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Now everyone here comes the next chapter to Into the world of Tortal

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Chapter two

To the city and the castle

Alanna gazed at the young girl in surprise. This girl wanted to be a knight like her and Keladry. In the years that had passed she had taken a special interest in the Lady Knight. But now she had another girl from possibly a different world that wanted to be a knight! All she could do then was smile happily. Maybe she could actually have her as a squire. Imagine how that would feel to her. She smiled slightly and said, "I will take you to the palace and to Corus. I'll try and get you into the page program. By the way, yes I am a knight and I go by Alanna. May I have your name?"

Larissa's mouth dropped. She had been right about this purple eyed woman. It was Alanna the Lioness!!! She had been right and now she was taking special interest in her about her knight training. She could forget about her family at home. She could make a whole new chapter of her life.

Larissa quickly shut her mouth and said, "My name is Larissa." She didn't know of any way of saying where she was from. After all the people here probably didn't know anything about Virginia or the United States. They probably have never heard of England or America. She shrugged it off.

Alanna smiled at the girl. "Well come on. I'll take you to the palace and we will go talk to Jonathan about making you a knight."

Larissa was shocked. She would meet the famous king that she had read about in the books she loved most. She looked down at her legs and smiled. She would learn how to use a sword and would learn how to ride. She would do everything that anybody could do now.

Larissa smiled as she followed Lady Alanna to face Alanna's beautiful horse that was son to Moonlight. She stared at the horse in awe and followed Alanna as she mounted the horse. She waited slightly wondering if she should get on behind her. She didn't know if Alanna would want to ride with her riding behind her. She was slightly shocked when Alanna offered Larissa her hand. She smiled and took it gratefully. She was swung up onto the horse and shocked when she immediately knew to hang on.

The company that Alanna was riding with was one of her own. She brought a hand up and soon the company and her were off. They road for an hour gazing at the scenery around them. The sites just made Larissa gape in shock. She had never expected to see such beauty out of this world.

Soon the company, Alanna, and Larissa came to Corus. Larissa looked around as the road towards the castle. Many sites and sounds met her eyes and ears. She saw venders and thieves and merchants. She saw many things such as people selling swords and she knew when she went into training to be a knight that she would need one. She would be older than Neal when he started training. She smiled to herself as that thought went through her mind. She hadn't even thought about that. She wondered if she would meet Keladry of Mendelin. She had always loved those books as she gazed up towards the Castle.

The castle was the site she loved the most. The site that the company, Alanna, and her were getting closer to. Soon Alanna, Larissa, and the others came up to the castle to be met by Stefan. He smiled up at Alanna in welcome and looked towards Larissa as she jumped off. She had been getting stares the whole time through the capital. She hadn't even thought about the clothes she had been wearing. She didn't even think that anybody would mind about her clothes. She jumped off the horse and looked to Alanna.

Alanna jumped off the horse to look at Stefan. "George is fine and told me to tell you hello Stefan."

Stefan nodded and took Alanna's horse as Larissa and Alanna headed up towards the castle. The went up corridors and through halls until they came to a room that had a hand carved door. The designs on the door made Larissa stared in awe. She hadn't thought about anything except how everything looked. She followed Alanna as she entered the room.

Sitting behind a desk in the middle of the room was no other than King Jonathan of Conte`. He looked up to meet Alanna's eyes and smiled at her in welcome. He then looked to Larissa and his eyes widened when he saw her clothes.

Larissa just stared at the king. He was more handsome than she could imagine. He was probably the most handsome man she would ever meet. She just stared in awe. She was awestruck by what she saw.

The king coughed slightly and Larissa shook her head and bowed clumsily. She came back up to look at the king.

Alanna looked to Jonathan and said, "Your majesty. This is Larissa. I found her in the woods and she wishes to become a knight of the kingdom."

Jonathan nodded slightly. "Keladry will be happy to know another girl will be coming a knight." He smiled at Larissa.

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