Ok sorry all this isnt a chapter. I just a got an anonymous review from someone and I had to address it. Guest said: this is good writing, but very very similar to another popular story. I'd be careful to not edge on the point of copying another story plot but just rewording chapters. Make it your own, I know you can do great :).'

so the review wasnt bad per say but I need you all to know right now that im not doing that, my story is coming from my head, from my own experiences, im basing Jackie on jack of course but also myself. Ive read many a fanfictions which pitch is like a dad to jack, and how since manny and mother nature gave jack life, they are his parents and mother natures real dad is pitch that would make pitch jacks grandfather. Its not an uncommon thing to be abused by those you trust, I myself have lived this, only difference is im writing jackie a happy ending something I didnt get. I basically took my life and jack frosts life and mashed it together. For example jackie was mistaken as a boy, I switched it up I was never mistaken for a man but I every birthday I was looked at in shock that I was still alive because I am ADHD and always end up accidentally hurting myself, now since jack is dead I cant do that so I just did something that would hurt just as much. I was abused sexually by my father and others I should have been able to trust, so jackie was by pitch who in all accounts is her granddad. If my story is like anyone elses im sorry but this is all coming off the top of my head mixing my own experiences in with fiction. Im dealing with a lot now including trying to find my own happy ending after the man I loved for 5 years just left me and took my best friend (same person) with him. To be truthful I dont know If I can write jackie a happy ending since I just lost mine but im going to try

so I will say this one more time im sorry if my story is like anyone elses, its not my goal to rip off someone elses hard work. If you all feel that way I will stop and just not finish the story I dont want to upset anyone thank you for you time

~Kayla~ (thats my name lol sorry I havent told you before)