Declaimer: I own nothing blah blah blah. Comas are my friends.

This is my 2nd fic, ever. It's about yaoi, oh what shock. I'm hopping this'll be better than the stuff your use to cause in all honesty some of these stories are absolute crap. I appreciate the effort but some people should just not be aloud to write. Like if you speak English and you can't spell "himself" correctly in English, you have no business writing! Yeah, I just had ta say that. Wait what am I talking about! I can't spell! That's not really what I mean though, what I want to do is break away from the normal "fic" stereotype. Ya know:

Fangirl #1" Hey this would make a cute idea!"

Fangirl #2 "Yeah then the boys can make out at!"

Creepy evil laugh.

I'm trying to make an original story that can stand on it's own that just happens to have unoriginal characters! Although I guess everyone tries to do that. K, feel better now. Enjoy the story. EDIT:The new & improved prologue! ENJOYZS!


This story begins with Harry and Draco in an empty classroom, both kneeling on the floor. Draco has made a bold move and just kissed Harry. Harry does not push away but does not progress; he just lets Draco kiss him. Slowly, ever so slowly, Draco pulls his lips away. Harry's face is flushed and he's panting softly. Draco is also panting and he can tell by the heat of his own face that he is blushing as well. After what seems like a very long silence, except for the panting, Draco finally speaks. He says the words that he has wanted to say for so long, but for fear of the consequences has instead ignored and suppressed them. Telling himself that it was just his hormones and that he'd be betraying his family in so many ways if he even thought about putting those thoughts in to action. (Wait does that even make sense?) But he had thought about it, oh so much, and no longer could he simply ignore or resist the emotions, or he would simply, overflow. So finally the words that had been in the back of his head for oh so very long finally came to surface.

"Ii-I love you. I love you so, so much. I tried not to but I couldn't a-and I just couldn't stop thinking about you a-and and…." Tears started to swell in his eyes. He quickly turned his head away and tried to hold them back but it's pretty much a futile effort. The next thing he says through sobs, "Y-you must be so disgusted with me. I'm sorry, I'm so sorry, please just-" he is surprised to feel a hand on his face. It gently forces him to face its owner who is smiling, gently. Harry takes his thumb and wipes away a few of the tears then brings Draco's head forwards and kisses the rest away.

"I, have loved you, from the moment I first saw your beautiful face. But I have always wondered why you were so cold, why you where so isolated. All I have ever wanted is to be close to you, to comfort you, care for you, love you, but until now you have never given me the chance. So please, don't be sorry. You've absolutely no reason to be because I couldn't be happier." Draco is crying again, but this time they're tears of joy. He falls into Harry's arms and kisses him again. Oh, he had wanted for so long to taste those lips. His beautiful, beautiful lips. He breaks away and buries his face in Harries robes.

"Thank you," he sobs, "thank you so much." They stay like this for awhile then Harry gently lifts his head and kisses him. Draco opens his mouth a little and slides his toung across Harries soft lips. He in return opens his mouth and slides his tongue into his willing counterpart. The two tongues become entangled almost instantly and start to caress each other. Normally this is where the fight for dominance would come in but the boys were not concerned with who would be the dominant one. They were just happy that they could finally be together. They'd been hiding for so long for fear of broken-hearts and if not that, then the public eye. Society would simply not accept their relationship. (Society's 3!1! Burn it down!) Two boys, who had for many years acted like they'd hated each other no less, suddenly falling in love.

Well, that would not be entirely true actually, because if you've been paying any attention at all (to this story that is) you will have realized that these two have been secretly in love for years. In short, if you did not get it up until me bluntly explaining it, you are a complete idiot and must get yourself to the nearest mental hospital immediately. That last part made no sense what so ever did it? Oh well whom cares! Just tell them you know Hanna and they'll give you the best room in the house and all the good drugs. Back to the point, the public would simply not accept them blah blah blah.

Especially at this point in time with the rise of the "Dark Lord" and all. Some may say a follower of Voldemort had put a curse on them to make Harry less willing to fight and leave his lover's side, or that Draco was tricking Harry and planned to bring him to the Dark lord as to get on his good side. Or even that Lucius had forced Draco into the relationship in order to trick Potter so that he may eventually be kidnapped and taken to mister evil snake dude yada yada, and so the rumors would go on & on. But for fact, the two boys were truly in love. Now that they were together all worry seemed to vanish like, magic, well at least for Harry anyway. There was still one worry at the back of Draco's mind, his father. If his father were to find out, oh dear winged beings of good, evil, and some other various places, all hell and then some would surely break lose! First he'd never be aloud to see Harry again then be taken out of Hogwarts, not neasicarily in that order though. And after that shiver Oy! He couldn't even bare to comprehend the tortuous paroles that would await him after leaving Harry's side! (And it's a darn good side to!) He quickly put such painful thoughts out of his head and focused on what was really important, him and Harry, together at last. The two boys became more and more intimate. Harry slowly moved his hands lower and Draco, without knowing it, had gotten his own hands past Harry's robes and shirt and was now hand to skin with Harry's heaving chest. Little did they know as they engrossed themselves in their forbidden-love-feast, (Fest? Feast? Fest?) that someone had been watching from the very begging. Someone who would change there lives forever.

" ""Hehe Exactly"" as mother and master described," giggled a girl who was watching the two boys through just the slightest crack in the door.

"Only 3 weeks of life and I already have an important job, and with an important job comes an important place. Translation: I'M GONNA BE A POSTER GIRL! WOOT! Oh," she quickly threw an abnormally white hand over her mouth, "Crap, gotta be quite" she whispered to herself. "Oh, but how lucky am I for most have to wait hundreds upon thousands of eons just for the slightest glimmer of a chance such as this. And it involves yaoi! ""SQUEEL""! " The girl squealed while jumping up and down and rubbing her fist together in a very excited manner. "Oh my! I best stop being such a fangirl and do what I came hence forth to do." She pulled a camera from her black tailed coat and set to her business. "Wow. I didn't know boys could bend like that. I didn't know the human body could bend like that. Ou! ""Turns camera to side"" Ah! ""Turns head to side"" Oooh! ""Stands on her head while holding camera"" "HacececetaTah!" (Is anyone else surprised by the fact that no one's heard her yet? I sure am and I'm writing this bloody story. Well, it's not bloody yet, but trust me, it's a com'en.) Now then, back to the boyz!

Harder, were their bodies pressed against each other, hotter their breath became, faster their hands searched each other's bodies. But suddenly, to Draco's (and all the yaoi fangirls) great dismay Harry pushed away.

"What is it? Did I do something wrong? Was I to rough? Was it to much at once?" His voice was filled with worry and was very shaky when he spoke. Harry just smiled and put a hand on the boy's cheek.

"No, it wasn't to much, it was not enough." Slowly, ever so slowly Harry began to lie down, all the time holding Draco's face, until Draco was right over top of him.

"Oooo! This is get'en gooood!" Yup, it's that weird girl outside the door again. (Really, why hasn't anyone heard her yet?) Draco was a little surprised that Harry had done this to say the least. He hadn't expected things to go this quickly. Actually he hadn't expected things to go this well. He was expecting a very harsh turn down, maybe getting beat to a bloody pulp, and possibly having his shoes stolen (they are nice shoes, wouldn't you agree?) Not that he minded the way things were going mind you, he was just very nervous and a tad bit unprepared, to put it lightly.

"A-are you sure you want this, now? You don't think we'll ruin it if we rush." Harry smiled sweetly at him, a smile filled with love, joy, and sincerity.

"We've been waiting so long, if we wait much longer we'll fossilize." (Kudos if you know where I stole this line from)

He slid one hand under Harry's head and the other around his waist. Harry put his own arms around Draco's waist and held him close. They just stayed like this for what seemed like hours then, Draco made the first move. Once again warm lips meet, arms embraced, bodies pressed together tightly! All was wonderful, all was right, all was paradise! But sometimes, paradise is temporary.


Well wha'd ya think? bounce bounce bounce I hope everyone liked it, ch2 in progress. Please R&R, so I don't feel alone. Feel free to ask any questions as well. I'm very knew so any suggestions or pointers would be very appreciated. Also feel free to point out spelling mistakes.

Person: Spell "APPLE"

Me: A-F-E-L "APPLE"

Person: Do you know what you're spelling?

ME: Yup, I can even use it in a sentence. Afel outta bed this morning.

Ch1/2 up in a couple weeks or you can throw stuff at me.