Title: Kai's Punishment
Authoress: Darka-Chan
Summary: Kai becommes a girl and her mother is an angel. Kai becommes a girl and Tala gets to her. KAI BECOMMES A GIRL AND GETS PREGNANT BY TALA! Rating will change because of futered mild lemon
REVIEWS:
Wind ArcherYou finally get what you were waiting for from the beginning :p
M.S.K :smirk: Then tell me what I did
Max and Ray's Girl You practically called Hiromi a Bladebreaker. That's just… WRONG!
Moonlight Kitten I hope you're right, awww, why not :p
takuya I'm glad you liked it n.n
ariotlatio Yup, Tala is finally in XD
Kawaii-Chibi-Kai's Lil Devil And here is the next chapter, I hope it's not a disappointment:o
sankikya Thanks n.n
Soul's Eclipse I did! Do I get a cookie now? XD
Tiky If they ban me again, you won't be the only one mailing XD
Der Niabs Ahahaha. I guess it's time for Der to get some lessons then, ne:p
MikeyWaysgirl I guess that's because you guys and gals luff mah story:3
rina123456 I think no one can, except for Kreeya herself :p
dark-anime-slave Yup, everything is on my faithful computer, but I luff to torture my readers just a itsy bit more n.n catseyes77 I guess this is where the ficca get's intresting, ne:p
Shakena Does that mean you like:o
frosticdranzergalNow :smirk:
HeartlessDevil Thanks
IndigoTwilight He's always sexy, but hard to get won't fit in the plot
Kai Hiwatari1 With a strange mind like mine, it's not; how could she do that, but when will she do that XD
SOMEONE2003 Indeed they are :ebul grin:
Unknown Tala (A)
Jani Rieme Ahahaha. It's a good idea, but the story is already finished. But you might want to use the idea yourself.
lil' angelgrl I take it you like:o
ESpiritIce Ahahaha. I'm honoured ;)
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13) Tala
"How sweet." A voice snapped.
It was Tala's voice.
"Tala." Ray hissed.
"What's up, pussy cat" Tala snaps towards Ray. (They never liked each other)
Suddenly Tala felt something hard on his cheek what made him fall. Kreeya had hit him.
"Don't talk at him like that." she hissed before going back to Ray because she was cold.
"Who's the girl and where is Kai?" Tala asked while feeling his cheek got hot.
"Kreeya's taking Kai's place.?" Kenny muttered.
"What! You replaced Kai for a girl!" Tala yelled regretting it immediately, because Ray had lifted him op by his collar and pressed him against a wall.
"What did you say?" he hissed.
"Eh... Ray? Need back up here?" Tyson yelped.
Ray turned around and saw Kreeya trying to get loose from the grips of Tyson, Max and Kenny because she was eager to place her handprint on Tala? other cheek too.
"Eh... If I were you, I would run..." Ray whispered to Tala before running to Kreeya to.
Tala didn't moved, but then he saw a death glare he knew all to well.
"Kai." he hissed.
With this new information, he took off to The Abbey.
"Why can? I hit him..." Kreeya whined.
"Because we won't let you, that's why." Ray said.
There appeared kids, but they can't make out who they are since they're in the shadows.
"This is gonna be trouble." Max mutters.
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200 reviews...
Wow...
:sits down:
I never imagined it would be this popular...
THANK YOU TO EVERYONE!
