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Golden Sun: Winter Wonderland
Chapter 1: Pneumonia Victim
Dalton tried blowing his hair out of his face, but it had no effect.
His hair was already frozen in place, and what good could it do if his breath was already icy cold?
It was getting to him.
He was just coming back from getting the girl of his dreams a secret present when this blizzard struck.
Grand.
It suddenly struck him that he was freezing and low on breath.
Well, duh. What was he, a Mars Adept? A Proxian?
He tried to shake his head, but it was frozen in place. He was afraid if he shook it, it would snap right off.
He started shivering horribly. Curse that shopkeeper, he thought. If it weren't for him I would be home by now.
Flashback
Dalton and the shopkeeper were arguing over Dalton's present for his crush. "Look, it's either you give me 90,000 coins, or you get the freaking heck outta here." said the shopkeeper.
They had been squalling for over 2 hours.
"FINE!" screamed Dalton. "I DON'T GIVE A :bleep, I JUST WANT THE NECKLACE!"
He slammed the coins on the counter (because he was totally rich, he could easily afford it) and stormed out the door.
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We'll take a brief intermission to look at the irony of the fact that I said 'stormed' and Dalton is a Jupiter Adept. Now back to the story.
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End Flashback
Dalton cursed. "Those shopkeepers think they can raise their prices when one of us walks in to their dumb ass store."
He was growing colder by the second. "Why am I getting so dang cold?"
Suddenly, his body couldn't take it anymore, and he collapsed.
He had been laying there for about three minutes when he heard someone sloshing through the snow - towards him!
Just before he blacked out, he could see a boy with unruly blonde hair and another with red, spiky hair.
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Darkness.
Darkness.
All Dalton could see for miles was dark, bleak emptiness.
Suddenly, a flash, and he was greeted by the Wise One.
"Huh?" asked Dalton. "What are you doing here?"
The Wise One floated downward towards the floor. "You succumbed to the cold. You had just blacked out when Isaac and Garet found you."
"Yeah, so now what?" Dalton asked.
"Now someone that is worried about you is sitting next to you in reality. You must open your eyes and show that person that you have not left this life."
"K." replied Dalton simply.
"Good luck, young one." called the Wise One before vanishing.
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Dalton opened his eyes with a groan. "Uggghhhh..."
He then looked up to see the person the Wise One was talking about.
His eyeballs bulged. Oh, God, he thought. This is not really happening, it couldn't be.
It was Jenna.
His secret sweetheart was the person.
Was that possible?
Jenna squealed in excitement and wrapped her arms around him.
"Oh, Dalton! You're awake!"
He could feel the warmth emanating from her and blushed. It was her, alright.
"Yeah...umm..what happened?"
Jenna looked down at him sadly. "Well, you have a nasty frostbite, and you may even have... pneumonia."
Dalton didn't like the sound of that.
"Me and Garet will will be taking turns making sure you recover." Jenna said.
"Why you two?" Dalton asked.
"Because we're Mars Adepts, silly!" she laughed.
"Oh yeah." he replied, feeling embarrassed. "What will you be doing?"
"You know, Mars Psynergy and stuff like that." she replied.
"So, who's..." He tried to find the right word. "...baby-sitting me first?"
"Garet's gonna go first , and I'll be second!" she said happily.
"...C-c-cool.." he stuttered.
Ding-dong!
"Ah, that must be Garet. I'll show him in." said Jenna, and she jumped up and skipped out of the room.
Dalton watched her go with a smile on his face. She must be happy that I'm still alive. Wait...could it be?
His thoughts were interrupted when Garet suddenly walked in the room.
He hopped on the couch and laid back.
"Ya know, I've been watching you, Dalton." said Garet, warming him with a Flare Wall.
"You...you have?" said Dalton in a soothed tone, obviously relaxed by Garet's Psynergy.
"Yeah. You know..." began Garet...
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Jupi: Cliffy! Woo!
Chibi Jenna: Already starting on the wrong foot. Tsk, tsk.
Chibi Dalton: You should use more romantic endings for stories. Like so- (grabs Jenna and kisses her.)
Jupi: (anger rises and vein throbs on forehead, anime style.)
Rayquaza: Also there will be battles in this story. The battle theme is the Starfox 64 Boss Battle Theme. Remember that.
Chibi Garet: Review! Now... (turns to Mia) Go, Mia!
Chibi Mia: (playing Super Mario Sunshine on Sand Bird level and totally winning) :P Just one more red coin!
Chibi Isaac plus Chibi Alex, Chibi Felix, and Chibi Ivan: (playing Super Smash Bros. Melee on Brinstar Depths level)
Chibi Sheba: (playing The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time)
Rayquaza: (playing Paper Mario 2 and fighting Doopliss) I am totally kicking ASS! WOOT!
Kirby: (playing Paper Mario 1 and fighting Tutankoopa) AGGGH! CHAIN CHOMP BIG!
Jupi: ( playing The Legend of Zelda: The Windwaker and totally kicking Molgera's (big worm guy in the Wind Temple) ass) Pathetic. DIE!
Chibi Windwaker Link + Chibi Piers: (looks at them all with pity) Sigh. REVIEW PLEASE!
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Next time on Winter Wonderland: Chapter 2: Secret Ambitions. Until then, folks!