SilverEyes18: Hey everybody, we finally decided to update this story

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Yeah about that...I'm having a friend help us with it...

SilverEyes18: Who?

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Hey everybody! (waves at readers)

SilverEyes18: Oh boy, this is going to be interesting

Moon-Angel-Eyes: That's what I thought too...She can put some...

SilverEyes18: Pasaze in the story?

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Yeah...

SilverEyes18: Okay...

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: (looks at authors as if they grew another head) I was told that there would be cookies here if I came...

SilverEyes18: Cookies? You bribed her with cookies?

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Yeah...

SilverEyes18: Okay...

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Let's answer the reviews we received...

Fan-Fic-CC27: This sounds oddly familiar... have you been in contact with the user who written "Loner"? The beginnings of yours and hers start out with animal transfusion and a doctor names Kor and the line "Be safe ." Not to be rude, but I think one of you are copying each other.

Moon-Angel-Eyes: I've never heard of that story and no...I've had this idead for ages, I just never had anybody to help me with putting it into words...And there's no Be safe or anything it's "Be careful." and the scientists name is Dr. Vixon and he's and she...So no, we're not copying anybody...

Sanctus Sanguis: Allow me to emphasize this, right here and now. Cat DNA transfusions would NOT work. The body would see the DNA as hostile, and destroy it. Unless you altered the DNA before birth, which is obviously not possible in this situation, you would not be able to create a cat/human hybrid. And where were there cats in Jak and Daxter? Did I miss something? Just out of curiosity, when is a sample of DNA called a vaccine? I was under the impression that a vaccine was a solution of dead or dying pathogens injected to help the body build immunity to a disease. Another point, what happens to the heart if a bubble of oxygen gets into it? It stops the heart.Knowing the seeming inefficiency of Haven's technology, I'd imagine that this Dr. Voxie would kill her by injecting her in the heart. Simple as that. You haven't changed much, just done a few tweaks here and there to make it seem like you improved it.
Write something original, please.

SilverEyes18: I think you just like being the bringer of bad news don't you? Anyways, we didn't have Dr. Voxie give it to her in her heart is was in her chest cavity...And no there weren't any cats in the Jak and Daxter game, but this isn't the game. Besides that, that's why it's called an original story...We didn't want to changed too much of the story line, however, we will be adding more surprises in the next few chapter's...

Kokono: (cracking up) That'll eventually kill them! (evil grin) Ya know, when ever I start singing that song, or the other one that "gets on everybody's nerves", my friend will imedeately try to kill me. It's a good thing that I'm faster than her. (smiles) OH! And, I like this fic. ...Ok, that was kinda week. Sorry.

Moon-Angel-Eyes: I'm glad you liked that song part...I was actually gonna delete that out of the story, but then I thought that it gave the story a bit of a flare...

Jak-X- You still need a little more work...

SilverEyes18: Yeah, I know this story still needs work, but we're trying and that's what GMB is for now...

SparklLiteJak: oh no poor Krista! but she is projecct kitty. that sounds so cool haha..onward to the next chapter!OMG you like that song to! haha its so awesome and it goes really good here in ur story

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Yeah, I sortta felt sorry for her too...

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: That was better than the origonal...Keep up the good work...Are you ganna have Krista and Renee do a mission for Torn in the next chapter? I sure hope so...Also, is Anita gonna meet Vin? She'd like him, after all he's a genius too...a crazy genius...Keep up the good work...

Both: Hey that sounds like a good idea...Both Vin and Anita could drive Jak and Daxter crazy whenever they had to see Vin...(laughs hystaically)

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Okay, here's chapter 4...

Chapter 4:The Mission's pt. 1
The girls turned around to see a man with tattoos all over his face. Wow that's Torn! They both thought, He's totally HOT!

"Again I'll ask, who the hell are you?" Torn demanded

"None of your business." Renee answered, "Maybe we should ask the same of you."

"Hand over the kid." he demanded

"In your dreams fat-head." replied Renee; both girls were in front of the kid. Torn seemed beyond mad. He drew his bowie knife; both girls knew then, they were in trouble. After all, who'd want to mess with an ex-Delta.

"Yo. Renee, I don't think that's a good idea." Krista said then thought, God he's HOT!

(SilverEyes18: You can definitely tell she's a 16 hormonal teenager. No offence to anybody though...)

"Smart girlly." Torn replied

"Excuse me, I ain't a girlly." she hissed at him, "I'm a woman, damn it!"

Renee then said, "We saved him from being kidnapped by a few KG soldiers."

"Yeah." Krista said sheepishly, "And we sortta want to join the underground."

"No way." Torn said just as his comm. went off. "Stay there and don't move." The girls nodded and few seconds later, "Got it." he said to the person on the other end of the comm. Then he turned around and looked at the girls. "OK, I let you in if you can prove yourself."

"Sure." Krista said happily.

"Now listen and listen good because I'm only going to tell you your mission once." he said. The girls nodded and he told them their first mission, which turned out to be a suicide mission.

Jak headed outside to his zoomer with Anita following him. "You're actually gonna ride that thing?" she asked

"Why not?" Jak replied with an evil glint in his eyes, which Anita didn't see. She just shook her head.

"Were are we headed?" she asked

"To the Underground." Jak replied as he started the zoomer. "You first have to pass Torn's tests." and they were off.

"WHAT TESTS!" Anita screamed as they suddenly missed another driver. Jak swerved several times, giving the zoomer a rocking feeling. Anita thought she was either gonna die, puck, or both. After a few minutes they arrived in the slums and were soon at the Dead End.

So, what are suppose to do here again?" Krista asked

"We're suppose to destroy all of these tanks by blowing them up". Renee began

"Okay". Krista replied, she could tell that Renee was getting annoyed, but she didn't care, she was having too much fun. Within a few moments the two women got to the war factory. Waved the pass, that Torn had given them, in front of it. The doors automatically opened." So where do we go?" Krista asked

"Here", Renee said handing Krista a map, which Torn had also given them, "Where does it say to go?"

"It says that the tanks are 2 stories above us". Krista replied

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1 Hour later
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The girls were ducking down passageways and across vents, hugging the walls and keeping to the few shadows that the afternoon lent them. Avoiding the Krimzon Guards was fairly easy, which didn't seem right. The guards weren't paying any attention to anything, but each other. Gossiping and such. One guard kept talking about a crazy girl that had been in the prison and how he hoped he never got met up with her. She supposedly killed 20-30 men within only 5 minutes. Krista had smiled at this. Looks like I'm the top story today. she thought. As they searched the compound they became more and more frustrated, for they couldn't figure out where the Tanks were. Krista wondered if there really was any. "We don't have all day," she muttered.

"Maybe if we start pushing buttons," Renee suggested, indicating a door-opening panel. Her finger reached for a bright shiny button.

Krista shook her head in panic and said, "Don't touch that!"

Too late. A massive door about twenty feet away rolled up revealing a huge security tank. The tank rumbled forward toward the trio. Krista felt her knees stiffen in terror. Her jaw worked up and down stuttering, "Renee." She said Renee grasped Krista's wrist and pulled her behind herself. Krista felt herself being jerked out of her fright and found herself dashing alongside the Renee. The tank fired, striking a nearby wall. Plaster and brick fell down around the duo as they continued to run. Krista closed her eyes against the debris and when she opened them she couldn't see her friend.

"Renee?" There was no answer.

The tank fired another shot and she screamed, ducking out of the way. She rushed forward, trying to elude the tank. What she didn't know was that Renee wasn't that far ahead of her.

Renee had ducked into an open doorway that was sheltered from the security tank. As Krista ran past, Renee snagged her arm and pulled her in with her. She pressed her up against the wall and cupped a hand over her mouth. They stood there one calm, the other filled with silent panic. The sound of the tank came closer and the girls began to get even more frightened. Renee shook her head and they waited.

Moments passed.

The ground shook as the tank approached, knocking something off the wall. The tank rolled past the doorway, continuing down the walk and opened a secret door, that turned out to be a courtyard, and continued its way; the girls came out when it was out of sight. They sighed in relief. They were safe, if only for a while.

Inside the courtyard were 4 tanks.

"This must be it." Renee said, pointing out the obvious.

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Several hours later
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Krista grunted in frustration and blinked several times to get her eyes to clear. She was on her back affixing a bomb to the vulnerable mechanics on the underside of a mammoth tank. The night air was hot and being stuck underneath several hundred pounds of metal was not helping. She tightened a green wire and smiled in relief, that was the last one. She took the opportunity to wipe off her sweaty brow. All of Torn's bombs were in place so Renee could press the button and they could get the hell out of here.

Renee's finger sought the shiny button in the middle of the device and watched the red light blink on and off. It was set. In five minutes all 4 tanks would be blown sky-high.

"Freeze!" a guard yelled

"Shit!" the two said at the same time.

"Run!" Krista screamed

The two girls ran and dodged the bullets.

Krista looked at her watch

2:00minutes.

They ran down the hall through many doorways, past dozens of guards, and past the security tank. Krista looked at her watch again

1:00 minute.

"Run FASTER" she yelled.

"Hey! Stop!" she heard a woman call after her. They ignored the ordered and vaulted over a low wall. The Krimzon Guards were on shift change, outside, so they scooted under a meshed fence without incident. They sprang to their feet and hopped onto their parked zoomer and sped away into the night. A moment later a big BOOM sound was heard all over the city.
Moon-Angel-Eyes: That was a very good chapter GMB...

SilverEyes18: It was okay...I liked mine better

GoodMorningBeautiful2005: Thanks...I was thinking of giving Krista a super neat power...What do you think reader's?