AS IF IT MATTERS
No matter how loud
I scream
I turn up the sound
I dance and move around and around
I always hear you
As if you're coming from the sky and ground
No matter how hard
I hide
I close my eyes
I try and I try not to ask why
You're by my side
As if you're my grim reaper when I die
But it doesn't matter
I'll never be able to forget you
… Even if I wanted to.
Truthfully I had to put something here to get my readers back but thats not just it. I happened to just obtain the Tigun DVD's, WHOLE BOX SET! And so this is in memory of Rem, it a bit confusing to people who are not into poerty, but if you understand it, review, and if you don't... review anyways. Thankz
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So I love you all!
ps: igbogal, thank you for finding my weeping mistake! And your idea and ... well, not sure what you would call it of the peom was really helpful so if you don't mind, I'm going to put it on here ok? So more people can understand like you can.
igbogal:
This is a very different take on Rem, and a refreshing one. I've read
fics and poems where Vash is inspired by Rem, or misses Rem, and I've
even seen a Vash/Rem pairing. The idea presented here, that Vash is
haunted by Rem's words rather than finding strength or cofort in them, is
novel and interesting. The tone of this poem seems desperate and a little
frightened, as if Vash wants to put Rem to rest only to have her memory
follow him relentlessly.