Ok hi everyone this is the 6th chapter finally, and theres some fluff yeah, do please tell me if you think it's good (the story and the fluff that is) well here it is remember R and R.
"I'm not sure I want you to go again I mean I just got you back Alanna" Thom said as he longed sadly at his sister.
"Thom I can't stay here what if I run into to well, father and anyway I need to get out and explore, not to worry I'll write and let you in on all my travels." She replied cheerfully.
"Well goodbye, Alanna make sure to write I'll miss you"
"Oh yeah and Thom if you ever chance by the dancing dove give em a wave for me" She grinned. And with that kicked moonlight and rode off (ok she like got a horse from err George)
"The dancing wha.. Alanna," (he sighed) then watched her hair like a beacon of light until he could no longer see it any more. And went back inside.
Groaned as he remembered he was meant to be mucking out stalls as a punishment (for not participating to his fullest in swordplay), well he'd just have to make up an excuse, although he doubted it would make a difference.
Four Years later
A girl was leaning against an oak, as she read letters from friends congratulating her for and was soon to become the youngest Shang in 100 yrs.
She had finished them all but one, her brothers she opened it and began to read grinning, her brother was squire to Sir Marten he was glad after all Sir Marten was desk knight and well that suited Thom just fine (Thom had found George and the dancing dove)
As she was so engrossed in the letter, she did not see someone come up behind the tree and her.
"BOO"
"Holy"
"Tch tch, my dear lioness (she's called the lioness so meh) tacky"
"I was reading" she replied defiantly, than grinned as he pulled her towards him and then his mouth met hers in a surge of passion.
They surfaced, breathless
"I take it you missed me" She grinned up at him, "maybe".
A little while later after they had, caught up (cough, cough) they walked back to the Shang domain and Alanna questioned Liam (the dude she was making out with) about what he had seen ect. (He had been made Shang the year before).
So how do we like it, do review and tell me. Sorry im not that great a fluff writer, but hey im trying thank you to epobbp and nicolerenea for updating on my last chapter I hope you enjoy this.
