So then 2nd chapter here it is yes I took into account what ladymori said I'll actually proofread everything its just easier to type when in a hurry well thank you every one for the reviews and here it is.

WE DANES DO IT BETTER


Alanna of Trebond sat glaring out the window of her carriage. She was on her way to the convent.

The small redhead was still extremely angry with Thom who had after saying no had then told everyone who'd listen to him. If he had just done as was asked it all would have worked out how they both wanted it to. Alanna could become a knight, and Thom could do whatever it was he wanted to do with magic.

Unfortunately for her Thom was a coward. So Thom went off to the castle (lucky him) the other day to learn the fighting arts were, he could also learn magic with other pages and squires that had magical aptitude.

While Alanna was forced to go to the convent were she would be taught the correct ways for a lady to behave with dull lessons on such things like how to curtsy or flirt in the correct

Alanna watched as they reached one of the most boring places in the world where she would then spend the next 7 years.

She saw other girls arrive in their carriages all dressed up, and giggling quietly to each other saying what a lovely place. Alanna called it a waste of good space.


She was taken to the head mother (is that what there called) to be questioned and given maids that would serve her until she hired her own.

The head mother was not exactly an ugly women but you could hardly call her pretty, she had blonde hair that looked as if it had been styled one to many times. And her skin was so pale as if it had never seen the sunlight or the outdoors for that matter.

She had been studying Alanna for a while that Alanna was getting worried that she might have fallen asleep, when she spoke.

"mmm...not bad, a bit to much muscle but we'll soon fix that, I have had a maid selected for you that will serve you for 7 years until you got to court, ARE YOU LISTENING GIRL"

Alanna had been miles away at that moment only snapping back into reality as she heard the 'mother' yell at her.

"What...err yes lady?"

"Don't say what girl, you say excuse me"

"Excuse me madam," Alanna smiled. The smile was so fake, it hurt her cheeks.

Well so that's it I hope people review , and yes I spelt Alanna right cause I edited it this time, if you have any ideas send them when you review I would love to hear them, and when I say Danes do it better I mean they make better cheese, its true they do.

Toodaloofor now and farewell.