Hey guys i finally got back on the comouter thanks to a little help from my friend called CHOCOLATE lol my little brother is a sucker for chocolate. Well hop you like the story and don't be afraid to comment on the things you like and don't like cause it's all welcome.
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The paramedic reached the Denali and began to check on Nick first.

"Hey how are you doing, can you hear me" the paramedic asked whilst shineing his flash light over his body to check his injuries.

"Yeah i can hear you" Nick answered

"Whats your name?"

"Nick and yours?"

"Ian, so can you tell me where it hurts?"

"My shoulder i think it's broken" Nick answered

Ian went to examine Nick shoulder closer.

"Yeah it's definaetly broken, i'm just gonna put this collar around your neck its just a precaution"

Ian reached for the handle of the car door and had to use excessive force to open it. As soon as the door was open Nick immedieatly yelled in pain.

"Sorry man i didn't mean to hurt you" Ian said appoligetically.

"It's ok i'll survive"

"Where gonna remove you from the car in a minute but first i gotta check on your friend"

Ian walked around the Denali to the passengers side were Grissom was still holding Saras hand and kissing her hair comforting her.

"HI there can you here me, whats your name?" Ian asked the same question to Sara to see if she responds.

"Sara" she mumbled

"hey Sara thats a lovely name my daughters called Sara" he was just trying to make small talk

Ian wanted to take a look at Saras injuries more closely but Grissom was abstucting the way.

"Ummmm... could you move to the side for me MR..."

"Grissom, just please help her"

"We'll do everything we can Sir"

"Sara can you tell me wher it hurts?" He asked

"My stomach" Sara grimaced

Ian looked over to see that a pice of metal had completely pierced from one side of her sid ethrough to her stomach.

"OK Sara i'm just gonna put this oxygen mask on you just to help you breath a little easier."

Ian stepped back and shouted up to his collegue

"GARY I NEED A STRETCHER DOWN HERE AND WE NEED THE FIRE RESCUE NOW"

Gary looked over the embankment and shouted back "STRETCHER COMMING DOWN THE FIR RESCUES HERE"

"Right Sara were gonna get you out of here but we need the rescue team to get down here cause we can't get the door open and because of the metal in your stomach were gonna have to take extra care" Ian informed her.

She removed the oxygen mask "Griss... Griss" she cried

"I'm here honey" He said grabing her hand again

"Promise...promise me you'll stay h- here with me" She slrred

"I'm not going anywhere your not getting rid of me you hear me"

She nodded and put the oxygen mask back on and closed her eyes.

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The fire rescue arrived and Warrick and Greg rushed to greet them.

The paramedic informed them of the situation and began to get the equipment ready.

They all set of down to the Denali and got Nick out with no trouble but the ride up the hill was tricky as they kept falling because of the mud but finally got Nick loaded into the back of the ambulance and was driven of to hospital. Another ambulance arrived just as Nick was driven off.

"Saras condition deteriorated as the fire Rescue started to cut at the Denali"

TBC...

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Thats all i can do tonight my eyes are half shut and i'm falling asleep so i will continue tomorrow, hope you enjoy.