AN-You reviewers just make me want to cry . . . TEARS OF HAPPINESS! SO HAPPY! SO MANY REVIEWS! I THANK THEE ALL! ALSO, I WOULD LIKE TO APOLOGIZE FOR NOT UPDATING SOONER! PLEASE FORGIVE ME! TT
I like to thank the following peeps for making my day:
icedragongurl15- I'm glad you liked it!
Dictating spirit and Yukira - TT I am so sorry! You did name the song, but you forgot to put down your email, so I couldn't contact you. Thank you for reviewing and I'll make it up to you if you ever review again!
Luna89- YAY! YOU WON! cough Yeah, I did get your email, but scratches head I sort of had writer's block. Sorry for the wait!
InuKurama- Thank you! I will! Enjoy and sorry you didn't win!
ShadowVixen- YAY! I'm clever! You wanna tell my mom that? lol Hope you enjoy!
Koyshiri- Yeah, a lot of my friends don't know this song. Their like wtf are you talking about? Thanks for reviewing and enjoy!
foreeverjinxed- Aww, thanks! Most people (including me) love long chappies, but now I know that it takes awhile. . . Thanks for reviewing! (Candy is SOOOO good!)
Shadowalker- Yeah, I've always pictured Hiei liking a girl the total opposite of him. I mean he does have a soft side, but he doesn't wanna get hurt. Poor Hiei! Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
Sakura-chan- Yeah, I didn't exactly update soon. . . Sorry about that. I'll try to make them longer, promise! Thanks for the review!
Lazigirl- Sorry, but you didn't win. Hiei's my favorite character too! He's so KAWAII! Thanks for reviewing!
kitty- Thanks! It's nice to know people like how my story is so far! Thanks for reviewing!
Nekosune- Again, I'm so sorry that I didn't update right away! Please forgive me! But, anyway, thanks for your comment! YAY! You like my story! Thanks for reviewing!
Veronica- Yeah, you must have been so sad during Spring Break. . . Sorry about that. This story, I believe isn't that depressing, for now. Anyway! Thanks for reviewing!
chi no mayonaka- Thanks for your comment! Enjoy the chappie!
kittykat- The song is one of my favs! It makes me happy and sad at the same time, but it's still SUGOI! ahem Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
Trickersthiefgirl- Thank you! Thanks for reviewing and enjoy the chappie! (by the bye, I love Tamora Pierce's books. Is that where you got your name from?)
animbishieluver- Hehehe. . .Again, sorry for not updating fast. Please! Anyway, thanks for the review!
OKAY! THE WINNER, LUNA89, GOT TO MAKE HER OWN CHARACTER WHO WILL PROBABLY BE IN THIS FIC. UNTIL IT ENDS! Oh, and for those who don't know the name of the song, its Freckles, the theme song of Rurouni Kenshin. Anyway, on to the fic!
Clapping was heard and Mari quickly turned around to face Kurama.
"You have a wonderful voice," said Kurama.
"Thank you," she replied blushing.
"Don't you agree, Hiei?" asked the fox demon.
"Hn," said Hiei.
"That means yes in 'Hiei language,'" whispered Kurama in Mari's ear.
Mari was about to reply when someone flew in through the window right next to them. "Urgent news! Get the others and hurry to Koenma's office!" shouted our favorite grim reaper.
The trio briefly looked at each other before running off to get the gang.
Ten minutes later, Mari, Kurama, Hiei, Botan, Genkai, Yukina, Yusuke, and Kuwabara ran through the portal (which Botan summoned) and appeared in front of Koenma, who was glaring and muttering words in different languages. To everyone, it looked like he was mad at the wall, but they, well most of them, knew better.
"Sheesh Koenma! I thought Urameshi had a foul mouth! And what did the wall ever do to you?" asked Kuwabara, stupidly.
"Be quiet Kuwabara. I need you five to go to the Makai and rescue someone for me," said Koenma.
"So basically, one of your idiots got caught and they're in a dungeon waiting for us," said Yusuke.
"NOO!" shouted the 'young' prince. The others (except for Kurama and Hiei) eyes widen, never seen Koenma like this. "She is basically undefeatable. Whoever did this must be strong. . ."
"SHE!" shouted Kuwabara.
"When you say undefeatable Koenma. . ." said Kurama, curiously.
"I'd say she's as strong as you, even Yusuke," he replied.
There was silence after he said those words. As strong as Kurama and Yusuke! Whoever defeated her must be one strong demon. . .
"Um, guys?" asked Mari. "Why are we still here? Aren't we gonna rescue this person?"
The others sweat dropped, knowing that they've already wasted time talking. Koenma gave them the coordinates and a portal appeared before their eyes. They all jumped in, not knowing where in Makai they would be in once they pasted through.
Author's note: I was gonna end this here, but, this is only the 2nd page and I feel bad about not updating for so long. PLEASE FORGIVE ME! Anyway, please carry on reading. . .
THUD!
Kuwabara was the first to come through . . . and landed face-down into sand.
BAM!
And then was squished to death by Yusuke also falling face-down . . . on top of him.
Kurama, Hiei, and Mari all landed perfectly on the feet and shook their heads at the all mighty spirit detective and the buffoon.
"Get off me Urameshi!"
"Ugh! Why is your butt in my face! Move!"
"I can't! You're on me!"
As their bickering continued, the other three had their sites on the huge creep looking castle a couple feet away from them.
"Can we ditch them?" asked Mari.
Hiei looked with disgust at the two boys and did his trademark, 'hn' before he started walking toward the front doors.
Kurama smiled and replied, "They'll catch up. For now, we'll just follow Hiei."
IN THE CASTLE
Kuwabara and Yusuke eventually realized that everyone lest them and caught up with the others. For the past five minutes, weak demons had tried to ambush them and they (the demons) ended up getting slaughtered. Currently, they were inside the castle, trying to find a clue to find out where they should go.
A loud growl was heard to the left.
They had found their clue.
The gang rushed to the left corridor which led them to a huge destroyed room. In the middle of the room there were two people. One, was a male wearing black all over, though parts of his clothing were ripped. He was holding a scythe, which was covered in blood.
The other person, which was clearly the girl they were going to 'rescue', had knee length blond hair. Her outfit- that had consisted of blue jeans and a black shirt- was completely torn. There were tons of cuts and scrapes on her, and she obviously lost a lot of blood. What amazed them was that she was still standing, still not giving up, and her blue eyes showed her determination.
The guy lunged for an attack and the girl just watched calmly, not moving a single step. "Claws of Destruction!" The attack headed straight for her and the gang just watched stunned as they were helpless to stop the attack.
She swiftly dodged the attack, but as it hit the ground, the explosion knocked her off her feet, and sailing through the air.
Kurama saw her flying and caught her so she wouldn't hit the ground. He knew that she had sustained enough damage and her breathing had begun to quicken.
The evil dude finally noticed the group and started laughing. "So the all mighty Koenma sent his little team for backup?" He snorted. "Not that it'll help. Fight me and you'll see."
Kuwabara clenched his fist and shouted, "You think you can defeat me, Kuwabara, the strongest man alive? HA! You're wrong, um, evil dude that wears black!"
The others sweat dropped at Kuwabara's antics, but he was slightly true, they didn't know this guy's name.
"His name is Anku. He's a powerful demon that's been under sleep. No one knows how long he's been asleep, all we know is that he woke up and suddenly wanted to conquer all of three worlds. He's actually a pretty good fighter, so please be careful," the girl said, out of Kurama's arms and now standing.
"Thanks for the details! By the way, my name's Mari. What's yours?"
The girl blinked and then smiled. "Oops! How silly of me! My name's Allyah Tomson."
Kuwabara kneeled down and took her hands in his. "Oh pretty Allyah! I am Kazuma Kuwabara, your knight in shining honor! Please date me!"
"Hey Kuwabaka!" said Yusuke. "What about Yukina?"
Allyah looked sweetly at Kuwabara. "Do you have a girlfriend?"
"Um, yeah."
"Then why the hell are you asking me out!" Allyah punched him in the face, making him fall back.
Yusuke laughed his ass off, until Hiei spoke.
"Don't we have a fight to start?"
Anku was steaming with anger. He thought that they would begin fighting right away, but no! They had the nerve to ignore him! HIM! Forget waiting for them to attack. And with that thought, Anku rushed into battle.
Author's Note: Ugh. Again, sorry for the wait. I hope that people are still reading my fics. Um, anyway, I'm typing the next chappie already and it should be out by this week. Hoped you all enjoyed this one and PLEASE REVIEW! It makes me feel loved.
