A/N: I'm sorry...I haven't updated or written at ALL in a few days.
Orli: Isn't it great? *bounces*
Me: I've had a major writers block, and I've had like, three major projects due in one week...
Orli: and she hasn't had a SINGLE chance to threaten me! She's THAT busy!
Me: I'm that busy!
*pauses*
Me: Though I did go to Nordstrom's and buy a whole bunch of shoes...
Orli: She and her mom spent $250 on shoes of all things!
Me: Yep!
*disclaimer in ch. 6* I apologize in advance if this chapter is terrible or pointless or anything, but somehow, I'm just not feeling inspired today...
Chapter Eleven:
Legolas sat down on one of the rotting logs on the ground, his elbows on his knees, his head cradled in his hands. Staring off into the distance, he thought of what it would be like to kiss her...
Stop. You know that would never happen.
Yet it would feel so good, so blissfully perfect to hold her in my arms...
But what would she say, should she know that you feel this way?
A piercing scream shattered Legolas' daydreaming. He stood, and hurried into the forest. "Fanya! Fanya!" he called. "Where are you?!"
The shriek came from a closer place, yet he couldn't figure out where.
"Legolas! LEGOLAS! Look up you dimwitted elf!" he heard her shout at him.
He looked up.
Nearly fainting, he realized that she was in the clutches of a huge, black spider. Fanya was holding her sword, trying with all her might to get away from it, but it was no use. The spider was holding it with a grip so tight; he could see her circulation stopping. It didn't look like it was going to let go anytime soon.
He hoisted himself up into a tree too meet the spider head-on. It clicked it's pincers menacingly at him, its eight eyes flashing at the sight of an elf.
Suddenly, as if it had changed its mind, it dropped Fanya. She went crashing the good 15 feet to the ground. He saw her black out at the impact of the hit. It crept forward to him; its feet making a sort of slithering sound in the trees.
Legolas grabbed his bow and arrow, and aimed a perfect shot at its eyes. As he released it, however, he slightly overbalanced, sending his shot into the night above him. He felt something grab his legs. He quickly unsheathed his dagger and jabbed it into the thing that gripped his legs. It died instantly. But even as he jerked the now bloody dagger out, he heard more spiders. Plenty of them. Too many for comfort.
One of the spiders lunged at him, and he accidentally dropped his dagger. As he whipped his bow and arrows out, he hit only half of them before his arrow stock ran out. He saw no use for his bow to him anymore, as all he could do is whack them with it now.
He retrieved his sword out from his sheath, and fought them, hacking their legs off, then stabbing at their abdomens. But the forces of gravity seemed to have their own idea of fate. As he swung at the last spider, he overbalanced, and fell backwards to the hard, dirt, forest floor. And as he hit the ground, he found only enough energy to grasp Fanya's cold hand.
A/N: Ok. Short chappy. I feel somewhat inspired for the next chapter, so I'll update this, and get on with the next one.
Please don't tell me that my chapters are too short! I've had enough of those, I already KNOW!!!
Orli: Hey! I can't believe that I got knocked out!!!!!
Me: I'm the authoress...and it's not YOU, it's LEGOLAS.
Orli: I've been through this conversation with you. Me and leggy! We're practically the same person!
Me: and the same with you and Will Turner.
Orli: ...oh ya! I'm that too!
Review Responses:
A. K. Y. C.: Thanks! I'm sorry I left you in the corner of your room so long! But I promise the next chapter will be longer, and updated faster...and good luck with your story, I can't wait to read it!
I'm an angry gumball: I agree *stomps on spider*
Zelda 11: Yes I'm on the atkin's diet. I must say, it's not that hard, and I've lost like, 5 pounds *whoop!* Thanks for reviewing!
Lady Zane: I know...I don't know ANYthing about horses, honestly, so all I really want is her on a horse. ^^. Thanks for reviewing!
Guss-Guss: I know! I know! I promise I'll make a really long one, just for you! But unfortunately, I don't have all the time in the world!!! And trust me, this is NOWHERE to the end of the story! NOWHERE!!! It will be a LONG time before I even THINK of an ending! Thx!
Digital-Tiffany: Erm...right...tell me. How do you swallow two whole Popsicles at once??
P3gurl: I've inspired you? Really? Seriously, that is one of the greatest pieces of feedback that I could get as an author! I can't wait to read the next chappy of your story! Really!
Inweofmargothrond: What does AU mean? I'm confuzzled... I know I should read that thing, but I simply don't have the time!!! And I like this elvish better! *smirks* Lol, just kidding. Thanks for the Review!
Dizzy Izzy: Ponder away, girl, because I'm NOT sharing!!! *bwah ha ha!!!* And you'll know soon enough when she'll like him... *evil grin* I'm glad that you liked the spider part, because it took more than half my life away trying to THINK of something good for that chapter! *sighs* Thx for the review!
YueMichiruNaragisawaMiko: I still am overwhelmed by that name...*phew* anyway. To the review... Ya...I figured that it was pretty obvious that Leggy would save her, so I just felt that she should get in some kind of mortal danger before she fell for him... hmm...I guess being almost-spider- food is mortal danger... now she just has to fall for him... *ponders*
Mercuriall: 4 words in a review are better than none! Thanks!
A/N: And I'm serious, I don't want ANY more reviews complaining about length...I already know that I don't have enough spare time to write a proper chapter!!!!! *sniffs*
...and NOW I get to have some Herbal Tea!!!... *goes off to make tea*
Orli: And while she's gone! You can follow these easy steps to brighten her day! 1) scroll down! 2) locate the purply-blue button! 3) Hit it, making sure that it says 'review' and not 'report abuse' (I know, 2 'r's can be VERY confusing! But make sure you don't make the mistake!) and 4) Write a review! I don't care if it's 2 words long! Just send feedback!!!
Me: *from kitchen* and if any of you wanna chat about my story, my AIM's SN is 'Tinuviel2013'. And tell me that you're from FF.net, otherwise I'll get scared and run away or something.
Lol.
-The Hobbit Ivy;;;;;;; 8:30PM 9/23/03
Orli: Isn't it great? *bounces*
Me: I've had a major writers block, and I've had like, three major projects due in one week...
Orli: and she hasn't had a SINGLE chance to threaten me! She's THAT busy!
Me: I'm that busy!
*pauses*
Me: Though I did go to Nordstrom's and buy a whole bunch of shoes...
Orli: She and her mom spent $250 on shoes of all things!
Me: Yep!
*disclaimer in ch. 6* I apologize in advance if this chapter is terrible or pointless or anything, but somehow, I'm just not feeling inspired today...
Chapter Eleven:
Legolas sat down on one of the rotting logs on the ground, his elbows on his knees, his head cradled in his hands. Staring off into the distance, he thought of what it would be like to kiss her...
Stop. You know that would never happen.
Yet it would feel so good, so blissfully perfect to hold her in my arms...
But what would she say, should she know that you feel this way?
A piercing scream shattered Legolas' daydreaming. He stood, and hurried into the forest. "Fanya! Fanya!" he called. "Where are you?!"
The shriek came from a closer place, yet he couldn't figure out where.
"Legolas! LEGOLAS! Look up you dimwitted elf!" he heard her shout at him.
He looked up.
Nearly fainting, he realized that she was in the clutches of a huge, black spider. Fanya was holding her sword, trying with all her might to get away from it, but it was no use. The spider was holding it with a grip so tight; he could see her circulation stopping. It didn't look like it was going to let go anytime soon.
He hoisted himself up into a tree too meet the spider head-on. It clicked it's pincers menacingly at him, its eight eyes flashing at the sight of an elf.
Suddenly, as if it had changed its mind, it dropped Fanya. She went crashing the good 15 feet to the ground. He saw her black out at the impact of the hit. It crept forward to him; its feet making a sort of slithering sound in the trees.
Legolas grabbed his bow and arrow, and aimed a perfect shot at its eyes. As he released it, however, he slightly overbalanced, sending his shot into the night above him. He felt something grab his legs. He quickly unsheathed his dagger and jabbed it into the thing that gripped his legs. It died instantly. But even as he jerked the now bloody dagger out, he heard more spiders. Plenty of them. Too many for comfort.
One of the spiders lunged at him, and he accidentally dropped his dagger. As he whipped his bow and arrows out, he hit only half of them before his arrow stock ran out. He saw no use for his bow to him anymore, as all he could do is whack them with it now.
He retrieved his sword out from his sheath, and fought them, hacking their legs off, then stabbing at their abdomens. But the forces of gravity seemed to have their own idea of fate. As he swung at the last spider, he overbalanced, and fell backwards to the hard, dirt, forest floor. And as he hit the ground, he found only enough energy to grasp Fanya's cold hand.
A/N: Ok. Short chappy. I feel somewhat inspired for the next chapter, so I'll update this, and get on with the next one.
Please don't tell me that my chapters are too short! I've had enough of those, I already KNOW!!!
Orli: Hey! I can't believe that I got knocked out!!!!!
Me: I'm the authoress...and it's not YOU, it's LEGOLAS.
Orli: I've been through this conversation with you. Me and leggy! We're practically the same person!
Me: and the same with you and Will Turner.
Orli: ...oh ya! I'm that too!
Review Responses:
A. K. Y. C.: Thanks! I'm sorry I left you in the corner of your room so long! But I promise the next chapter will be longer, and updated faster...and good luck with your story, I can't wait to read it!
I'm an angry gumball: I agree *stomps on spider*
Zelda 11: Yes I'm on the atkin's diet. I must say, it's not that hard, and I've lost like, 5 pounds *whoop!* Thanks for reviewing!
Lady Zane: I know...I don't know ANYthing about horses, honestly, so all I really want is her on a horse. ^^. Thanks for reviewing!
Guss-Guss: I know! I know! I promise I'll make a really long one, just for you! But unfortunately, I don't have all the time in the world!!! And trust me, this is NOWHERE to the end of the story! NOWHERE!!! It will be a LONG time before I even THINK of an ending! Thx!
Digital-Tiffany: Erm...right...tell me. How do you swallow two whole Popsicles at once??
P3gurl: I've inspired you? Really? Seriously, that is one of the greatest pieces of feedback that I could get as an author! I can't wait to read the next chappy of your story! Really!
Inweofmargothrond: What does AU mean? I'm confuzzled... I know I should read that thing, but I simply don't have the time!!! And I like this elvish better! *smirks* Lol, just kidding. Thanks for the Review!
Dizzy Izzy: Ponder away, girl, because I'm NOT sharing!!! *bwah ha ha!!!* And you'll know soon enough when she'll like him... *evil grin* I'm glad that you liked the spider part, because it took more than half my life away trying to THINK of something good for that chapter! *sighs* Thx for the review!
YueMichiruNaragisawaMiko: I still am overwhelmed by that name...*phew* anyway. To the review... Ya...I figured that it was pretty obvious that Leggy would save her, so I just felt that she should get in some kind of mortal danger before she fell for him... hmm...I guess being almost-spider- food is mortal danger... now she just has to fall for him... *ponders*
Mercuriall: 4 words in a review are better than none! Thanks!
A/N: And I'm serious, I don't want ANY more reviews complaining about length...I already know that I don't have enough spare time to write a proper chapter!!!!! *sniffs*
...and NOW I get to have some Herbal Tea!!!... *goes off to make tea*
Orli: And while she's gone! You can follow these easy steps to brighten her day! 1) scroll down! 2) locate the purply-blue button! 3) Hit it, making sure that it says 'review' and not 'report abuse' (I know, 2 'r's can be VERY confusing! But make sure you don't make the mistake!) and 4) Write a review! I don't care if it's 2 words long! Just send feedback!!!
Me: *from kitchen* and if any of you wanna chat about my story, my AIM's SN is 'Tinuviel2013'. And tell me that you're from FF.net, otherwise I'll get scared and run away or something.
Lol.
-The Hobbit Ivy;;;;;;; 8:30PM 9/23/03
