Yup. I'm definitely continuing this story. I don't have much to say except that the Bitbeast in this chapter is something I made up for my first two beyblade fics. So yeah, I admit that I have made a Gary Stu bitbeast.


Kai's Bad Day

By Dark Ice Dragon

I-fell-into-the-world! Sue


Kai was walking towards the river thinking over what had happened to him just ten minutes ago. How long would it take for another Mary Sue to find him?

"Oh. My. God!"

He sighed. Not very long then. But then, it could just be a fangirl. Most fangirls though, would whisper to her friends (which were in endless supply) before trying to talk to him. Or shove a blank piece of paper under his nose. With his new-found experience with Mary Sues, he would prefer that.

Kai would have kept on walking if it wasn't for the girl who was standing in his way, not moving, staring at him. Her eyes were as wide as they could go. Her mouth was agape. She didn't look like she had enough brain cells to have said what Kai had heard earlier.

Definite fangirl.

"You're Kai!" she shrieked, pointing at him. "Ohmygod! I can't believe it!" The fangirl did a little jump.

"Neither can I," muttered Kai. "I find out that Mary Sues actually exist, nearly give up beyblading because of it and now I get myself found by the worst fangirl I've met in a long time."

The girl was oblivious to what he was saying. Her mouth was still moving but Kai wasn't listening. Not that he could understand what she was saying, but still. He wondered when she was going to ask him for his autograph and leave him when she barrelled into him, knocking him over.

"You are soo much hotter in real life than a cartoon!" she squealed, her voice muffled against his chest.

"What?" Cartoon? What the hell was she talking about?

She lifted her head to look at him. "Where I come from, you're a cartoon called Beyblade! It's soooo cool! You should watch it. It's the best! And you look so cute when you're confused," she added as an afterthought. She smiled at him.

'Where I come from,' his mind repeated. Oh, that really made sense. He started to use his automatic responses. "Get. Off. Of. Me," he growled through gritted teeth.

The girl's face was confused. "But why?"

Stopping himself from saying anything else, he rolled over. "Ack!" the girl yelled when she found that she was on the hard ground instead of on top of Kai's body. "What did you do that for?"

"I would like it if you didn't touch me."

"But why?" she asked again.

He didn't bother to answer her. She was starting to get annoying. Okay, she was annoying to start with but she was starting to get more annoying. Picking himself up, he started to walk away from her without looking back. "Aren't you going to answer me?" Now she just sounded pathetic.

Behind him, the girl grumbled and shoved her hands in her pockets. One of her hands brushed against something metal. She pulled it out. "Oh, wow! I have a beyblade!"

Kai couldn't stop himself from rolling his eyes. She needed some professional help for her memory. Or a new brain. Either was good.

He heard a gasp of surprise. What now? She'd found a penny?

"I have a bitbeast!" Kai stopped in his tracks. How could someone forget that they had a bitbeast? Oh. Wait. He had forgotten Black Dranzer hadn't he?

"Trilox," she said, reading the writing. "Sounds cool!"

Kai turned around. "You have a bitbeast?" he aked, wondering how she had gotten a hold of one.

She nodded. "That's what I said. Don't you believe me?" she whined, tears threatening to spill over. In her hand was a silver beyblade. "Fine, if you don't believe me I'll show it to you." She pouted while she did so.

Looking at it, Kai saw that Trilox was a velociraptor. A three-headed velociraptor. Donned on each head was a sort of mask that covered the top half of their skulls - it went from the tip of their snout, over their eyes to the back of the skull. That left the bottom of the jaw free to bite. The left most mask was a dark green, the middle mask was a ocean blue and the mask on the far right was a blood red. Running down each neck, down the spine, to the tip of his tail were curved, flat spikes that were a dull white. Trilox's body was a kind of gold colour, which was more of an orangey-yellow then actual gold.

'Wow,' Kai thought in wonder. 'I bet Trilox is stronger than Dranzer.' His fingers tightened around the beyblade. 'No. Trilox is stronger than Black Dranzer, there is no doubt.'

The girl in front of him looked at him worriedly. "Kai?" He focused his eyes on her. "Can I get my beyblade back?"

Wordlessly, he did as he was told.

As soon as Trilox was back in her pocket, the girl tackled him again. This time, Kai let her. She was powerful. More powerful than he was. Who was he to stop her?

She had earned his respect. For the Bladebreakers, that had taken over a year.

She was special.

She had a powerful bitbeast.

She was… touching him.

With a mental yell, Kai shoved her off. He was breathing hard; it came out in short gasps. What was he doing? A girl had touched him and he'd let her!

He backed away from her warily. She couldn't be one. There was no way-

"What did you do that for?" she asked huffily. Then smiled brightly. Seeing that, Kai felt worse. "You are a cute bishounen."

Why was she suddenly talking in Japanese? Kai had thought that she was American. That was the only place that Kai could think of that would make the girl seem normal. Apart from the fact that she said 'Where I came from'. …Oh. Oooh. She must have been talking about America. But the cartoon? Was somebody stalking them, filming everything they were doing, then converting it into a cartoon? Sometimes, paranoia is justified.

Then his brain translated what the girl had said. 'Cute cute boy? …What?'

The girl pouted. "I thought you understood Japanese."

"I do."

She crossed her arms. "Well obviously not enough," she said superiorly.

'Riiight.' "What's your name?" 'Damnit!'

The girl uncrossed her arms and smiled, showing nearly of all her teeth. "Sakura Suzuki! And I know who you are, Kai Hiwatari." She giggled.

'Not very American. She didn't even say it right,' his mind commented, wincing at the pronunciation. 'Could she be-' "And where you come from?" That proved it. He couldn't control what he was sayi-

"Ah, but I couldn't tell you that," she said slyly, a small smile on her lips.

Kai frowned. Why not? He was curious as to where she had come from. Maybe when she returned to where ever she came from, she would take him with her. Living here was so boring anyway. There wasn't anything to do. Noth – crap. 'Concentrate, Kai. You are not going to depend on anyone. Especially a girl.' His eyes narrowed. 'I don't get it. She can't be a –'

"Are you paying attention to me? No? That is so rude!"

'Since when do I care when I'm being rude? …Ever since I've met her.'

"I'm sorry," Kai apologised.

"Ha! I knew it! You can be polite," Sakura crowed happily.

Kai clenched his hands into fists. "No, I can't," he said curtly. He would normally not hit a girl, but this was a very good exception. She had to be a Mary Sue. She wasn't that pretty. Just like a regular girl but still… Kai shook his head in an attempt to clear his head.

"What do you mean?" her eyes were wide with question after hearing what he had said.

'If she would keep quiet, this would be so much easier.' The girl's voice was beginning to grate on his nerves. He closed his eyes and thought about the Weapon. He opened his eyes. And cursed. No such luck.

"Are you ignoring me?"

'Dranzer said that I would know how to call up the Spork when I needed it. So why can't I?' he thought. 'Maybe that means that this girl is just a normal fangirl?' Kai frowned. 'That can't be right. She's affected me in the same way as Yunalesca. No normal fangirl can do that.'

Kai was distracted again when Sakura grabbed his arm. "What did I do?" She pulled it slightly. "Can I do something so that you won't be mad at me?"

"First, you will let go of my arm."

"But-"

"Then you will tell me about your past." 'Maybe I should just keep my mouth closed like I used to,' Kai thought resignedly.

Sakura's eyes shone with unshed tears. "My parents died when I was one year old in a car crash and I have been living with my horrible aunt and uncle."

Kai's frown deepened. Now where had he heard that before?

"Do you wanna beybattle?" she asked.

Well, it would give him something to do. It wasn't as if he had anything better to do. Like training. Or making other people train.

"Sure." He pulled out Dranzer and loaded her into her launcher. Sakura did the same. Somehow they both knew where the boundaries were for the beybattle without saying anything.

They shouted together, "Three… two… one! Let it rip!"

Dranzer and Trilox raced towards each other. Sparks flew as the two beyblades crashed into one another before spiraling away. This happened several times but for some reason, Kai didn't feel like calling on Dranzer. He knew that Sakura also had a bitbeast so why wasn't he doing anything? Sakura would be the first person to make a move. He didn't know why Sakura had to be the first person to do so but he wasn't going to question it.

"Trilox, attack!" she shouted. Kai waited for Trilox to charge into Dranzer - to see what her attack power was like of course. Except that he didn't get a chance to. For as soon as that had happened, Dranzer was thrown out of the boundaries.

Surprised, all Kai could do was stare in shock at Sakura. There was no way that she should have been able to do that so easily. That kind of power was for bitbeasts like Black Dranzer. Continuing to stare at her, Kai saw Sakura's eyes fluctuate until they settled on a transparent light violet colour. Some parts were more concentrated than others but that didn't last for very long. Her face paled and she shrieked, covering her hands over her ears.

Musing what was wrong with her, Kai picked up Dranzer from the ground where she had landed. Wait… her eyes changed colour? That wasn't normal. And she had beaten Dranzer easily, something which even Black Dranzer wasn't able to do.

Was this a universal trait for Mary Sues? If it was, it would make them a hell of a lot easier to spot.

Sakura suddenly yelled, "Stop talking to me! Go away!" Her hands were pressed against her ears so hard that they shook and her eyes were screwed shut.

Kai looked around but he couldn't see anyone. He didn't heard anyone either. Was she schizophrenic? That could maybe be why she thought she was from another world. Or she made up her own fantasy world.

"Kai, make him stop!" she pleaded, tears welling up in her eyes. "Make him stop talking to me!"

"And how exactly am I supposed to do that if I don't know who you're talking about?" he replied coldly. 'Finally,' he thought, 'it looks like I'm back to normal.'

'Could ya please shut her up!' Kai blinked. Where did that- 'Oh good, ya aren't screamin'. Now could you maybe do somethin' about her?' The accent was slightly strange. He hadn't heard it before - he didn't think so anyway.

A little confused, Kai asked mentally, 'Who are you?' He somehow felt pleasure coming from somewhere. It definitely wasn't coming from him.

'I'm Trilox. That girl's bitbeast.' Kai could feel disgust that again, wasn't his.'At least you're calm enough to try and talk to me.'

'Who says I'm calm?' Kai said irritabily.

This time he felt amusement. 'Right now, we're connected. You can feel what I feel and I can feel what you feel.'

Kai twitched. What Trilox was saying was that he could see into him, his memor- 'Hey! I'm not like that! I didn't even do that with Charlie.'

'Who's Charlie?' Oh for-! Was the bitbeast a Mary Sue as well?

'What's a Mary Sue?' Kai could feel the confusion coming from the bitbeast. 'Charlie is my friend, my blader. I do not wanna be here!'

'Why amn't I concerned with the fact that I'm currently talking to a bitbeast?' Kai wondered.

'Because, you've done it before. That's what Dranzer said anyways.'

'You talked to Dranzer?'

'Well, yeah. If I didn't, my butt woulda been kicked outta here as soon as I tried talking to you.'

'But you would have been able to beat her easily,' Kai said slowly He didn't know how, but somehow he knew that Trilox was shaking all three heads.

'Don't ask me how that happened. I've been feelin' weird ever since I've been with her. And no, I wouldn't have because a bitbeast protects their blader's mental health with their life. Life energy is a lot more stonger than using energy to attack.'

"Kai?" He turned his head towards Sakura. She was staring fearfully at him. "Kai, your eyes have turned purple…"

He cocked his head to the left. His eyes had gone purple? 'Did you have anything to do with this?'

'I thought you wouldn't be affected,' Trilox said sheepishly. 'This happened with Charlie but I didn't think that this would happen with any other people.'

"He's - he's talking to you, isn't he?" Kai nodded. "Tell him to stop talking to me! I don't want to listen to him!"

'Well tell her that I don't wanna be her bloody bitbeast.'

'I am not a messenger!' he growled.

'Tell her that she should return me to my real owner then.'

"Trilox said that you should return him to his real owner."

"But I don't want to." She pouted again. "He was weird anyway."

'Weird!' Trilox raged. 'How about I-'

Kai covered his ears. It didn't help. "Both of you, shut. Up." They did. "Sakura, did you steal Trilox?" 'Trilox, don't say anything until after she has.'

"Yes, I did. I got Trilox because I beat him."

'But if Trilox is able to beat Dranzer… Why did she exchange her bitbeast for a weaker one?' And Kai was beginning to think that the girl was just a normal girl again, bar the schizophrenia. Well, she had only stolen Trilox-

'Excuse me? Only stolen me? Doesn't that mean that I've been kidnapped in your law! …Are you feeling alright? I'm getting weird emotions from you.'

'So you can tell. She really is a Mary Sue.'

'What's that? That's the second time you've said that "Mary Sue" name.'

'It doesn't matter. What matters now is how to get rid of her.'

Kai could feel comfort from the back of his mind. It wasn't the same as feeling the emotions from Trilox. -'Try now,'- he heard the female voice say.

Not even realising what he was doing, Kai raised his hand and concentrated on the tri-pronged weapon.

'What th-'

-'Shush.'-

"What are you doing? Where's that red light coming from?" Sakura's eyes widened. "No, that's not possible," she whispered in realisation.

Kai smirked. "I've already met Yunalesca."

"You - you have?" she asked nervously, stuttering a little bit as her eyes darted around the area but then settled on the red light. "Where is she?"

"She disappeared."

Her eyes hadn't left his hand. "You know what? I'm sure you're really busy, being famous and all so I'll just leave you on your way."

His smirk widened. "I don't think so." With that, the Spork in his hand solidified and he jumped forward. With a scream, she ran away. Kai would have followed her if Trilox's 'blade hadn't been left on the ground because he tripped over it.

'Great, just great. Now one of them is loose and she knows that I know,' Kai grumbled.

-'I bet you're sour because you didn't get a sweetie.'- Kai could just imagine Dranzer being on the verge of laughter.

Kai felt confusion. 'What are you two talking about?'

-'It doesn't matter. Now that Sakura's influence has gone, you should be able to go back to your previous owner.'-

There was a flash and Kai saw that there was no longer a beyblade on the ground. Knowing that he wouldn't be able to do anything about Trilox, he went down the road to see if he could see Sakura. He didn't.

With a frustrated sigh, Kai resumed walking towards the river. It wouldn't be that bad, there couldn't be that many Mary Sues and who was to say that they were all after him? So one Mary Sue knowing that he could summon a Spork wasn't going to make a really big difference… Right?


With my limited knowledge of Japanese, I hope it was okay. I haven't seen anyone use the 'cute bishonen' but it's probable that that could happen. I've been talking to a friend though, and she said that she has seen someone use that.

Bishonen – cute/pretty/handsome boy. Take your pick.

I think I'll just start compiling all the references that I get my names from. Case I get sued or something. Which would be ironic.

Sakura Sazuki – Sakura, I'm thinking of Sakura Avalon from Cardcaptors. Don't know why, I quite like her. Guess it was just for the name. Suzuki, from Gamerz Heaven. It's a manga. Just for the sole reason that GH is right in front of me. Eh, the main character is a guy though…

Anyone recognise Sakura's past? (snicker) I don't know why I did her past that way, but I really couldn't think of anything.

And yes, everything about Trilox is true, apart from the power levels. Don't read those two fics, unless you want to go cross-eyed trying to read phonetic Scottish. I'm gonna try convert it so that it's easier to read but I don't have the time at the moment. Charlie also belongs to me. Hopefully you didn't have to read my other fic to understand what was happening. Or attempt to since it's horrendus.

Eh, sorry for the whole conversation between a completely new character (though I guess that's what this fic is about).