I was not kidding that I was waiting for you guys. I had the chapter ready and I just checked my e-mails. I only got 15 reviews, but I'm in a really good mood because I just got DDR and made 5 five new records! Yeah me! Any who the language. . . . .
"Siis muhab alati; Ka linnupesi. Ka kaitske pesi nii, et kajaks roomus linnu huud!" Is in Estonian. For those who don't know Estonian is a language from Estonia. Its translation is "While streams still ripple on; we all are one. We can not let them die, move quickly now before they're gone!" So now on with the story.
"Speaking"
Thinking
Action
This wasn't right. None of it was right. Everything had gone wrong. Very wrong. And it's all my fault. My stupid plan to be an angel. My stupid nightly 'walks.' It would eventually end up this way. The things that I knew were coming.
The rain fall was starting to lighten up. "There's only one way to run. Up." Kagome looked back at her small wings. "I've got to get to a cloud. That's what angels are supposed to do. But I doubt if these wings will get me that far up." It twitched instinctively. "Here goes everything."
It was easy flying to the top's of the trees, but that was usually Kagome's limit. Once she was even an inch higher than her wings wanted, the gravity hit like a smack in the face. It felt like weights were being tied to her wings, pounds being added on with each centimeter she went. Her eyes began to water. The air was misty and foggy from the rain pour that had now stopped. "I knew that wouldn't last long," she sighed looking back down.
Much to her surprise she could not see the ground. Everything was fog. Thank goodness. She slowed her pace and soon made it up to the white cloud.
She left out a sigh of relief once she plopped down on the softness of the cloud. It's like one big cotton ball. She wiped the sweat from her forehead with the back of her hand. Kagome's glow had returned once she had reached the cloud, there was no use hiding it anymore. Her eye lids soon began to seem very heavy and she dozed off.
"Kagome!" Inuyasha called again. It's no use. Can she hear me or is she choosing not to answer? "Kagome!" He paused to listen for a moment. "KAGOME!" No response. Ears dropped, faith crushed he walked deeper into the forest.
Kagome's eyes flickered open to notice she was not alone. "Well if it isn't Kagome Higurashi," said an unfamiliar voice. "Who's that?" she mumbled and sat up. "My name is Mura, and from now on I'm the one who's talking. Got it?" Kagome rubbed the sleep out from her eyes and nodded yes. "Good. Well, for starters I can't believe those puny wings got you this far." "It wasn't easy," said Kagome. "I'm talking," snapped Mura. Kagome looked up at her.
Mura had brown hair that only came down to her chin. Her gown came past her ankles and her wings had to be at least four or five feet long each. Her glow was so bright, that if Kagome had not been an angel, she would have been blinded. Obviously Mura had been an angel for a very long time. And a very good one at that.
"You have broken a rule," she said. "I know, I was seen. I'm really really sorry," Kagome pleaded. "Well sometimes sorry isn't good enough and it isn't good enough now. We can do a number of things. I can give you a new guardian angel." "But that would put me back into the problem I was in before," said Kagome. "Or," Mura continued, "I can take away your soul." "My soul!" Kagome shrieked. "Why on earth would you do that!" "I can't let a human wonder the earth without any protection, so if you're not going to have an angel then you must not return. It is a simple process." Mura smirked.
"This is insane. Only one person saw me. One! You want to kill me because one person saw a glimpse of me!" "You could get another guardian angel," suggested Mura. "No I can travel threw time, guardian angels don't work with me," complained Kagome. Kagome looked around in annoyance. She had been asleep longer than she thought. It was already morning. "Then I'm just gonna have to take your soul." Kagome whimpered. "There's got to be another way." "Stop traveling threw time," said Mura, while sitting down.
"No!" cried Kagome. "What if," Kagome thought. "What if I become a guardian angel." Mura laughed. "You? News flash. We don't let just any body become a guardian angel. Besides everyone on earth already has one." Kagome snorted. "What about a hanyou?" "A hanyou?" Mura asked. She thought about it for a moment. "Well it wouldn't take much to be a guardian angel of a hanyou," she thought aloud. Kagome kept quiet, but the last statement seemed very rude, but she was silent all the same. Don't ruin your chance just over a silly little sentence.
"No," Mura said simply. "What! Why not?" Mura smiled. "Because, I just remembered hanyous don't get guardian angels." "Can't you just tell everyone that he's not a hanyou. They would believe you. I know they would!" Mura grinned. "Of course they would believe me. I could say that pigs fly and they would believe it. Do you know how long I've been an angel. 5,000 years! No one can compare to that. But I will not say it because there is no benefit to me."
Kagome could not believe she was talking to an angel. How could she be an angel? She was too self centered to be an angel. Angels are kind hearted and peaceful, not selfish and think that they are God's greatest gift. "What if I do something for you in return?" She thought about it for a moment. Mura scowled. Time passed and not a sound was heard. Not even the birds were singing.
"Deal."
Oooo what will Kagome have to do! Ha, well I don't know yet. So if you have any good ideas, tell me. I really want you guys to review because it tells me if you like it, or what I am doing wrong. Most of the time it just makes me write the next chapter better. I know 16 reviews is hard for you (though I have no idea why) so this time I only want 10. If you don't review I'll wait to post the chapter, which doesn't bother me because now I'd rather work on my DDR skills
