait for Hatori to pick them up.

With Crazy Payphone Girl

"Sorry about that...What? No! I'm sure I'm single!...Don't use that tone with me!...No I haven't been sleeping around with that guy!...No I don't sleep with strange men!...How dare you call me a tramp!...You know what! We're through!" said the weird chik slamming down the phone as she whipped out her cell phone.

A/N–wow...this is my 2nd chapter 2day...I'm on a roll!

And yeah...this was also written on the spot...for some weird reason I'm impressed with myself for something everybody else probably already does...yeah well I just did it so I don't care if you guys could already do that!

Pleeze review!again!I need critisism!