This is a report to you Whitewolf7795… or what ever your name is… if you want me to update… I will.
Questions for you:
For what reason are you reporting me? Did I not follow the rules because the last time I checked… I did.
Why did you call me violent? Because I am not violent… just because I wrote that story where somebody gets shot… doesn't mean I'm violent.
I know I forgot to put no flames… but that my friend was unnecessary. If you didn't like it… then why did you send that to me? To get on my nerves? Well if you did… then you are the violent person.
And for a finale… you are the only one to send me that profanity. Thank you for your time… second chapter… which will suck.
And for further reading… NO FLAMES!
Chapter 2: Coping
Kori looked at his body. Her own body shaking. If only she was fast enough… if only. Tears spilled from her eyes. And she looked back up to Rachel, Richard, and Victor.
"Why!" she screamed at them. "Why did you do this to him?" Tears poured faster from her eyes.
Richard glared at her from under his glasses. "I didn't like him." Victor answered.
"Why? Why didn't you like him?"
"He was a poser," Rachel answered and walked over to Kori walking around her like a hawk. "He didn't deserve to live!"
"Every… everyone deserves to live…"
"Not him." Richard followed Rachel over to Kori.
"But… he was… he was my best friend… my… my only friend."
"Find a new one," Victor said and walked over to her as well.
Her body shook with anger and tears ceased from falling from her eyes. "NO!" Kori lunged at Victor and knocked him down pinning him to the ground. "NO! NO! NO, no!" She stopped trying to hold him down and cried, screaming 'no' over and over again.
Victor got up and straightened out his shirt.
"C'mon… let's go." Rachel, Richard, and Victor walked back to the party leaving Kori with Garfield's lifeless body.
"My… my best friend… gone… gone!"
End
I told you it would suck. And again…
NO FLAMES!
Thank you and, this was maybe a pointless story, but you have no right to say those things about me.
-Emerald-Mask