So then how was it, yes im trying to get someone to proof it for me but how?

Thanks Booksquirt I'll consider it, either the Shang or the rogue , or a random idea could be cathrak but I doubt it.

So hear it is Chapter four.

Goodbye


I am a dreamer but when I wake.

You can't break my spirit it's my dreams you take.

And as you move on remember me.

Remember us and all we used to be.

(From goodbye my lover James Blunt yes, I know it's about lovers but so)


She had almost finished packing her belongings into lots of different saddle bags she didn't know what else to do, she just felt so limp and rejected so for once in Alanna's Life she had nothing to say no one to get angry at she just couldn't.

He (not her father) had given her money and clothing even a horse, as long as she promised never to recognize him if they passed in the street , like he thought she would stay in Tortall fat chance of that happening. She was going to get as far way as possible. (after she said farewell to her brother and her friend george( yes she does no him they umm met when he was doing business near the convent)


(thoms point of view)

Thom wasn't the best at any martial art or weapon, he thought but he was getting bored of Captain Sklaw going on at him consistently. How did he except Thom to improve if he was yelling at him consistently.

Thom was walking back to hi chambers, when his friend's strode up to him "Hey Thom, are you serving at the Grand Ball," Jonathon of conte asked.

Raoul groaned. "Mithros, somebody tell me why we have these?"

Gareth or gary as he was known by his friends laughed" geez don't you know anything dear friend its so we can go and see if there are any young beautiful maidens to court" ,

Thom cut in "yeah that'll work since were serving them and i always get dumped at a table with old dumpy couples"


(Alanna's View)

She had just arrived at the dancing dove, and was telling george what had happened.

"Wait your saying that Thom is your brother, Humph how did that happen"

"and whats that supposed to mean george"

"well umm... your very different, i would never have picked it"

"oh yeah definetly, were only twins' (she said in a sarcastic undertone) "So don't tease, george he may be hopeless. but he's my brother and i love him"

"yes, well...umm were do you think you'll be adventurin off to lass"

'im not sure, mabye the shang , (laughing) or i could join the rogue"


(next day alanna goes to say farewell to thom)

Thom saw Alanna approaching from the city's back roads long before she saw him.

Alanna Stopped directly in front of him, planted her feet firmly on the ground and stared at Thom, working her jaw up and down as if she wanted to talk but was unable to get the words to roll of her tongue.

Then she punched Thom on the nose/chin.

It hurt

Wincing Thom faced his sister "I guess I deserved that"

"That you did, we have to talk'

"Now"

"It can't wait, I have been disowned , and I need your help brother, not just your knowledge but your love"

So that's it

As they walked to his rooms, Thom kept glancing at Alanna out of the corner of his eye. Finally he said in a low voice, "I missed you"

"As did I" she smiled at him, the first real one in months.


Ok yes i know, i didnt say whether she would officially go to the shang, because i couldnt find a good spot but she is i sorta said it "mabye the shang". so thanks and please remember R and R.