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Chapter 1

Watching Avatar was going great. It was fun, plus they had tons of soda to keep them up. After a while they got tired of walking up and down the stairs so they brought the whole cooler of soda up for easy access. Everyone had just gotten another soda from the cooler when an earthquake occurred.

"Ahhh!" They all screamed at once. This was very weird, earthquakes don't happen all the time in Kansas. They all grabbed all the breakable objects they could but as soon as they got all got a hold of something it stopped.

"Okay, I think its over." Said Kayla with a sigh of relief. "Good. I'm going to bed. Night Kayla, Elicia." Melanie walked over got in her sleeping bag to go to sleep. Suddenly another earthquake happened, this time stronger!

"WHY DO WE KEEP HAVING EARTHQUA.." Elicia didn't finish her sentence because a huge portal had formed over them all pulling them into the air! "Ahhh! What's going on!" Screamed Kayla over the noise the portal was making.

"I don't know! Hang on!" Elicia shouted back. Kayla grabbed onto Elicia hanging on for her life. "I can't reach I'm stuck in my sleeping bag!" yelled Melanie starting to cry. "It's okay! I just want you to know I love you guys! Never forget me!" Elicia said that right as right as they were all sucked into the portal in different directions.

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"Ahhhhhh!" Elicia and Kayla were falling through the sky very fast. Suddenly they landed on something big, soft, and furry. They looked up and passed out because of the shock of everything that happened.

"Who are these people?" asked a girl on the beast. "I don't know.." replied a boy that about the same age as her.

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Melanie wasn't having a great time either. "AHHHHHH!" she saw she was through the air towards a great METAL ship. 'Please let me land on something soft! Please' It seemed like she was falling forever until she landed on something soft. Sort of.

"Oww…What did I land on?" She looked under herself to find an unconscious boy with a red mark on his face. "Oh…My…GOD! I've landed on Prince Zuko!" "That's right. Now come with me before you defile our prince anymore!" Melanie didn't realize that guards had surrounded her.

"Huh?" Melanie didn't know what to say. "Get up now!" Melanie didn't get. She just sat on the poor guy in shock about what's going on.

"That's it. I didn't want to do this." The man said. He walked over to Melanie and roughly grabbed her, pulled her, and flung her over his shoulder. "Ow! That hurt! Where are you taking me?" The guard didn't respond.

"I said, WHERE ARE YOU TAKING ME!" Again the guard did not respond so she started to wriggle around to get free. It was useless; he just tightened his hold on her.

Eventually she quit struggling. The guard finally stopped at a dirty jail cell with a pile of straw in corner for a bed she suspected. "You will stay here until Prince Zuko wakes up. Got that?" Melanie nodded her head. "Good. You can have this back." He handed her her sleeping bag. 'Must have figured out it wasn't a weapon. Stupid people.' "Thank you." Melanie replied trying to smile. The guard smiled ever so slightly then left.

'Oh well. I guess I should just go to sleep.' Melanie looked at her watch to see that it was almost one in the morning. 'Good night guys. Wherever you are.' With that she curled up in her sleeping bag and went to sleep.

Thanks for reading this! It was one page longer. I also hope it was easier to read!

Thanks,

Mickey

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