Ok this is my first story and I'm not an amazing writer so give me a break, oh and just so u know I have up till chapter 14 written on paper so if I don't take subjections till then don't take it personally, ok here's the story I based most of the characters on my friends, but only the ones who replace the mew mews (oh if you have suggestions on names I'm all ears because I had some trouble with that)

Ok on with the story!

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Chapter 1: Not Mew Mews anymore!

It was a calm day at café Mew Mew……slip Crash! "Pudding what did you do now?" screamed Zakuro. "nothing lettuce shoved me" yelled Pudding, "I didn't shove you Ringo fell into me" complained lettuce "well mint dumped 3 cakes and 4 smoothies on me!" pouted Ringo "what do you mean dumped beri fell into me" yelled Mint "its not like its my fault ichigo knocked a chair into me!" shouted Beri "hey I slipped on a smoothie!...that I might have spilled" she said adding the last part in almost a whisper.

The other six mews gave her evil glares; they were covered in cake and smoothies.

Just then Ryou walks in "what the Hell happened here some one clean this up!"

He screams "ICHIGO" the other six mews shout she was ready for her cat ears

To pop up like they usually do when she gets embarrassed but nothing she didn't really

Notice no one did except Ryou.

The girls were all outside ready to leave when they see a chirma anima (sp?) in a tree

Mew Mew strawberry metamorphosis, Mew mew mint metamorphosis, mew mew lettuce metamorphosis, mew mew pudding metamorphosis, mew mew Zakuro metamorphosis,

Mew mew Ringo metamorphosis, mew mew beri metamorphosis!...but nothing!

"What the Hell is going on" screams ichigo," this is what I was afraid of "says Ryou

"What do you mean" says lettuce with fear in her eyes. "Your powers are gone!"

"Does that mean we won't be mew mews ever again" asks pudding with tears in her eyes

"Yes" he says.

Sorry it was so short have to rake the evil leaves GRRRRRR! Oh well the next chapter will be longer, this chapter and the next one were supposed to be together but I don't have time oh well please review! (Just so you know all responses to flames will be THAT'S NICE THANKS FOR SHARING!)

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