Oh my god I can't believe I got 2 reviews in less then 3 hours so since I'm so happy I'm gunna post another chapter yay me! Lol!
Animemew: I really love your reviews they actually give me advice on my story without sounding rude and I'll try to make my chapters longer (this one wont be) and I'll add some thing tell which character is based on which mew thanks for reviewing:D
Skygirl65: I'm sorry but I found your review really rude my spelling is fine I use spell check before I post and so my punctuation isn't perfect at least it's readable which I can't say about a lot of stories and what's up with "(I understand if you hate me right now and don't include me, it doesn't matter)" what do you mean don't include you, you make no sense!.
Well someone asked me to show which characters are based on whom so I will here it is
Ichigo-Jelly Mint-cupcake
Lettuce-Cream Pudding-Pineapple
Zakuro-Icing Ringo-Cherry
Beri-Butter
I hope this helps!
'…' thinking
"…" talking
A/n authors noteOk this is the second chapter dedicated to my best friend Jessica the reason these chapters are for her are 1) I based Cream on her 2) she's in love with Kish and asked me to make this chapter, weird I know but when I told her I was gunna post this chapter soon she was so happy well on with the chapter!
Chapter 8: Cream's date
Flash back
"Welcome to the mew mews" says Jelly hugging Cream. She
Just laughs and hugs her back "so the rumors are true there are new mew
Mews" says a voice behind them
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They turn around and see a strange looking guy with pointy ears. "Who Are?
You?" asks Jelly not sure if she should trust him "the name is Kish and lets
Just say I knew the old mews pretty well" Kish answers "so what do you want
With us?" says Jelly still not trusting him "just curious to see the new mewsI Mean the last ones were cute but not half as cute as you" he says looking
At Cream causing her to blush bright red "so how would you like to go outWith me angel" he says suddenly appearing in front of Cream holding her
Hand Cream's cheeks turn petal pink and says "I'd love too!" "Great I'll see
You at 6:00pm later" he says then disappearing out of site "wow 5 minutes as
A mew and she already has a date" Jelly says teasingly "oh shut up ...OH
MY GOD IT 4:00 I NLY HAVE 2 HOURS TO GET READY!" Cream says
Panicking and speeding off Jelly just laughs as she heads inside….meanwhile
Cream is taking a bath, picking out clothes and putting on make up. When she
Finally finished she checked the clock it was 7:59 "ok he's almost here
Breathe Cream breathe" she says to her self trying to calm down when she
Hears a nock at the door its Kish he tells her to grab on to him and to not
Open her eyes she feels her feet lift of the ground and is sure he's carrying
Her after about five minutes he lands and tells her to open her eyes when
She does she gasps at the sight she's standing on a cliff looking over the
Ocean watching the most gorgeous sunset she has ever seen "oh my god itsGorgeous" she sequels "glad you like it" he says smiling "look over there" he
Says pointing so she turned her head so it was away from his. "I don't see
Anyth-"she was cut off by his lips lightly kissing hers. After about an hour
There they headed home , Cream couldn't wait to tell Jelly what happened!
This is not an amazing chapter but I made it for my friend Jessica so oh well
I want at least 3 reviews until I update again since I did 2 chapters today
God my hands hurt! And the wind is blowing REALLY hard right now I hear sirens so I think a tree or something fell so now I'm scared especially since there's a tree out side my window ahhhh so scared oh well pray that a falling tree doesn't kill me so I can update again later!
