I also noticed how short my first chapter was, and I'm sorry. I didn't notice it till after I posted it. I thought it was longer, honestly.
The Beginning:
Part II
"Well" Riku whispered. "I think we're stuck here. Unless of corse you know a way out." He looked down at his new found companion walking beside him.
"Nope." Was Mickey's reply.
As they continued to walk they exchanged the stories that had led them there. (Sorry guys I'm not going to get into the stories that I'm sure you've heard already. Assuming you played the games.)
They walked on. Never stopping. Not even for sleep. In this place filled to the brim with darkness, time seemed irrelevant. It was hard to tell if a minute had passed or a week. With each step there was more pain. Riku fought hard to suppress the harsh words and thoughts coming from within.
"Are you ok?" The sound was like a spider that had leapt at him without warning. Riku nearly jumped out of his skin.
"Sorry," Mickey whispered.
"It's ok," Riku slowly replied, "I'm just a bit jumpy, here in this place."
"Are you going to be ok?" Mickey asked again.
"Yah. Why do you ask?"
"You seem to be in pain." Mickey sounded concerned.
Riku had hoped the king wouldn't notice. But it was hard to hide the pain when every step made him wince.
"Do you need a break?" Mickey asked, snapping Riku from his own thoughts.
Riku never got to answer Mickey's question. He was attacked from behind by some, unknown, flinching figure. The being was mostly white with no eyes, and a mouth made of what seemed to be a zipper. It looked to be made of some kind of leathery-denim kind of material. But it stretched like it were made of rubber!
Mickey was quick to act. He drew his keyblade and jumped towards the attacker. As soon as Mickey had defeated the creature, 3 more similar ones took its place! Riku joined in to help, but it was of no use. The more that were destroyed, the more that came at them. Soon both Mickey and Riku were exhausted. Just as it seemed all hope was lost, they vanished! All of them, gone, without a trace of ever being there!
Mickey stood there panting. Meanwhile Riku fell backwards exhausted. Before anything could be said, a voice came out of nowhere.
"There you are," It rang. "I've been looking all over for you."
"Who are you? Where are you? What's going on here?" Riku shouted confused, getting to his feet.
"I know that voice." Mickey whispered.
"Don't worry I'll get you out of that place." The voice answered. And with that said everything around them, all the darkness, became a blinding white light.
The Beginning:
Part II End
I hope this gets better soon.
This story, I realize will start off kind boring. But I promise it'll get better.
Suggestions still loved!
