C h i b i O r o c h i m a r u-yep here it is!
Nikkler-:) I'm glad....yeah everyone likes him...i was planning a KibaNaru but nah...too many of them lol. But of course this would be a pretty intresting fic, it would never come out the way many ppl might think it should :)
afk- Alright! No worries....with this many supportors I'll do my best! :) thankz
Kei=Hao=Asakura- lol, same here, but who cares!? i don't! Thankz I'll keep up! :)
lemmings12- Lol, I know, I thought it'll make the plot intreasting, so watcha think of it?
melodia04- yep, just under a different name :), it was banned than i did it again but
following the rules lol
RekiaReium- alritie! here's the next chappie for you!
feathergurl- lol! oh yeah!
Queen of Anime-:3 thankz
The Sample
Naruto got off the bus and walked for awhile, until he reached a giant gate with a symbol that's similar to Six Pack (A volleyball team or the sharigan). He press the button on the speaker, it made a buzzing sound and a voice came. It was low and sharky (?)
"Who's there?" it snapped
"Um..I'm looking for Uchina Sasuke."
"Do you have a appointment with him?" the voice said again.
"Yeah..."
"Oh...wait...Itachi!!!" there was a minute or so of silent when another man came to the phone and said, "Come in."
As the giant gate slowly open by itself, Naruto was greeted by a man similar to Sasuke but with long hair tied back low. With him was another man, he was tall and muscalur, with a face looking like a shark.
"Welcome to our humble home Naruto-chan. Sasuke is waiting for you upstairs. We'll be going now." The Sasuke-clone said and walked away to his car with the big man. When Naruto turn his head, he was gone. Naruto quietly walked inside the house, no it wasn't a house, it was a giga house! It's massive! Naruto walked up the giant spiral staircase and looked down the hallway to find at least 5 beadrooms on each side.
"So you came..." A voice that broke the silence of the house. Naruto jump at the sudden sound and to find it was Sasuke.
"Umm....Yea." Naruto said in a quiet voice.
Sasuke walk closer to him, Naruto back up
Sasuke walk closer to him, Naruto back up
Sasuke walk closer to him, Naruto back up
Tired of this routine, Sasuke slam his hand above Naruto and he was pushed and pinned against one of the door. He could feel the hot breath and sweet scent of this onyx eye boy. Sasuke leaned foward towards Naruto's ear and whisper, "I'll give you a sample of what you give me, and recieving it back."
His moist breath sent shiver down Naruto's back, his face explode into a red shade as Sasuke slip his hand down his waist and slowly moved back towards the door knob and opened it. He took Naruto's hand and guided him to the giant bed-room. Sasuke pushed the confuse and oh-so innocent boy down onto the bed. He than started to climb on top of him, splitting his leg slighty apart to put his leg in between him. Sasuke than push him all the way down till he was flat on the bed, Naruto's breath was getting raggy, and was panting in a way. Sasuke lean down towards his mouth and gave Naruto his very first kiss.
Naruto was clumsy at it, but being with a pro-kisser, at least it felt good to him. He felt Sasuke's hands roam his tiny body and without Naruto noticing, he was already half nake.
"Sas....SASUKE!! What the hell are you doing?" Naruto said and push him away and try to cover his lower part, which expose his little brother1.
"Now, now, like I said, this is only a sample, I won't do anything too extreme don't worry." Sasuke said gently and pushed him down. Naruto was whimpering by the time he slip the blanket off but Sasuke silent him with a passion kiss that left Naruto almost breathless but during the kiss, Sasuke have silently reach southward and a bit lower....
"Ah..." Naruto moaned into his mouth.
Sasuke could feel himself getting hard, but he couldn't take it out on his little sex kitten. He contiune to rub the blonde lightly, giving him the most torturing and pleasure-ful feeling. Sasuke lifted himself up a little and away from the kiss to look at the most beautiful thing in the world.
There right in front of him was the world's most beautiful person you could find. Locks of blonde hair, soak with sweat and a tiny body writhing underneath him. Yes, this was the perfect person.
Sasuke squeeze a bit harder now around the cock that belong to his sex kitten. This made Naruto moan even louder and now begging for more.
"Ah...Sas..Sasuke....faster.....harder......please." Naruto was begging with a lustful voice wanting more of Sasuke.
A smirk apperer on the pale-boy's face.
"Now, now, there's no need to rush....the best part has yet to come." Sasuke took him hand away from Naruto which to caused Naruto to look down to find Sasuke's head going lower and lower....
"AH!..." This time it wasn't a moan but a shudder with a loud pleasureful reply. Sasuke's hot mouth had found a new destination, and toying with it.
He bob his head in a slow motion, but it was a long and pleasureful motion. Making Naruto beg like never.
"Sas...Sasuke...Please more..."
Another smirk.
Sasuke had to hold on to Naruto's inner thigh to stop him from pushing into him. After a while, Sasuke thought it was a long enough torture since Naruto's yells was now hoarse whispers and gave him a fast, tight blowjob.
"Sas...AHHH...Sasuke...." Naruto release into Sasuke's mouth and Sasuke lick the cock almost clean of Naruto's cum, which by the way somehow taste like ramen but like Naruto at the same time.
Naruto relax and Sasuke climb up to him and gave him another kiss but lighter and more sweeter than before.
"Now that was just the sample, stay till tomorrow and I'll give you the product." Sasuke whisper into his little sex kitten.
1= chinese meaning of the cock....lol ;3
How is it??
good?
bad?
ok?
Review will be nice....the more the faster I'll upload the next chapter. :) and the juicy part with a twist evil eh?
Thanks for all those wonderful reviews!
And from the aff.net reviews, i wanna clear some stuff here so here's a sneak preview to the next chappie
The Product: Result = Failure
Naruto went to a wonderful slumber right after he got the 'sample' and leaving a certain boy lusting for him.
'Damn, damn, damn....What will I do now?" he asked himself. He looked at the tired kitten and shook him a little and a bit harder, until he was close to falling off the bed.
'Heavy sleeper...' Sasuke thought and sat against the headboard. He unzip his pant which quickly release his cock to fresh air and slowly started to rub it. He looked at the golden sex kitten and thought of all the little games he could play with him tomorrow....
'No..." he panted into his thought
'"Tonight."
By the time Naruto woke up it was close to 9 and it was dark outside. He scan the unfamiliar room and remenber where he is and what happen. As he reply his memory, his face turn red. Really red.
"What's wrong? Did you catch a cold?" he suddenly felt a cool hand on his forehead
"AH! YOU!!" Naruto pointed a accusing finger at Sasuke was just sits there innocently, staring at him.
"What about me?" he asked, using the same smirk he did back than, he starts to come closer to Naruto. Naruto could feel his eyelids get heavy. Sasuke gets closer to his mouth......closer.....
SMACK! "PERV! GET AWAY FROM ME! I KNEW THAT YOU WERE USING ME AS A TOY!" Naruto quickly pulled his pants on and shirt, running at the sametime, the talents that God gives people.
"NARUTO! WAIT! LISTEN!" Before Sasuke could catch up, Naruto with another of his God given gifts was already gone out and running into the dark night.
Naruto didn't know how long he was running for, all he knew was he got to get away from that Sasuke. When he was running across the street in the dark, a car almost hit him!
"AHH!"
The driver step on the brake and the car screech and stop a inch in front of the fighten boy. A man came out with the driver, Naruto was on the ground by the time they came out from the tireness of running for a while.
"Neji?!"
Nikkler-:) I'm glad....yeah everyone likes him...i was planning a KibaNaru but nah...too many of them lol. But of course this would be a pretty intresting fic, it would never come out the way many ppl might think it should :)
afk- Alright! No worries....with this many supportors I'll do my best! :) thankz
Kei=Hao=Asakura- lol, same here, but who cares!? i don't! Thankz I'll keep up! :)
lemmings12- Lol, I know, I thought it'll make the plot intreasting, so watcha think of it?
melodia04- yep, just under a different name :), it was banned than i did it again but
following the rules lol
RekiaReium- alritie! here's the next chappie for you!
feathergurl- lol! oh yeah!
Queen of Anime-:3 thankz
The Sample
Naruto got off the bus and walked for awhile, until he reached a giant gate with a symbol that's similar to Six Pack (A volleyball team or the sharigan). He press the button on the speaker, it made a buzzing sound and a voice came. It was low and sharky (?)
"Who's there?" it snapped
"Um..I'm looking for Uchina Sasuke."
"Do you have a appointment with him?" the voice said again.
"Yeah..."
"Oh...wait...Itachi!!!" there was a minute or so of silent when another man came to the phone and said, "Come in."
As the giant gate slowly open by itself, Naruto was greeted by a man similar to Sasuke but with long hair tied back low. With him was another man, he was tall and muscalur, with a face looking like a shark.
"Welcome to our humble home Naruto-chan. Sasuke is waiting for you upstairs. We'll be going now." The Sasuke-clone said and walked away to his car with the big man. When Naruto turn his head, he was gone. Naruto quietly walked inside the house, no it wasn't a house, it was a giga house! It's massive! Naruto walked up the giant spiral staircase and looked down the hallway to find at least 5 beadrooms on each side.
"So you came..." A voice that broke the silence of the house. Naruto jump at the sudden sound and to find it was Sasuke.
"Umm....Yea." Naruto said in a quiet voice.
Sasuke walk closer to him, Naruto back up
Sasuke walk closer to him, Naruto back up
Sasuke walk closer to him, Naruto back up
Tired of this routine, Sasuke slam his hand above Naruto and he was pushed and pinned against one of the door. He could feel the hot breath and sweet scent of this onyx eye boy. Sasuke leaned foward towards Naruto's ear and whisper, "I'll give you a sample of what you give me, and recieving it back."
His moist breath sent shiver down Naruto's back, his face explode into a red shade as Sasuke slip his hand down his waist and slowly moved back towards the door knob and opened it. He took Naruto's hand and guided him to the giant bed-room. Sasuke pushed the confuse and oh-so innocent boy down onto the bed. He than started to climb on top of him, splitting his leg slighty apart to put his leg in between him. Sasuke than push him all the way down till he was flat on the bed, Naruto's breath was getting raggy, and was panting in a way. Sasuke lean down towards his mouth and gave Naruto his very first kiss.
Naruto was clumsy at it, but being with a pro-kisser, at least it felt good to him. He felt Sasuke's hands roam his tiny body and without Naruto noticing, he was already half nake.
"Sas....SASUKE!! What the hell are you doing?" Naruto said and push him away and try to cover his lower part, which expose his little brother1.
"Now, now, like I said, this is only a sample, I won't do anything too extreme don't worry." Sasuke said gently and pushed him down. Naruto was whimpering by the time he slip the blanket off but Sasuke silent him with a passion kiss that left Naruto almost breathless but during the kiss, Sasuke have silently reach southward and a bit lower....
"Ah..." Naruto moaned into his mouth.
Sasuke could feel himself getting hard, but he couldn't take it out on his little sex kitten. He contiune to rub the blonde lightly, giving him the most torturing and pleasure-ful feeling. Sasuke lifted himself up a little and away from the kiss to look at the most beautiful thing in the world.
There right in front of him was the world's most beautiful person you could find. Locks of blonde hair, soak with sweat and a tiny body writhing underneath him. Yes, this was the perfect person.
Sasuke squeeze a bit harder now around the cock that belong to his sex kitten. This made Naruto moan even louder and now begging for more.
"Ah...Sas..Sasuke....faster.....harder......please." Naruto was begging with a lustful voice wanting more of Sasuke.
A smirk apperer on the pale-boy's face.
"Now, now, there's no need to rush....the best part has yet to come." Sasuke took him hand away from Naruto which to caused Naruto to look down to find Sasuke's head going lower and lower....
"AH!..." This time it wasn't a moan but a shudder with a loud pleasureful reply. Sasuke's hot mouth had found a new destination, and toying with it.
He bob his head in a slow motion, but it was a long and pleasureful motion. Making Naruto beg like never.
"Sas...Sasuke...Please more..."
Another smirk.
Sasuke had to hold on to Naruto's inner thigh to stop him from pushing into him. After a while, Sasuke thought it was a long enough torture since Naruto's yells was now hoarse whispers and gave him a fast, tight blowjob.
"Sas...AHHH...Sasuke...." Naruto release into Sasuke's mouth and Sasuke lick the cock almost clean of Naruto's cum, which by the way somehow taste like ramen but like Naruto at the same time.
Naruto relax and Sasuke climb up to him and gave him another kiss but lighter and more sweeter than before.
"Now that was just the sample, stay till tomorrow and I'll give you the product." Sasuke whisper into his little sex kitten.
1= chinese meaning of the cock....lol ;3
How is it??
good?
bad?
ok?
Review will be nice....the more the faster I'll upload the next chapter. :) and the juicy part with a twist evil eh?
Thanks for all those wonderful reviews!
And from the aff.net reviews, i wanna clear some stuff here so here's a sneak preview to the next chappie
The Product: Result = Failure
Naruto went to a wonderful slumber right after he got the 'sample' and leaving a certain boy lusting for him.
'Damn, damn, damn....What will I do now?" he asked himself. He looked at the tired kitten and shook him a little and a bit harder, until he was close to falling off the bed.
'Heavy sleeper...' Sasuke thought and sat against the headboard. He unzip his pant which quickly release his cock to fresh air and slowly started to rub it. He looked at the golden sex kitten and thought of all the little games he could play with him tomorrow....
'No..." he panted into his thought
'"Tonight."
By the time Naruto woke up it was close to 9 and it was dark outside. He scan the unfamiliar room and remenber where he is and what happen. As he reply his memory, his face turn red. Really red.
"What's wrong? Did you catch a cold?" he suddenly felt a cool hand on his forehead
"AH! YOU!!" Naruto pointed a accusing finger at Sasuke was just sits there innocently, staring at him.
"What about me?" he asked, using the same smirk he did back than, he starts to come closer to Naruto. Naruto could feel his eyelids get heavy. Sasuke gets closer to his mouth......closer.....
SMACK! "PERV! GET AWAY FROM ME! I KNEW THAT YOU WERE USING ME AS A TOY!" Naruto quickly pulled his pants on and shirt, running at the sametime, the talents that God gives people.
"NARUTO! WAIT! LISTEN!" Before Sasuke could catch up, Naruto with another of his God given gifts was already gone out and running into the dark night.
Naruto didn't know how long he was running for, all he knew was he got to get away from that Sasuke. When he was running across the street in the dark, a car almost hit him!
"AHH!"
The driver step on the brake and the car screech and stop a inch in front of the fighten boy. A man came out with the driver, Naruto was on the ground by the time they came out from the tireness of running for a while.
"Neji?!"