Hello! I hope I'm doing ok with this..it's my first ever fanfic to put on so yeah. If anyone has tips feel free to leave them through a message or review or whatever. And I'm sooooo sorry! I would've had this up much sooner but quite a few things have interfered so yeah... ok well enough chit-chat here's second chapter!
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'blah' thinking
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blah Dreams, flashbacks, or (i accidently messed this up on the first chapter) writing on paper or such.
Chapter 2: Fights and A Phone Call
Two days past and Eiri had yet to decide how to ask his little koibito to marry him. He had the ring, (yes he actually lived through shopping for it.) but he just couldn't think of how to ask. He had one day left, well, about 1/4 of a day to be exact. 'Hm. It has to be romantic, but not mushy. I do not do mushy.' he thought.
"Yukiii! I'm hooome!"
'O great, here he comes.'
"Yuki!" glomp "How was your day Yuki?"
"Great. Want to know why? It was quiet." 'Wait. That's not what I meant to say.'
"Yukiiii...why are you so mean to me?"
"Because you're an idiot, you baka." 'I didn't mean to say that either!'
sniffle "Y-Yuki...I'm sorry! I know I annoy you and that I'm loud and stupid, but - but...I love you! If I go away and be real quiet, can we spend time together tonight and tomorrow? Please?"
"Too late. My train of thought is broken. Now go away." 'Ah! Why can't I say what I want to say to him!'
"B-But Yukiii!"
"I said go away, damnit!" 'No! Don't go away! I'm sorry damnit!'
"F-Fine!"
"Great!" 'Agh! No! Not great! Shu come back!' "Sh-!"
--BAM-- sigh 'Damn. I didnt' mean any of that. Why can't I just come right out and tell him I love him?' sigh 'Well, he probably won't be back for a while so I'll just sleep for now and apologize when he gets home.'
Much Later That Night
sigh 'Looks like Yuki's already asleep...I'm glad I went to Hiro's. He always makes me feel better. Well, tomorrow's our anniversary so I might as well get some sleep...' "Good night, Yuki." Shuichi whispered before falling asleep on the couch.
Next Morning
"Uuunn..." 'Oh! I must've slept all through the night! I don't remember Shu coming in...' Eiri thought while going to the kitchen. 'Hm? He slept on the couch? Oh..I guess he always does that when we have fights...' sigh ...!... 'That's perfect! I'll make him breakfast and apologize to him for last night before he eats and I'll hide the ring in the middle of the pancakes!' he thought rather proud of himself although he would never admit even thinking it for the sake of his image. 'I just hope he doesn't eat the ring...oh well I'll watch him to make sure.' So, after making up his mind, Eiri started making all of Shuichi's favorite breakfast foods. Once it was all done, he set the ring in the top pancake layer, visible just enough so Shuichi wouldn't eat it. 'Perfect. Now to wake up Shui-' --Riiiing! Riiing!-- sigh 'Oh well, I'll just let the answering machine get it.'
"Hello, You've reached the Yuki and Shindou residence, please leave a message after the beep. Arigato!" came Shu's voice on the recorder.
--Beep!--
"Hey Shu! This is Kana! Ya know, the girl from last night. Well, yeah. I just wanted to thank you for the awsome time! And I was wandering if you'd like to get together again sometime! Well, you have my number cause I put in your phone so call me! Lots a love! Muah!" --Beep!--
Eiri stood there, staring at the phone for a few minutes until he heard Shuichi's footsteps.
"Mmm..Yuki? What smells so good?" he asked tiredly. gasp! "Yuki! Did you make all this for me!"
"...Sh-Shu..."
"Yuki? Are you ok? You look like you've seen a ghost or something."
"Shu, I-I'm sorry about last night..." Eiri said before turning to leave.
"What? Oh, it's ok Yuki! I know you didn't mean any of it! Yuki? Hey Yuki where are you going?"
"O-Out. Oh, and you have a message on the answering machine."
"Yuki! You can't leave! Don't you know what today is! It's-"
"Happy Anniversary Shuichi." Eiri said whithout looking at his young lover before leaving.
"Yuki..." 'He actually remembered...but why was he acting like that?...Oh yeah! He said I have a message, I guess I should check it just in case it's something about the band.'
Elsewhere
"Thank you, Kana. Now for your payment-"
"Oh! It's all right mister Aizawa! I got Shuichi Shindou and Eiri Yuki's phone number out of it! That's payment enough!"
"Well then I guess I'll see you around."
"Alright! See ya!"
End of Chapter 2!
Alright that's it for chapter two! Um...Review if you like! or...if you dont' like too...either way say something please! lol. I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible. Oh and I'm sorry if there are any mistakes. I checked it myself but I don't know how to use spell check on here and I'm not even sure if what I'm using to type this has spell check so yeah. ok well...Review please!
