Author's note: ok, this is my first fanfic, so yeah; it may not be up to standards. Anyways, I hope you enjoy, and feel free to leave any feedback. )
Dedications: this story is dedicated to Desiree, for aspiring a dream, and giving me moral support, and ideas. Without her, there would be no story.
Key code:
"People talking out loud"
'People thinking, not out loud'
(Me and my wonderful comments)
Behind the scenes:
Ranma:What! You made me and Akane married?
Me: it's my story; I can do whatever I wish.
Ranma: growl
Me: uh… don't worry it'll all work out! )
Ranma: it'd better…
Title: Mixuki Mew Mew
Summary: Mixuki, daughter of Ranma and Akane, has moved back to Tokyo, where everything is extremely strange to her. Her new friends only have one thing in mind: "Transformation: City girl". All this is enough to stress anybody… toss in the fact that she changes into a cat, and then you have… well, this story. )
Story:
Mixuki looked out the window of her new bedroom and gazed thoughtfully at the lovely color-changing trees of autumn.
'You don't get much of nature around here,' she thought wistfully.
Mixuki had been born in Tokyo, Japan but then…
--Flashback-->
Months after the birth of her first child Mixuki, Akane received a note, from the hotheaded Kuno.
Kuno is one of the suitors in love with Akane. He's very popular among classmates, but not with Akane, although he doesn't seem to understand that…
The letter reads:
Sweet, sweet Akane,
I know that you must be blind to have chosen Ranma over me,
But it's your lucky day!
You have another opportunity to be with me!
Come with me to the mountains
And we'll live happily ever after!
XOXOXOXO, Kuno
Below the note, was the address for a small cabin on Muckiita Mountain, a cabin that had a reputation for wonderfully romantic vacations.
Laughing, Akane pocketed the note, and left to see what Ranma and Mixuki were up to.
Ranma, Akane's husband, has had a terrible curse bestowed upon him. When splashed with cold water, he becomes a girl, while hot water reverses the effect.
Earlier, Akane had left Ranma in the kitchen with Mixuki to finish up a lovely chocolate cake she'd spent all afternoon baking.
"Now remember, daddy's gunna throw out one little tiny slice of mommy's awful rubbery chocolate cake. You can too, I mean I don't want to punish you with that thing she calls a cake, but remember, we won't tell mommy, got it?" said Ranma.
Mixuki gurgled.
Akane, listening by the door the entire time, rushed into the room angrily, "WHAT did you say about my cake?" she snarled.
"Oh, uh, Akane! Mixuki and I were just praising this wonderful cake that you spent so much time baking for us!" Ranma said nervously, eyes darting everywhere for a possible exit.
"If that's what you call praise, I'd hate to hear your criticism!" and with that said, she kicked Ranma through the roof and he soared through the sky all the way to the schoolyard, 3 blocks away. (He can fly!)
She picked up Mixuki, who was left sitting on the floor, and cradled her.
"Who wouldn't like my cooking?" she asked the baby. More gurgling. (Yes, she likes to gurgle.)
Akane sighed, picked up the note from Kuno, which had fallen out of her pocket and onto the floor.
"Maybe I should at least talk to him," she murmured "and that'll surely get Ranma steamed!"
She started packing right away.
On the day of her journey, everyone was in a bad mood.
"Fine! Go! See if I care!" yelled Ranma, watching Akane carry her bags to Mr. Hakilu's truck, the same truck that would drive Akane to the mountains.
Without even waving goodbye, Akane sped away…
One week later
Ranma received a letter, but it wasn't signed, but he figured it was from Akane, begging him to forgive her.
Ranma,
If you love me,
Meet me in at Shiima springs,
I miss you so.
'Ha,' thought Ranma, 'I knew she'd come to her senses eventually! After all, who wouldn't miss me?' (Ego)
So he packed up his bags, strapped Mixuki on his back, and took off for Shiima.
Shampoo, a Chinese Amazon warrior, was an old suitor of Ranma's. She fell into the Shiima springs, and transforms into a cat.
'Shampoo brilliant!' thought Shampoo, 'now shampoo get Ranma all to self!'
Shampoo had written the note to Ranma, and was planning on using a new herbal pastry, to "show" Ranma that she was better than Akane. Now all she had to do was wait for him to show up.
"Dumb Akane," mumbled Ranma, trudging up the steps to the spring. "Why couldn't she have picked a easier place to get to?" Mixuki started gurgling.
When he finally reached the Shiima springs, he was greeted by a cry of "Shampoo knew you come for her!" then he was embraced by a warm pastry smell… and the next thing he knew… he was lying asleep, mumbling "the wonderful shampoo… I love shampoo…"
Meanwhile, Mixuki had been left, unnoticed on the rocks near the spring. (The same spring shampoo had drowned in, thus turning her into a cat.) Mixuki, seeing a sparkle of crystal floating on the water's surface, reached over to get a closer look… and SPLASH! She was a cat.
The sudden disturbance woke Ranma, who hurried over to the edge of the springs, and pulled out an unhappy Mixuki. An unhappy Mixuki, who happened to be as big as a large foot, covered in white fur, and was mewing.
'Uh oh…' thought Ranma. 'Akane is going to be very unhappy.'
--End flashback-->
Me: the end!
Ranma: grrrrr…
Me: um… maybe not then…Back to the story:
After Akane knocked Ranma unconscious, she took the news pretty well.
But life in Tokyo was hard, with raising a half cat, so Akane decided to relocate the family to a small village in china, called Meka.
No one thought much of a half-cat. Since many of the springs were in China; at least 40 of the entire population was half-something. (Well at least, in my story they are)
Mixuki loved the wonderful senses of nature in Meka. Meka was a very un-modernized village, so she grew up without knowing about televisions. (Can you believe it?)
She loved plowing and harvesting, and was devastated, when Ranma insisted that they locate back to Tokyo so she could get a proper education. (Or he wanted to watch television…)
Tomorrow she would start her first day in 9th grade at Tokyo Secondary, for grades 7 through 12. She was very worried…
Next day
Mixuki wore a giant, hot pink puffy party dress with giant bows and a straw hat. Her sun-streaked black hair was done in pigtails on the top of her head. She wore her shiny white platform shoes, and a hay-basket was used as her backpack. It was the prettiest outfit she'd ever seen. She usually saved it for special occasions, like weddings, or parties. But she wondered why students were laughing and pointing….
'Maybe this outfit is too great for them to bear!' she thought.
But before she could ponder this any longer, she heard someone yell, "DUCK!" as a giant circular metal disk came flying at her, but all she could think about was 'ducks here sure are strange…'
--End of chapter 1-->
Ok! That's all for this chapter. I hope you liked it and will keep reading. Reviews, comments, and suggestions are all welcome. Until next time…