Dynasty Hearts
Hi it has been a long time sorry for the delay and thank you veeeeeery much for your support too! Now seeing that too many fans are hooked I made a double long release chp.3 + 4 so when you review can you please put in a suggestion for the new preview?
THX
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Chapter 3: Goofy appointed
Donald now is on his way with an extra- Fat man to Wei HQ……..
Donald was very hungry… thirsty…. And Tired too….. So a conversation started between them:
Donald: huff… huff… I can't go on any longer… too tired….
Xu zhu was happy chewing off a drumstick happily
Xu Zhu: munch want some? I just killed about a hundred chickens so I have a lot!
Donald: Thanks…. Munch ……. 0.o you killed whereat (Spits out all of it)
Xu Zhu: 100 chickens
Donald: omg!
Xu Zhu: let's take a carriage to get to Lou yang
Xu Zhu took out his weapon (a large club that has a huge ball on its end) and smacked it on the ground instantly came a carriage which had 2 men dragging it
Man 1: hello may we be of any service to you?
Xu Zhu: yup take us to Lou yang please…
Man 2: that would cost 7000 munny because its 100 miles from here
Donald: ok I have 4578 munny
Xu Zhu: I got about 3000…..
Man 1: wonderful now half now and half when we get there…
Man 2: brother… it is a long way we can't drag it until Lou yang….
Man 1: ok we will take you till changan for 3000 M (A/N: ill start referring to munny as M)
Xu Zhu: ok I pay 1500 and you pay 1500 ok Donald?
Donald: fine….
They paid off the fee and boarded the carriage….
Meanwhile in shu territory…..
Some men captured a weird looking creature and put it in a cage when they were at the doorstep of liu bei's house the weird black creature broke the cage and attacked everyone in sight killing many innocent women & children alike Guan Yu appeared from the ruins and started fighting the weird creature but he couldn't affect it…..
The creature disappeared and then re-appeared in greater numbers Guan Yu couldn't hold them off too long and then zhang fei jumped in saving his sworn brother they kept fighting until liu bei appeared with a bunch of men they started fighting the heartless creatures but they would appear again no matter what they did……
But suddenly a figure came rushing and smacking every heartless out of the way it was goofy who killed numerous heartless liu bei praised him and offered him to be one of his generals…..
Back to Donald duck now…..
They had reached half the way to changan but suddenly an army wearing yellow started marching towards them
Man 1: oh no!
Man2: yellow turban remnants
Man 1: ship mode now!
TO BE CONTINUED
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Long chapter huh? Well there's more! keep reading it's a double release which is double trouble!
R&R!
Please review because its what keeps me going! Because
Few reviews few readers low length and less releases
Many reviews Many Readers great length and many releases
And by the way ill give you the calculation for my releases:
Free Author + Many ideas + good reviews + hooked reader NEW CHAPTER!
Busy Author + Few ideas + bad reviews + few readers NO CHAPTERS!